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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee

that was very cute

and funny
continue soon

thanks a lot!!!!! btw i did'nt get ur name!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

very nice update!!!😳
loved it❤️
please continue soon...😛

thank u sooo sooo sooo much ruhaanika
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Posted: 10 years ago
Here u all go lamba wala update!!! dude isse lamba nahi hoga m not jobless na...have many other work to do * winks* heheheh😃
THIS CHAPTER IS DEDICATED TO ANAGHA, PRIYA AND" HAFSA"
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ZAIN'S POV

"very good" I added to the hectic situation of ours .

" very good ...very good , r u crazy ...wats very good in all of this ...aaah this is all so irritating !!!! huh very good' ..." the voice now started ringing like an unpleasant tune in my ear ...

" now will u plzz shut up MKB..."I screamed upon her...but she was MKB she would'nt keep quiet ...instead she started arguing with me...

" ya so now it's me who should keep quiet ...ya right ...i m the reason for all this na ...now blame it all on me ...fine!!!"...aah wat the hell is this mkb's problem yaar ...

" acha fine ...I m sorry" I said

" ya ya ur saying as ur doing a big favour on me by saying srry..." she argued

" ok ...ok so much attitude" I said in a low tone

"wat??? Wat did u just say..."

"nothing..nothing...now v have to decide ,where to spend the night??"actually to scare her more, I stressed on the word night..

night????" she said as her eyes widened ...

" ya ,night " ii claimed coming a bit closer to her...

"b-but... wh-why...like v can just stop in a hotel too na?" she questioned ...at clear moment I could see a little nervousness in her eyes ...most probably she'd never been wid a guy in this situation ...i had figured that out...now I have 2 options either her scare her more or just console her this moment ...i cant just scare her ...this thinking I never had for mkb ...so in particular m not leaving any chance to scare her and so I went on.. ...

" v can't stop in a hotel cause there is no evidence that there would be some inn here somewhere n there is no mobile connection also na..." bfore she could continue I took her hand in mine and said " isn't this exciting mkb ...we r stuck in the middle of nno where with no mobile connection and no one to disturb us...unique na!!"

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AALIYA'S POV

" v can't stop in a hotel cause there is no evidence that there would be some inn here somewhere n there is no mobile connection also na..." " isn't this exciting mkb ...we r stuck in the middle of nno where with no mobile connection and no one to disturb us...unique na!!"

I hear him say ...ya ALLAH save me ...I don't find his intensions good!!!!! ...haaa how dare he hold my hand,at that very moment a shiver ran through my spine ...i guess cause this ws the very first time a guy means I ... I don't knw exactly hw to express this this is sooo weird ... wait ...wait a sec did he just say no one to disturb us ...dude wat do u mean ...ALLAH koi na koi toh aa hi jaye disturb karne aa hi jaaye mujhe kucch theek nahi lag raha hai !!!!!!

ZAIN'S POV

Ok zain control ...fu** I fell like to burst out laughing ...god look at her she z sooo scared ...aaah can't control ...and I burst out laughing

"hahahahhahahahahhahh...mkb just look at urself ahahahhah u look ...so...so scared...haahaha I can't believe this ..." I screamed onto her then stopped laughing for a second but as soon as I saw her face I burst out in laughter all again..

Now she was more red ...she stared at me as if she would eat me up right now...I neared her and whispered something into her ear and started running and she chasing me ...

AALIYA'S POV

He neared me and whispered " I wished v both were locked in a room ,then I would have loved to see ur expressions" aaah locked wid him nnnooo ...hw dare he ...I looked at him but he...he ws gone ...i chased him till v both got tired ...if there would be anyone watching us this way the would think v r some 5 year old children chasing each other on the road at midnight ...ok buy now v both sat down...yup literally sat down , inhaled a deep breath , looked at each other and burst out laughing ...i guess this ws the very first time I loved , I mean I liked zain's company ...when ever I m wid him I always felt like dude this is the real me!!!! I mean I lived my life to the fullest ...enjoy every moment with him...but nature had a different plan , that very moment it started raining ...like very heavily as everything ws already planned it for us ...

" mkb jaldi chalo ab kitni tez barish ho rahi hai " I hear him say ...

ZAIN'S POV

Y isn't she replying dude , wats wrong wid her ????i turn around to see...to see ... my so called immature cousin started to take the full advantage of the rain ...she behaved like a small child jumping in the water...feeling every drop of water falling on her...her t-shirt and jeans hugged her body ...revealing her tremendous figure ...uufff never knew she is that hot!!!!! But the thing which caught my attention ws her smile which seemed to be cutest than ever before ...yup she did enjoy her life!!!!! I smiled at her like a dumb fool ...she came to me and...and pulled me into this rain...and yup it was an awesome feeling ...

I looked back at her she seemed gorgeous. She to looked at me , I caught her hand and neared her...a little a little more...

" zain ..."I hear her say ...

"hmmm"I reply

" I -I wanted to ask u something " she said in a low tone

"wat?????" i said

" I -I hope v are not going to kiss" there ws a minute of silence ...then I looked in her eyes and she in mine v both looked in each others eyes for a second and v burst out in laughter...

" never ...m not going through so bad days also that I might kiss u ...now lets go back in the car mkb"

"sure ...lets go!!!!"

Soon v started talking and did'nt know when we both felt asleep ...don knw wen...

MORNING 6:00 AM

I ws in my deep slumber ...when I ws awaken by the ringtone of my mobile ...I rubbed my eyes while holding the mobile in my hand...god it's mom's phone I soon realized ...but there ws no network rite...god knows hw dis happened ...I said 2 myself picking up the phone..

Zain ; heya mom!!!!! Wats up ...

There ws no reply

Mom...u there???mom...silence ws all that I could hear..."ye toh tufaan ke aane se pehle ka sannaata hai" I thought 2 myself..

"R u crazy zain ...where r u ...is aaliya with u????...if she is...is she fine...where is she????pass the phone to her..." Huh these mom's ...but the thing that I ws totally depressed ws AALIYA???? Like I knw u worry abt aaliya ...but even m there, u can even ask abt me rite!!!!!m alive...not dead so soon ...god m still sleepy, ofcourse it's 4 in the morning ..oh srry where ws I ...ya aaliya...AALIYA...ufff... n then I explained the whole freaking story to mom ...in detail n by detail I seriously mean detail which took around 45 minutes !!!!! for a moment I wondered that hw much the mobile bill would cause...n now when mom started screaming on me ...I so wished the battery ws down ...but no and as soon as I ended the phone call the battery ws dead ...like seriously did the battery wait for mom to shout at me!!!!uugh ...now I'll have to wake up MKB too ...so I turned up to her...i heard her murmur something in her sleep so I decided to go a little close

The next thing I heard gave me a complete shock!!!!

" I LUV U ZAIN ...I LOVE U A LOT!!!!"

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COMMENT KARNA MAT BHOOLNA!!!!!

N ONCE AGAIN CONGRATZ PRIYA !!!!!!👏

Edited by zaya..... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mee first 🥳
Aww u dedicated this to me that is so sweet 😳
I have one word for this update A - M - A - Z - I -N -G
Dude it was excellent I really really loved it
Itna Zain scaring Aaliya was so funny
I can imagine Aaliya 's face 🤣
Then Aaliya chasing Zain was hilarious
They remind me of Tom and Jerry
Aaliya enjoying d rain like always 😊
Zain never knew Aaliya was soo hot 😆
Aaliya 's dialogue telling v are not gonna kiss ri8 was 🤣
Suri ka outburst 😆
I sympathize with Zain I have been in that situation
Omg Aaliya confessed her love to Zain she was in sleep but also she confessed 😃
Tumne itni mehnat se lambha update diya isliye lambha wala comment
Thank u soo much for this " lambha wala " update
I really couldn't have asked for more
Thanks for d pm dear
Continue soon
Love u 🤗
Edited by anaghazaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
This update is super super super super super duper AWESOME
AMAZING
SUPERB
FABULOUS
I really really really really really love it❤️...tooo good!
Zain scaring aliya😆

" isn't this exciting mkb ...we r stuck in the middle of nno where with no mobile connection and no one to disturb us...unique na!!" 🤣
Zain holding aliya's hand😆
Zain and Aliya running in the middle of the road like 5 year old kids!😛
Aliya having fun in rain...zain tumhay ab pata chala how hot aliya is?😲
Aliya's question about kiss was my favorite...superb! 👏
Awww...becharay zain ko suri ki daant sunni pari...what an outburst!
Even zain's phone wanted him to listen to suri's out burst
OMG...aliya said I LOVE YOU ZAIN...pls dont make it zayn (singer)
Loved the whole update
This lamba lamba wala reply is for ur lamba lamba wala update
Update next chap ASAP
N yeah thanks for the dedications! Soo sweet
Btw my name is HAFSA!
Edited by zaya.harshika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Unress...
Ok from the start done...loved the KITKIT everytime it was awesome...first day of zain's college...and his wink😆...

SURAIYA love her...and hmmm...NAHAD ki shadi plans nice start...and yes that movie watching part, ZAIN ALIYA jogging part, ALIYA getting ready..fire accident part all parts were KITKIT filled loved it...

Ok CHAP 9...awww...ALIYA enjoying the rain...and dragging ZAIN with her sweet...and finally ILU ZAIN...OMG...ok will wait for the next chapter for that...

I liked that SURI and ZAIN phone talking part...it made me😆

Cont soon...loving it so far...
Thanks for the pm...😊
Edited by 786ahf_bi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice update
Getting interesting update soon
Thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing part !!
Awesome
Fantastic
Loved it
Omg...Aliya saes i love u to zain in sleep :o
Continue soon !!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

LONG RES DUDE...

Have to go from the start...

i don't mind take ur time ...i'll be waiting 4 ur comment later!!!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvAaliyah

Very nice update

Getting interesting update soon
Thanks for the PM 😊

thank u so very much ...
welcm 😳

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