Tumhe toh rona bhi nahi aata!- A Drabble - Page 2

Originally posted by: vinu127

thank you sumi..

though i did not like it..tum jaise writers toh koi critisism aur suggessions do yaar

BF ..meri jaanu ..koi criticism kare ya na kar mei hu karne keliye..!!!😉😉

Originally posted by: ...Renu...

Note: mene phele hi kaha tha tuje ki meri criticism bohat baari hogai ..but you didn't listen tho ab pugado..!!

vinu bura mat manna ...but the drabble is not up to vinu's standards...issmein wo vinu ka super solid thadak naazar nahi aarahi hai ...it was just like some newbie's writing ..iss mei awesome ..super amazing ..rocking shocking poking ..tho nahi keha sakthi but all i can say is it was good..but not as good as amazing as vinu's drabble should be..yaad hai jab mene iss scene ko suggest kiya tha tho tune kya kaha tha ki after reading your drabble it will make die out of laughters when ever i watch the scene next time ..but that didn't happen ..laugh bohat durrki baat hai i didn't even smile.. ye overpressured hone ki wajese huva ya phir mene bohat zada expect kiya tha tum se?? may be ye sab meri galat thi i shouldn't have Tortured you for the drabble..sorry if i sounded rude by as you PC .. i have to be truthful to you ..thats why i told it out what i felt ..!!!

-Ur personal critic..

Originally posted by: SabrinaMalik

Hahahaa🤣🤣🤣

Good One! 👍🏼thank u

Wow, ZaYa as HarshIka and vice-versa! Itne zabarbast ideas aate kahan hai tumhare paas? bas shipper dil kuch bhi soch leta hai!😆😆😆

Mind Blowing! Maza Aa Gaya.thank you😳

HarshIka's Kitkit. lol yeah!😛

And director unhe 'monkey' bulata hai 😆wahi toh hai yeh dono in my drabbles😆

Harsh calls Pree a 'buri actress'? 😲ha... 😛😛

LOL! All in all, I just loved itt ❤️thank u

Aise aur bhi drabbles likhe hai tumne kya?na..this is 1st one😃

And Tusi Kitthe Jaa Rahe Ho 12th tak?shirdi...and then pune... my councelling on 10th at IISERP

Originally posted by: simran422

Awww! Bechari Pree..

awesome update..

loved it vinu ❤️

Originally posted by: ZayaShiz

Mummy i m lateee...

res..!!ur saying this? kal avi meri jaan lelegi!

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unres..!!

Buttercup..i torchured u?😭Of COURSE I DID..!! thank god u realised

ye hamari torchure ka hi to kamal hai..pages bharke torchure karne k baad hi tune update kiya...hayyy...kitni energy tujhpar waste ki hai DAY1 SE HUMNE...tab jaakr ye update mila...!! Phew...hamari mehnat ki koi kadar nahi hai tujhe? abb iski vajah se i will not be able to update fanaa till 13th! uska kya?

*pouts*

Lekin...

Teri lone Dayan khush ho gayi..i know short tha...drabble aur kitni lambi hogi be?

but awesomeee tha..isliye iss baar maaf kiya...chal jhooti

Yaar i can't believe to itne dino tak jaa rahi hai..ab rona aa raha hai...not glycerine for me..sacchi ab kya karungi without you...bohot suna suna lagega mujhe...lagta hai tere liye DQ hi sahi naam hai! main 5 saal ke liye nahi 5 din ke liye jaa rahi hoon!and avi, renu,aasta,tee..sab hai na! yaad bhi nahi aayegi i promise

I WILL MISS U MY BUTTERCUP...PLZ JALDI AANA

I have a good feeling regarding this-Score 1/0. Bas dekhte jao Mr.Arora! aaj tumhari khair nahi!

AND I LOVEEE U...!!!Sorry for torchure..abhi k liye pause rakhti hu...!!❤️u better do😛😆

Originally posted by: divikash

achaa tha yaar...seriously i guess toturing you was not a bad idea at all...result tho very good ayihena👍🏼👏torture nahi kiya hota toh der se hi sahi, excellent aata!*pouts*

hope you come soon and continue it...will be waiting for next one...take care😊ha.. will update when i come back😃

aur humara tuje torture karna humara faarz hai...is kaliye thank you mat bola...it was pleasure doing it🤣dikh hi raha hai!😛