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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
nice update
it was awsm
continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Couldn't control myself so wrote it
Chapter 3
Zain:bas aaliya kitna aur shakh pls stop. (Pushes her ansd picks the keys of cars...and moves out of the room )
Aaliya:zain zain...suno...zain (aaliya followed him but he didn't listen ...and left the house )
Aaliya was sitting in the room...waiting for zain ...2hours had passed ...zain entered ..he was still angry
Aaliya:zain (she tried talking but zain took his clothes ...and went inside... The .washroom to change...aaliya burst in tears...zain came and slept ignoring aaliya... Aaliya sitting on the bed still crying ..after she also slept weeping ...zain was awake...the moment he felt that aaliya has slept he covered her with blanket and slept next morning he got up and saw aaliya sleeping peacefully...hugging his hand and her one leg on his leg ...he slowly tried to move but aaliya pulled him closer in sleep...he got lost in her beauty and slowly pushed strands of hair behind her face and caressed her face ...aaliya also ...got up she...saw near to her.her heart beats started racing both of them had forgotten about their fight...zain got closer to aaliya... )
Aaliya whispered :zain
(Zain got back to senses ...he got up ...and went away ...leaving aaliya ...depressed )



Chapter 3b will upload soon .. Do leave back ur comments ...I motivates me to write more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
its awesome...
read it before ur pm...
but thank you sooo much for your pm...
really appreciate it...
and lovely update...
u don't need to wait for today's episode to write...
plzz continue soon...
i cant wait for ur next update...
thanks a lot...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
hope Zain finds out the truth soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
nice part.plz make zain belive aliya.waiting for next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Chapter 3b
Zain left for office without talking to aaliya ...and aaliya was all sad ...because zain was ignoring her ...



In office
Around lunch time zain was walking in the corridor talking to someone on phone
Zain:je je ha actually Bhai office nahi aaye and dad ki tabiyet theek nahi hai ...I will do the work don't worry (and he notices someone in usmans cabin

Usmans cabin
Usman: je mein waha pahuch raha hu ...nahi nahi aap said KO kuch mat Karna plz
...
Zain:dad aap yaha (sees a bag in usmans hands )
Zain:aur yeh bag ...aur kisse phone pe baat kar rahe the ...kisko kya nahi karna

Usman :kuch nahi I was just talking to one client ...mujhe abhi Jana hai kuch zaroori kaam hai
Zain:dad maine chalta hu aapke saath ...aapki tabiyat theek nahi hai
Usman:nahi nahi zain tum yaha raho ...mein chala jaounga ...
Zain:dad ...aur bacho KO kaun lene jayenga ghar mein koi nahi hai (usman looked upset. ...)
Usman : uhhh woh aaliya leke aayengi
Zain:theek hai (zain felt something is fishy ...so he decided to follow usman
Usman was continuously talking to someone on phone ..he sat in the car and zain sat in his car and followed usmans car)

Usmans car
Usman :aaliya mein waha pahuch raha hu...tum bhi aa jao ...
Aaliya:jee mamu has aalah kare said theek ho...

(Usmans car enters an old mill )
Zain:yeah dad yaha kya karne aaye kuch garbad hai hope San theek ho ...(he sees aaliyas car)
Zain:aaliya ki car...aaliys bhi yahi hai




In side the mill
Usman :aaliya bete chale andar
Aaliya :jee mamu(usman and aaliya enter the mill to see Mir khan standing ...with saif in his hands)
Usman:Mir khan ... Said KO mujhe de do ...aur pause like jao
Mir khan :ha ha ha ...usman abdullah ...darr Gaye ...darr mir khan sent darr Gaye and pulss saifs hair

Saif :aaa chahci dadu...
Mir khan :paise de do. .phele phir said tumhare pass ayenga.
Usman:yeh raha bag le lo. (mir khan takes the bag but instead of giving saif
Calls out )
Mir khan :aao tum log...(two three goons comes out having hockey sticks )
Aaliya:mir khan tumne toh kaha tumhe pause chayiye yeah kya hai

Mir khan:kal subhe ki news ...usman abdullah and aaliya zain abdullahas body found near ...a creek ...kisne kiya hoga yeh murder..
Usman:mir khan yeh sahi nahi hai ...(the goons were above to hit aaliya )
Aaliya:bachao
(And realizes... A strong body coming in between her and the stick...yes it was zain...her world ...zain side hugged aaliya ...and held the hockey stick in one hand the goon trying to loosen his grip )
Zain:ek baar mujhe bola hota yaha aane se phele princess...aur theek ho
(Zain inquired)
Aaliya:hmmm (someone hit zain from behind )
Aaliya shouted :zaain
Zain:main theek hu tum aur dad jao yaha se main said KO leke aata hu
Usman:par zain
Zain:dad please jao yaha se aap aaliya ...jao ...jao ...go main said KO leke aata hu ...
Aaliya:zain
Zain:aaliya go ..
(Aaliya and usman starts moving towards their car ...when they hear saif shouting chahci chachi ...usman takes a stone from near by and goes towards mir khan and throws a stone on mir khans head ...aaliya takes saif carries him they start going towards the gate ...zain busy fighting with the goons ..saw aaliya usman going)
Aaliya: mamu aap saif KO leke jao. . .mein zain KO leke aati hu. ...
Usman:par beta (and aaliy didn't wait to listen and started going towards zain she heard a gun shot...she turned around to see barkat aiming a gun at usman )
Barkat :usman abdullah ...aapne mere aabuu KO Mara aaj mein aapka KO khatam kardungi ..khatam...
Usman:yeh kya keh rahi ho beta ...mein hu tumhra abbu ...barkat beta
Barkat:mein koi barkat nahi hu main bobby mir khan
hu bobby mir Khan
Usman:kya
Barkat: jee aur aapko yeh bobby aaj Marne waali hai ...ek do teen
(Aaliya runs towards usman ) aaliya:mamu ...(the gun is fired)
(Zain wounded on places on hearing the two gun shots. ..runs outside the mill ...the two most important persons of his life were in danger... He was going through a mental turmoil ...not wanting to loose neone...running with all his might he saw aaliya fallen on the ground and usman sitting next to her ...holding her )
Zain:aaliyaaa (zain shouted running towards her)

Chapter 4 aaliya ...saved or not
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
omg..Aliya is shot...
Zain, chodna mat uss Bobby ko...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
its awesome...
bilkul perfect waala part hai...
bas aaliya bacch jaye..
sooo sweet of zain.. woh apni princess ko bachane aa gya...
thanks a lot...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
I'm literally glued to this haha love it..pm me when u next update please..and I love the fact that u update really quickly..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dhamakedar update.aliya got shot hope she get fine.can't wait for next part.

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