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Posted: 11 years ago
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At the shoot:
Harshad with gunjan eating maggi and talking,Preetika sees it and is very jealous
She goes home
Harshad:Director why aren't we starting the shoot???
Director:Pree has gone!!
harshad:what?????I am mean why???
Director:she didn't told anyone here why she is going??
Harshad:I know why she has gone...ok then we will shoot tommorow with her

Harshad goes back home and thinks about pree and thought that she might be angry because he was spending more time with Gunjan(nafeesa)
He quickly calls pree, but pree doesn't picks up the phone as she is crying and is very sad
he calls again and this pree picks it up...

Harshad:Pree why did went back from the shoot??
Preetika:What is your problem???You continue the hoot without me
harshad understood and heard her crying
she cutted the phone

Next morning Pree came to the shoot

At the shoot:
Harshad:Pree!!How r u??
Pree ignored him
They both shoted all the scenes together and when all the scenes were over pree packed her items and was on the way while Harshad came and stopped her...

To be continued...
Guys this is my first os 😊
pls pls comment
will update soon😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all welcome to the forum dear...
I hope u enjoy here...

jealous pree and harshad will manofy her...
Really loved it...
Continue soon... 😃 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome to the forum and I like the start of yours OS it's cute please continue I'm curious to know how he would manofy her
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lol amazing. update soon😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey! awesome start!
really adore your work! continue soon!
also not to be rude i prefer we should not write about real people.
i mean to say its really nice that we all picture harshad and preetika together just as we picture zain and aaliya. but writing should only be based upon reel characters. honestly, i too want them together and really love your os! but this might hurt too!
it was just a point i wanted to state.
hope i didnt hurt you.
welcome to the forum and have a nice time here!
thanks a lot and take care.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Her is the second part
I am sorry if this post hurts anybody,
hope u like it

Harshad:WHY pree r u doing this to me???
Preetika:what am i doing??
Harshad:Why r u ignoring me ??
Preetika:I'm not!!!
She starts walking away from their...but harshad holds her wrist and twists it behind...and grabs her tightly...
Harshad:Sorry!!😔
Preetika:Its ok
he leaves her hand and asks her politely...
Harshad:Would u like to go a date with me??
Pree started blushing😳
Preetika:yes!
Harshad:Ok then after tommorw's shooting we will go to a date
PReetika:Ok,Bye
HArshad: bye


Next part coming soon till then...
Precap:HArshad and preetika are walking hands in hands on road and it starts raining!
pls pls comment!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres..
hmm...u r going good!!but a little fast..slow down dear😆
n yah..ur os is awesome!!!😃
Edited by ZayaShiz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi I only want to suggest one thing to you. You have made this decision to write an FF on Real life people but please limit this creative writing of yours to the forum and do not bring it to twitter facebook or any other media portal.
It's fine when we talk about and ship Harshika in the forum but when it goes outside it just becomes idiotic and well we saw the result of that yesterday..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramita94

Hi I only want to suggest one thing to you. You have made this decision to write an FF on Real life people but please limit this creative writing of yours to the forum and do not bring it to twitter facebook or any other media portal.

It's fine when we talk about and ship Harshika in the forum but when it goes outside it just becomes idiotic and well we saw the result of that yesterday..

ya u right i have just keeped this to beintehaa forum !!
so don't worry
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow dis is amazing continue

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