ZAYA OS: I MISS YOU AALIYA! (on the current track)(part-2 updated)

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Nandini

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Kitkit_MKB
So cute 😳
Please update soon 😊

thank you soo much...
will surely continue by tomorrow...
till then manage with the teaser...
keep commenting...
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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Oh please continue soon 😊

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Anaya Ali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

THAT WAS REALLY CUTE...JUST LOVED IT

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Anisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

loved the OS

beautifully written

waiting for the next part

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: .Anisha.
loved the OS
beautifully written
waiting for the next part

thank you sooo very much...
will surely continue...
thanks...😃

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Swati

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Wow nyc update... N precap is also interesting. ..

pls update soon n if psbl pls pm

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

HEY PEOPLE...
I AM HERE WITH THE LAST PART...
HOPE YOU LIKE IT...

ZAYA OS
I MISSED YOU AALIYA
PART-2

zain woke up and saw no one next to him... he felt a bit strange and then remembered that she had left for bhopal... then he got up and went straight to the bathroom... once he came back he started to pack his clothes in the bag... then he went downstairs with his bag to greet everyone and leave... as he went down everyone greeted him...
zain: dad mei chalta hoon...
surraiya: breakfast toh krte jao bete...
zain: nahi mom flight miss ho jayegi..
osman: jao phir... le aao aaliya ko waapis...
just then zain's nephew came running up to him... saif...
saif: chachu mujhe bhi aapke saath jaana hai...
behind him came running arub and sana...
arub and sana: hume bhi...
zain kneeled down to their height...
zain: lekin tum log bhopal jaake kya karoge... tum wait kro mei chachi ko leke aata hoon...
three of them: nahi humein jaana hai... jaana hai.. jaana hai...
zain looked up at osman helplessly... osman signalled him to take the kids...
zain: (sighs) chalo badmaash baccho...
together: yay!!! yipee...

AT BHOPAL...
zain entered and saw shabana cooking...
zain: aslam valekum phups...
shabana got surprised and walked up to zain...
shabana: valekum aslam mere bacche...

TO BE CONTINUED...
SORRY I DIDNT HAVE TIME...
WILL UPDATE BY 5...
IM SOOO SORRYYY...
PLS LEAVE UR COMMENTS...
ALTHOUGH IT ISNT ENOUGH TO COMMENT...
BUT I PROMISE WILL MAKE THE NEXT PART LONG...
PLS PLS PLS LIKE AND COMMENT...
THANK YOU SOO MUCH...
HOPE I AM FORGIVEN...

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

heya people...
so sorry for the delay...
here you go with the continuation...

PART-2
CONTINUED

shabana and zain hug each other...
shabana: aaliya ki yaad aa rhi thi na?
zain: nahi phups... mujhe toh apni hot phups ki yaad aa rhi thi...
shabana: chup kr badmaash... ghulam saheb zain aaya hai...
the voice was loud enough for aaliya to hear... she was surprised yet happy...
zain bhopal aaya hai... pta tha mujhe kitkit mere bina nhi ji payega... par mei neeche kyun jaoon... hurt usne mujhe kiya hai... mei neeche nhi jaoongi...
zain's eyes were searching for aaliya... which was caught by shabana and ghulam... they looked at each other and smiled...
ghulam: apni begum ko dhund rhe ho?
zain: huh?
shabana: sab pta hai humme... aaliya ne bhi tumhe bahaut yaad kiya... jao upar hai apne kamre mei...
zain smiled to hide the embarrassment... he couldnt wait to see her...
shabana: mashallah... kitne pyaare bacche hai...
zain: phups ye saif hai... (he said as he pointed towards saif)
yeh sana hai (he said as he pointed towards sana)
aur yeh humari pyaari arub (he brought arub in front of him)
shabana: mashallah... bade pyaare hai... par yeh yaha bhopal mei?
zain: apni chachi se dur nhi rha jaya ja rha tha... toh zidd pe adh gye...
shabana: tumhare jaise hai.. jao inhe upar le jao...
zain smiled and took the kids upstairs...

IN AALIYA'S ROOM...
aaliya was sitting in her room reading a book... zain entered the room with the kids but aaliya didnt notice... saif went up to her and stood beside her...
aaliya: arre saif...
saif: chachi...
they both hugged each other... arub and sana also ran up to them and hugged their chachi... zain stood back their smiling at this view...
aaliya: tum sab yaha? kon leke aaya?
arub: chachu! (she said as she pointed towards zain)
aaliya looked towards zain who was smiling... he walked near her...
aaliya: umm... mei tum sab ke liye kuch leke aati hoon...
she got up to leave but zain stopped her as she passed by...
zain: waise naha ke toh mei bhi aaya hoon... mujhe hug krne se kuch ho toh nhi jayega...
aaliya got nervous... she took her hand out of his grip and ran down the stairs...
sharmane ka matlab toh yahi hai aaliya zain abdullah... pyaar toh tum krti ho...

DOWNSTAIRS...
aaliya saw shabana cooking food and went up to her...
aaliya: ammi layi mei kar deti hoon...
shabana: nahi tum zain ke saath bheto... mei kr rhi hoon...
aaliya: ammi mujhe zain se baat nhi krni...
shabana: hay hay... kya hua meri bacchi... sab kheriat toh hai na?
zain: kuch kheriat nhi hai...
they both turned and saw zain standing behind aaliya...
shabana: matlab?
zain: phups aapki beti bilkul pagal hai... ek chhoti si baat kya keh di ghar chhod ke aa gyi...
shikayati tattu...
ab bolo mamu ki bhanji...
shabana: aaliya tum ghar chhod ke aayi ho?
aaliya was unable to speak...
zain: haan phups... pta nhi iski problem kya hai... ek baar pehle bhi chhod ke jaa rhi thi...
shabana: hain?
zain: haan phups... train station pe rok liya tha magar...
aaliya: ammi...
shabana: aaliya tum pagal ho kya? phirse ese kuch mt krna... kuch bhi ho jaye iska matlab yeh todhi na hai ki ghar chhod ke chale jao... phirse esa kuch matt krna... theek hai?
aaliya: ji ammi...
shabana: zara chatt se kapde uttar de...
aaliya: haan ammi...
aaliya went up to the terrace and zain followed her...

AT THE TERRACE...
aaliya started to take the clothes... not noticing that zain was standing right behind her... as she turned to go down zain blocked her way...
aaliya: kya kr rhe ho...
zain: mujhe kuch baat krni hai...
aaliya: bolo...
zain took a step forward... she moved backward...
zain: tum uss din jealousy huyi thi na? (he stepped forward)
aaliya: kis din ki baat kr rhe ho? (she stepped backward)
zain: i love you party ke din... (he stepped forward)
aaliya: nahi toh... tumhe huyi thi (she didnt step back)
zain: accha? (he took a step forward again)
aaliya: haan (she took a step backwards)
they had now reached the railing... aaliya was with the fear of falling... zain caught that and snaked his arm around her waist pulling her closer...
zain: i love you
[beintehaa plays]
aaliya was surprised and yet happy... she couldnt believe that this was happening finally... she had dream about it about a milion times since she had fallen in love with him... this was finally happening...
zain: kuch bologi nhi?
aaliya: huh? haan...
zain: kya 'haan'?
aaliya: i love you too...
now it was zain's turn to be surprised and happy... he had not dream of this but had realized that it was gonna be so amazing...
"ahem.. ahem" someone said from behind... they turned around and saw shabana and ghulam standing behind them...
shabana: khana taiyarr hai...
ghulam: jaldi aa jao nhi toh thanda ho jayega...
they both smiled and left... aaliya was left their blushing and embarrassed... zain turned around and again snaked his arm around her waist... bringing her too close... aaliya kept her hands on his shoulder...
aaliya: zain pls jaane do.. meri behne dekh lengi...
zain: no...
aaliya ran away... zain was left their smiling...
zain: Hum Tumhe Bhula Kar Bhi Jee Nahi Sakte,
Hum Tumhe Yaad Rakh Kar Bhi Jee Nahi Sakte,
Mar Jate Tumhare Bina,
Par Tumhari Baanhon Ke Bina Hum Mar Bhi Nahi Sakte.

THE END...
THANK YOU SOO MUCH...
LEAVE UR COMMENTS AND LIKES PLEASE...
THEY REALLY MATTER A LOT TO ME...
HOPE YOU LIKED IT...
THANKS...😃

Edited by zaya15 - 11 years ago