The First of Many - Zaya OS - Link to previous OS updated

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Ravinanaik
awsome

😳

Quote

vinu

@vinu127

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: NinjaInPyjamas

Di bolegi toh mat padhiyo...baccho ke liye nahi hai😆

ZaYa romance ke liye no umr ka bandhan..

koi bhi ho! padho Beintehaa!😆

hai na DI😛

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -Ammie-
RES...lemme see wat ur upto 😉

----------------------------------------------------

☺️☺️☺️

2 cents? i shall give you way more than that!😆
you need to write more of this, seriously! Only you can pull of this besharmi so well 😛
you know na how long it took me to get through this...u had me out of breath! to say it was hot is a bit of an understatement...
you wrote so flawlessly, it was a treat to read this man...
you have penned down Zain's frustration and Aaliya's shy yet fiery nature so well! i loved it to bits and pieces!
Ninja, for the 2 billionth time...do us a favour and join the creatives team...and yes we are willing to shift time slots 😛
i don't know if i shud ask for part 2 tho...it might set me to flames...😆
you know how pleased i am with the mention of the red chaddi, unzipping and abs tracing na :')
wonderful piece of writing...dude you HAVE to write more...pretty pls 😳😆

I love the first line of your review 😆😆

It is an OS!! I am not writing another part! Plus this was long, you dissatisfied creature😆

I wish I could join the CVs too...HarshIka will kick me out though😆 Also...I knew you were fond of the red chaddi...the other two I had no idea, you fantasy-driven person🤣

Quote

NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: vinu127
ZaYa romance ke liye no umr ka bandhan..
koi bhi ho! padho Beintehaa!😆

hai na DI😛

Bigadne ki guarantee meri nahi😆

Quote

NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: katmaan
Beautifully written ...loved it

Thanks😳

Quote

mridula

@-Minion-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

its a beautiful and hot one.besharam and despo zain and shy aliya.want part two.plz continue.and welcome back.miss u and u'r posts.

Quote

ash91

@ash91

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

**rubs eyes** Ninjay, you write stuff?? I'll be back after reading it

Unres

Wow ninjay! This was hot!!!! Well-written..👏 Looking forward to see more from you😳

Edited by ash91 - 11 years ago

Quote

MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

I love this
u're a fantastic writer

Quote

-Sneha16-

@-Sneha16-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

A Beautiful Hawt yet a cute OS ..loved it..very well written and ya definitely would like to read continuation of this if possible..make it a TS please :)