zaya ss. chapter 4 updated page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Zaya ss
Based on the promo

Zain in the office thinking about aaliya and their encounters..of kisses and KMH ...then he thinks finally he has chance... Because no one is at home ...so he plans to take a gift for aaliya ...



AT THEIR HOUSE
Aaliya:yeh zain kaha reh gaya ...ek toh mein akeli ...hu and mujhe bahut zyada dare lag raha ...kaho ho tum zain
(Zain hugs her from behind )
Zain:meri biwi KO me akela thodi rehne dunga. Kya hua tumhe kis baat ka darr lag raha hai ..
Aaliya:zain won barkat. ...won mamu ...
Zain:shhh aajj koi barkat koi mamu ki baatein nahi (places kiss on her nape )
Aaliya:zain pls ...bahut important hai
(Zain turns aaliya to face him ..)
Aaliya :zain ek baar sun lo pls
Zain:nahi aaj nahi princess (and places kisses on her cheeks and eyes
Aaliya:uhhh zain (and hugs him)plz zain chodo air suno meri baat
Zain:nahi phele promise Karo ki tum Jo mein bolunga woh manogi uske baad sunta hu...
Aaliya:zain theek hai bolo
Zain:yeh lo gift...phele yeh pehnek aao ...
(Gives her the box)
Aaliya :zain meri baat toh suno
Zain:aaah aah ..phele phenke aao
Aaliya:kya hai isme
Zain:khud dekh (looking at aaliya like he will jump on her just now kiss her full body )
Aaliya:zain tum bhi na (opens the box And becomes full red seeing a white and pink night gown )
(Zain hugs her)
Zain:Acha laga
Aaliya :zain
Zain:shhh pls phele phenke aao
(Aaliya goes to the washroom and zain was walking all round the room waiting for Aliya...he hears the door open...zain turns around to see his princess)
Aaliya:abb suno meri baat zain
(Zain moves forward and slides his hands on her waist and brings her closer )
Zain:shhh aaj kuch nahi pls princess
Aaliya:zain pls suno
Zain:aaj kitne Dino baat privacy milk hai pls ...(and hugs her...aaliya also gave up )
Aaliya:zain (she moans as he kisses her shoulder and removes the rob of her gown slowly...sliding his hands on her supple ...skin kissing her neck and shoulders and she hugging him tigther wanting no distance between them..he kisses her on her collar bone and moves up on the to her chin he kisses her chin and teases her by not kissing her lips and just next to and above the ... Lips...and she pulling him closer ...her lips parting for meeting zains lips her chest crushing into his ...not able to bear the heat she turns around and moves away from zaIn )
Zain:kya hua ...(and hugs her from behind ...)
Zain:I love u ...aaliya (places kiss on her shoulders ...he notices a tear rolls down her cheeks and then followed by two three more )
Zain breaks the hug .
Zain:kya hua princess... ro kyun rahi kya hua(aaliya rubs her tears )
Aaliya: kuch nahi (but still the tears kept flowing)
(Zain hold her hands pushes her hair behind )
Zain:kya hua Maine kuch galat kiya ...I am sorry agar tum he ye sab pasand nahi aaya toh ...I will go and change it tomorrow (and turns around )
Aaliya:zain(pulls him back and hugs him... Tears flowing )
Zain:kya hua aaliya
Aaliya:yeah sab sach hai ...mujhe itni achi cheeso ki aadat nahi ...tum each mein mujhse pyaar karte ...itna pyaar mujhse ...(tears flowing down)
Zain:shhh pagal ho tum pagal...I love u. And abhi mere pyaar ki aadat deal lo...I love u (and slowly kisses her cheeks and drinks the tears from her face ...aaliya interwinds her hands on his back he slowly move towards her lips and aaliya longing for his kiss )


Chapter 2 :depends on what they show in todays epsiode ...will post very soon ... Pls comment and like pls pls

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
good one... waiting for ur update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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romantic update.waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Atleast u don't deprive us from a hottt Suhaag Raat. It was really gs effort,keep writing :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOVE IT!!!!!!
Please continue.
I really love it.
Awesome one.
Aww. Aaliya is not in habit of all this.
Hope Zain makes her habit. So sweet of Zain.
Awesome ss. Please continue as soon as you can.
And if you don't mind can you pm me when u write?
Would love to read it.
Thanks a lot and PLEASE CONTINUE SOON.
Thanks.😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Your take from the promo was interesting I loved how aliya was waiting for zain as she was scared and he comes from behind I found it hilarious how zain said if she wore the dress he'd listen but no he had other plans I hope she does tell him like she did in the show and he believes her :) thansk for the pm was a nice Uodate :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2
Zain rubbed his fingers on her lips and was about to kiss her ...and the phone rang ...(aaliya giggled and zain frowned because the phone spoilt the moment ...zain picked up the phone and while talking on the phone hugged aaliya from behind who was trying to run away )
Zain:ha Bhai boleye ...u ppl reached (but suddenly..zain loosened his grip )
Zain:kya(aaliya turned to look at zain to know what was happening )
Zain:theek hai Bhai
Aaliya:kya hua zain
Zain:aaliya woh dad KO
Aaliya:ha zain mamu KO kya
Zain:unko paralysis ka aatack aaya
Aaliya:kya (and both were in shock )
Zain:woh dad KO ghar LA rahe hai
Aaliya holds zains hands :zain mein tumhe kuch kehna chathi hu bark at me baare mein ...Maine barakat me paas aisi medicines Dekhi thee jisse kisiko paralysis ka attack aa Jaye ...

Zain:aaliya (he was about to continue but they hear loud shouts of fahad and suirrya ..they immediately run down to see usman is fine now
Zain and aaliya sit next to him holding his hands...
Zain:dad yeah kaise hua aap theek toh ho an
Usman:(putting his hands in their heads) an mein theek hu beta bad won achanak sent paani peeya aur ...uske baad mujhd kuch yaad nahi hai
Barkat:mein toh dare gayi thee.
Aaliya and zain look at each other...
Aaliya gets up from the place angrily and gives a slap on barkats face. ..with this reaction ...zain gets up and shouts ...aaliya ...surriya also acts the same...
Aaliya:zain Maine kaha that tumhe ki meri baat suno who davayi isne he milayi hongi paani mein ...
Suriya:barkat me khud me bhi wohi paani peyya tha..toh use bui kuch hona chahyie
Usman :aaliya beti ..its k ...mein samaj sakta hu ...tumhe meri chinta hai par bark at me kuch nahi kiya...sab apne kamre mein jao ...kal subhe milte hai goodnight
Aaliya:zain(he walked of angrily )



Zaya room
Zain was sitting on the table
Aaliya:zain tumge bhi meri baato pe vishwas nahi hai ...
Zain gets up from table and pushes aaliya back and says
Zain:how ...dare u ...tumne barkat KO kyun maara ...(and twist her hand hurting her )
Aaliya:zain I understand that u also won't believe me this I don't have me he evidence ..but mein kya karu mein mamu ki halat nayi dekh paayi
(Tears welled up in her eyes...zain felt the guilt of hurting her again...and left her and banged his hands on the table and he got hurt blood started flowing )
Aaliya:zain(taking his hands in her hands kissed them .)
Aaliya :zain bahut chot lagi hai mein first aid leke aati hu...
Zain:koi zarrurat nahi hai ..air Karo tamsha ...(pulls his hands... Back angrily)
Aaliya:zain pls ruko (wipes his hands with her duppta and ties it around his hand )
Zain:koi zarrurat nahi hai yeh sab ki (pulling his hands )
Aalliya:pulls him makes him sit on the bed and ties the duppata (zain looks up at aaliya . who was crying ..aaliya sits down on the knees and says )
Aaliya:zain apne aapko dard mat do pls
Zain pulls into a hug making her sit on his laps kissing her on her neck and shoulders.
Aaliya:I am sorry zain
Zain:I am sorry I shoudnt have been rude
Aaliya:zain mein sach keh rahi hu woh barkat be kiya hai ..so dawaiya ...
Chapter 3 depends on today's episode ...
Hope u like it ..I know it's same epi 6/5 but to continue I had to add it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its awesome...
plzzz continue soon..
its really awesome...
so sweet of aaliya...
now zain will held her i guess...
cnt wait for your next part...
plzz continue soon...
thanks a lot..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Nice story!
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
nice update.make zain belive aliya in next part.

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