The First of Many - Zaya OS - Link to previous OS updated - Page 4

Originally posted by: MissAsian

I love this
u're a fantastic writer

Originally posted by: sneha_kajen

A Beautiful Hawt yet a cute OS ..loved it..very well written and ya definitely would like to read continuation of this if possible..make it a TS please :)

Originally posted by: Shiiya

This was amazing, way too hot!

Looking forward to reading more from you :)

Originally posted by: ReemaRani

I was so disappointed when it ended!! I swear I felt like I was in the room with them hahaha. I'm blushing just thinking about what I read LOL. Great job!! I swear I wish you continued!

Originally posted by: jazmeen

Loved it

First I thought you have planned to make them consumuted their marriage lol

Loved the kiiss

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved it, so sizzling hot

Originally posted by: zainaliya-12

It's an amazing os, i loved it😊

Originally posted by: ava23

Awesome OS but nw my imagination is going WILD 🤪

Originally posted by: Silver_19

OMG what a sizzling hot OS. I loved your build up with Aaliya still trying to sneak away but unable to resist him. Oh and the kiss☺️ U described it so well. Awesome, you should write OS like this more often😳

Originally posted by: Neha07

First of all it's good to c you after such a looong time...Ninjay as @Ammie calls you But thanks to @Vinu I know your name now - Gunjan..am i right?

Wow a HAWT one...beautifully written.

Hope this OS is 'The First of Many' coming from you...