zaya ss: Soulmates, last chapter

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: Little_Johnny

well atually this was a rubbish comment by me...😆😆
leave it...I want ur help will u???😕🤓

What dear, tell me

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Aisha Kapoor

@DirectionerAF

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#602

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

What dear, tell me

You and I😳😳

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RUHANIKAA

@RUHANIKAA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#603

It was superbbb !!!👏👏👏 lovely ending😳😳...fabulously written👍🏼... great job⭐️⭐️⭐️...thanks a ton for such a beautiful story🤗🤗... loved each and every chapter❤️ ...thank u so much for pm..... i'm really gonna miss this ss a lott😭...

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Flower

@ZFA_Flower

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Posted: 10 years ago

#604

I am very emotional now

This update is

Marvellous

Magnificent

Excellent

Fabulous

Fantastic

Outstanding

Wonderful

Splendid

Spectacular

Bravo

This story couldn't get more perfect ending than this

This is the best update u have written till now

Loved and Enjoyed this rollercoaster-ride journey

And I love travelling and this was one memorable

~My favourite scene

Passage no.3,5 and last

"What is this Zain,", " Mom I ll handle this" zain went to her room. She was sitting on the corner of bed ". Osman, suraiya, shabhana and Gulam to followed and they stood outside the room secretly..spying them..

And

" Zain instantly answered her EARTH WORM" Aliya looked at him angrily .. " So u knew answer, they y did u answer white ants first" he turned her to mirror and pointed at her angry face.. " that's y, I want u to laugh...so that's y answered White ants". " well I have more answers, but I ll not tell now itself ll store for.our future, when ever u dnt talk to me I ll reveal one one answer, and u have to to talk to me ", Aliya gave little bigger smile this time pressing her lips trying to hold her laugh... " u can laugh, I have no problem" finally she gave a complete smile..

" u know Zain, I thought of changing myself bcz u dnt like my behaviour, but u were ready to marry someone else.. I HATE YOU.. for this".

And

Suddenly Aliya broke the Hug angrily. ". Now what happened" asked zain getting scared. " After marrying me u have to remove those pics from ur room's wall"

" What pics?" zain asked. " I saw ur pics with ur Girl friends on ur Rooms wall".

" oh, those photos, ha ha I ll remove, so u r jealous..., wait a minute,how do u know abt it..." zain asked getting shocked. " I went into ur room", " HOW".

" through window" she answered him casually moving his hand fingers...

Zain was super shocked, " u climbed through pipe and then went through window into my room" " yes, my child hood habit, I do that when ever I come home lately to escape from my mom's chanter" she said winking at him. " But Y MY SUPER LADY" he asked her placing his both hands on her shoulder, " bcz I was missing u, I dnt have ur pic too.. so I thought of steeling a pic from ur room" she said resting her head on his shoulder... he bent down to kiss her but Aliya stopped him placing her hand in between them..." u r shy?" zain asked in disbelief... she moved away from him.. " Shy my foot, u cannot kiss me now, u ll have to wait.." " Ufff, I HATE U My BITCH" " I HATE U TOO MY YAWNIE " she hugged him tightly and gave a small kiss on his cheek." hey dear, how did u know my home address" asked zain moving little away from her..." first u tell me how did u know my home address?"

"I asked that travel agency, he didn't give then after so much pleading he gave me"

" ha ha u r such a phattu Zain lol... u could have asked Ayat right, I got ur address from rizwaan..". she teased him to become brainey.. he just smiled to her .

"Okay my dear SPIDER WOMAN, come let's go and inform our parents." SPIDER WOMAN, stop giving names atleast now zain," " Awww that's tough my dear chatter box" CHATTER BOX, U... she started running behind him, after little struggle she caught hold of his t shirt and bent his head down to beat him...zain was struggling to escape.. shabhana, suraiya, Osman and Gulaam witnessed this. they stopped fighting stood quietly infront of them, feeling embarassed. They just burst into laughing concluding them as two ODD SOULMATES.

~My favourite dialog

Zain shook his head " let me finish dear" "" DEAR", u called me dear, but u call me Bitch every time..." U r my DEAR BITCH". he came towards her and rested his head on her Lap.

And why did u send the PM so late but still its the last chap so I want say goodbye to this ss while being angry with u and I think u must be busy with your exams at least u send me PM

I will miss this ss very much but I will miss u more

But u will have to come back soon

And I will be waiting for your new ff search for happiness

And one more thing congratulations on completing this ss

U see I am also a chatter box just like u

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Anagha

@Ana_rockz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#605

Holla madhu

Mai aa gaye 😎

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Anagha

@Ana_rockz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Nayi tareekha hi I love bolne kaaa😳, sab seekhlo hamare soulmates sey
Hey I seriously Bahuth shareef yaar,😛, I cannot pen down guttery things, this updates itself is a big challenge for.me, I tried so much... to make it romantic ,im not good at that u know I'm only chatter

I ll miss u too, dear... we chat in this.thread, so that our soulmates ll be alive😆
Got it, y Aliya got angry, Bechari, she wants to express but he always mocks her, how can she
Yeah that pipe scene and ants scene totally unexpected, in the last moment I added it
Thoda kit kit wali confession hoga hi na isliye,
Think abt their parents poor,they are scratching their heads...😆
Thank u so much for biggg lovely comment my darling
Love u tooo🤗 I ll miss this.zaya a lot,
Thank god u reached home safely😆

lol naye tareeke ka I love u

Mai abhi voh sab seek khe kya karungi 😛

U're chatter is not annoying but like classical music 😉

This chapter ws really good u completed ur challenge successfully

Lol their parents would not be able to make sense out if anything that happend between Zaya

I read ur updates more carefully then my school books 😆

Even I will miss this Zaya a lot

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: neenzz
Res, thanks for the pm :)
Unressing

Sorry dear, thora zyada he late ho gayi hn, actually hamara achanak orlando aanay ka plan bun gaya and I couldn't read it, car may mene socha read ker leti hn, but mere phone say already songs lagaye that and battery was running low, so I had to wait :(
Soulmates made me laugh when I was really upset and crying, I will miss it terribly :(

This last update, just like all the past ones, was awesome 👏

Zain and everyone else were confused when Aaliya said that she won't marry him because he was ready to marry just about any girl, but I got the hint, and danced with my hands excitedly... my point telling u all this: so that u know this is how much u affect us, and we love reading ur works, so keep writing ❤️

Sorry for.late reply kiran, aaj ka din bahuth karaabh thaa, my brother took me out with him, going out is not a problem, I was applying oil, and he was forcing me to come, he didn't even give lil time...he dragged me along with him... he said only for nursery to buy plants bu t u know, he took me to shopping mall, for lunch to a restaurant. Stupid, I was messy, looking not less than a servant,

I cursed myself for believing him, but I used scarff to cover my hair😆, but still that flavour of looking like servant was there through out day... okay here ends my chatter

Awww I affect u so much... thank u so much dear, even I ll miss this zaya, it helped during our tunnel.a lot... thank u so much for lovely comment darling

I'll miss u in this thread 😭😛