Tumhe toh rona bhi nahi aata!- A Drabble

Hey guys!

Bahut..matlab bahut hi zyaada torture sehne ke baad, mujhe yeh likhna hi pada!

Torture kisne kiya? MA(Renu) and dayan(ZayaShiz) ne! like too much torture!Aneesha aur Divikash ne kuch kam nahi kiya BTW

Iss drabble ki basic concept kya hai, that you can see here

Baad me ek aur thread bana lungi. But this is the first one before I go on a long break.

Scene: Episode number 16. Aliya hitting zain and zain hugging her to comfort her(when aliya's nikah breaks) the side shot

"Harshad Preetika ready? Scene clear hai na? Aliya should hit zain saying I hate you aur zain use hug karta hai. Clear na?"asked Maan. This was a very important scene and he did not want these 2 monkeys to start their own kitkit again!

Harsh n Pree looked at each other and then at Maan n nodded their heads in affirmative. I doubt if that would happen though!

"ok silence! Roll camera, and...action!"you know who said it yaar!still, Maan sir said it

Pree started hitting Harshad...tried to but he held her had even before she could hit him. she gave him a questioning look and then looked at maan. "Cut! Kya kar rahe ho tum dono?"

"sir yeh mujhe kuch karne de hi nahi raha hai" said Pree as a matter of fact!

"sir main toh Aliya ko rok raha hoon zain ko maar ne se" "lekin maar ne se pehle hi?" "abb maarne baad roku kya? Phir rokne keliye rahegi hi kya?" "lekin marungi nahi toh..."

"stop it guys! Harsh, yaad hai na tumhe? Use dialogue bhi bolna hai! Tum resist karogi but you will let her hit you! And pree you will not hit him hard alright? Abb jaldi glycerin do Pree ko."

She put the glycerin in her eyes and contorts her face because of that burning sensation it caused in her eyes! As much as he hated her, seeing her in pain was the last thing he would want in the world! He just looked away. He was definitely not going to tell her that!

"ready?" they nodded "action"

Pree started hitting him saying "I hate you zain!i hate you" and he 1^st held her left hand with his right hand and his left hand went near her shoulder and he pulled her into a hug "cut! Good one guys. Next Harshad tumhara close up shot hai. Hum shot set karte hai tab tak aap dono break lo"

Both of them were relieved! He saw her rubbing her wrist. He had held her a little too tight the first time and the bangle like jewellery on her hand had hurt her. he forgot the fact that his own cheek was hurting him because of the impact the embroidery on her ghungat had on his face and went to her.

"massage kar rahe ho?" "nahi khaana khila rahi hoon" she said irritated "pehle ghau deta hai phir uspe namak chidakta hai!" she muttered under her breath but he did hear it and for some reason, he did not like the sounding of it "tum me toh itni tameez hai nahi ki thank you bolo, main sorry bolne aaya toh itni tevar? "oh really? Tum sorry bolne aaye the 23 years se jaanti hoon tujhe! Mujhe acche se pata hai ki aise koi irada nahi thi tumhara! And I'm sure mere haath tumne jaan poochke zor se dabaya! Aur kyu kahoo tumhe thank you?" now he was irritated. That's it! Enough! But what will he tell her? but you know Harshad is born intelligent "main kya karta? Tumhe toh thik se rona bhi nahi aata hai! bechara glycerin pe taras aagaya mujhe! Aur tum hi toh kehti ho. Humaare tu tu main main baad me. Pehle show hai! Toh maine socha ki abb show ko itni buri actress se bacha toh nahi sakta. Toh kyu na sach me rula doon? Aur kaam kar gaya na? pehle thik se rona seekho! Maami ki bhanji!" he said and left a fuming Pree behind!

Score 1/0. Bas dekhte jao Mr.Arora! aaj tumhari khair nahi!

bas pagal chudails and lone Dayan? now excuse me till 12th! vapis aane ke baad next ones dungi! alright?

P.s.Sorry! No PMs for this one😭 next time se PM karungi Pakka👍🏼Iss baar maafkardo..pleej *kaan pakadke*

this is the my 1st try with drabbles so i might turn out to be horrible..pls give me time and suggessions so that i can improve..please

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Note: mene phele hi kaha tha tuje ki meri criticism bohat baari hogai ..but you didn't listen tho ab pugado..!!

vinu bura mat manna ...but the drabble is not up to vinu's standards...issmein wo vinu ka super solid thadak naazar nahi aarahi hai ...it was just like some newbie's writing ..iss mei awesome ..super amazing ..rocking shocking poking ..tho nahi keha sakthi but all i can say is it was good..but not as good as amazing as vinu's drabble should be..yaad hai jab mene iss scene ko suggest kiya tha tho tune kya kaha tha ki after reading your drabble it will make die out of laughters when ever i watch the scene next time ..but that didn't happen ..laugh bohat durrki baat hai i didn't even smile.. ye overpressured hone ki wajese huva ya phir mene bohat zada expect kiya tha tum se?? may be ye sab meri galat thi i shouldn't have Tortured you for the drabble..sorry if i sounded rude by as you PC .. i have to be truthful to you ..thats why i told it out what i felt ..!!!

-Ur personal critic..

Originally posted by: ZayaHarshika

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OMG that was superb vinu 👏 👏