ZAYA OS: I MISS YOU AALIYA! (on the current track)(part-2 updated)

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

HI...
i am here with another os... i couldnt handle my desires for the show so here i am with a simple os related to the show... the only thing i can do is request you to pls read it patiently... and those who dont think it is that long... congratz... so here you go:
(zain's pov= blue)
(aaliya's pov= pink)

ZAYA OS
I MISSED YOU AALIYA

aaliya had gone to bhopal to her ammi abbu's house... she didnt wanna face zain at this point of time... maybe she thought that this wasn't the write time to talk or face each other... maybe it was time to think... think alone... without any pressure... that is this marriage only a compromise? is this marriage not a normal one? do they really love each other? maybe it was the right time...

pta nhi yeh mamu ki bhanji ki problem kya hai... kal khud hi toh zubair ke saath dance kr rhi thi... meine bhi toh sacch hi bola tha na... aur ab ek emotional sa letter chhod ke gyi hai jisse ki mei usse sorry bolne bhopal tak dhoda chaloon... jaye bhaad mei... mujhe kya pharak pdta hai...
besharam zain: pharak nhi pdta toh itna soch kyun rha hai...
phattu: arre tumhari prob kya hai... jao yaha se..
besharam zain: pehle apni biwi ko bhagwa diya aur ab apne aap ko bhi? wah!
phattu: shut up! meine usse kuch nhi kaha hai... jo kaha sacch kaha...
besharam zain: accha theek hai matlab tune kuch glt nhi kiya hai...
phattu: nhi...
besharam zain: accha toh tu uspe sirf isliye ghussa hai kyunki woh zubair ke saath naach rhi thi...
phattu zain remained silent...
besharam zain: aur isliye kyunki woh itne saalo ke baad apne cousin ko dekh kr khush ho rhi thi... aur uske saath apni yaadein taaza kr rhi thi... ab uski glti hi toh hai na ki tum dono bachpan mei itna ladte the... isliye tumhare paas sirf ladai ki yaadein hai...
phattu: matlab?
besharam zain: abbe phattu.. iska matlab ki tune usse bahaut hurt kiya hai...
phattu: hurt? aur meine? chipak chipak ke gale toh woh mil rhi thi...
besharam zain: accha aur tune jo unn ladkiyo ke saath naach rha tha thts not bad?
phattu zain remained silent again...
besharam zain: soch iss baare mei... u will get ur answers...
phattu nodded...

BACK IN BHOPAL...
uss zain ki problem kya hai... sirf dance hi toh kiya tha zubu ke saath... itna hi pyaar aa rha tha toh mujhe itna hurt kyun kiya? mere character pe shakk kiya? mei kyun zubu se pyaar karungi... hum sabse acche dost hai... ek dusre se kuch nhi chupate... aur uske lga ki mei? mei usse cheat kr rhi hoon? mei kyun usse cheat krne lgi.. ya allah... isse todha dimag de do... pta nhi kya glt femi paal rkhi hogi... zubu? arre mera sabse saccha dost hai... aur zain aur meine toh sirf ladaiya hi ki hai... toh acchi yaadein kaha se laungi? ab bann rhi hai na acchi yaadein... woh cold storage... woh picnic ke waqt... valetines day... par usse toh sirf apni hi padhi hai... idiot!
shabana: aaliya kya soch rhi hai meri bacchi?
aaliya: kuch nhi ammi... bas aisehi!
shabana: kya hua? apni ammi ko bhi nhi bataegi?
aaliya: ammi... kuch nhi hua... aap tension na lo...
shabana: meri itni pyaari beti hai... toh mujhe tension lene ki kya zarurat...
they both hug...

IN MUMBAI...
osman: zain bete... mujhe shabana ko yeh chithi deni hai... todhi important hai... actually precious bhi hai... isliye isse courier bhi nhi kr skta... kya tum?
zain: dad aap mujhe aaliya ko waapis laane ke liye bhej rhe hai na...
osman: nhi nhi... bilkul nhi... actually mujhe todhe paise dene the shabana ko...
zain: accha theek hai... i will go dad...
osman: very nice... u leave tomorrow...
zain: tomorrow?
osman: hmmm... any problem?
zain: no...
dad pta toh mujhe bhi hai ki aap mujhe aaliya ke paas bhej rhe hai taaki mei usse waapis laoon... par mei bas phups ko paise de ke aa jaoonga... aaliya ne aana hoga toh aa jayegi... nhi toh na sahi...

IN THE EVENING...
zain is sitting in his room on the couch searching something on his tab... just then saif enters... zain sees him and puts down the tab and makes saif sit on his lap...
zain: kya hua saif?
saif: chachu... chachi kaha hai?
zain remained silent...
saif: chachu... chachi kaha hai? (he asked again)
zain: chachi kyun? u dnt like ur chachu?
saif: nhi lekin chachi ne kha tha ki woh mujhe story sunaenge...
zain: toh woh toh mei bhi kr skta hoon...
saif: nhi mujhe chachi hi chahiye...
aaliya: aur chachi aa gyi...
zain looked up and saw aaliya standing near the door... she took saif from zain's hands and started talking to him... zain just admired her in shock... then she looked at him...
aaliya: kya hua?
zain: tum yaha?
aaliya: tum yaha toh mei kaha?
zain smiled... saif shaked zain... zain brought out of his trance and realized that he was dreaming...
saif: kya hua chachu?
zain: kuch nhi...
saif: chachi kaha gyi hai?
zain: woh bhopal gyi hai...
saif: toh aap unhe waapis leke aayi na...
zain: haan... haan mei kal jaa rha hoon...
saif: yay!
he happily ran out of the room... zain was left there smiling...

IN BHOPAL...
aaliya was going out and was confused within two dresses... pink or the blue?
ummm... blue (she raised the blue one) na... pink (she raised the pink one) blue... na.. pink... ya allah... i am so !@#$%^&* confused...
zain: pink...
she turned around... zain was standing near the door leaning to the door frame...
aaliya; tum yaha?
zain: pink pehen lo...
aaliya raised the pink one...
then looked up and saw that zain wasn't there... she was just dreaming...
aaliya: uff... (sighs) mujhe baar baar zain kyun dikh rha hai...
she turned back to the dressing table and decided to go for the pink one and smiled..

TO BE CONTINUED...
SORRY IF IT WAS USELESS...
BUT I AM SURE U R GONNA LIKE THE NEXT PART...
ITS A BIT DIFFERENT FROM WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN ACTUALLY...
PLS PLS PLS COMMENT AND LIKE...
CRITICISATION IS WELCOME AS ALWAYS...
THANKS...😃

Edited by zaya15 - 11 years ago

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zayafan09

@zayafan09

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Itz realy a nice piece. ..beautifully written...plz continue 😊

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Awwiie

that was so cute

Besharma Zain is back

yayy

I hope show mein bhi waapas aa jaye

ZaYa missing each other

can't wait to read more

So do continue soon

Geet

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

thank you soo much for all your replies...
here's the teaser for part-2...
hope you like it as well...
zain was about to leave when someone comes up to him and says that he wants to accompany him... no its not zubair... its saif... he says that he wants to meet his chachi and wants to go with him... along come arub and sana and say they wanna accompany him too... fahad sees this and comes and tells zain to take them as well so that they can also meet shabana and ghulam...(i dont know what relation will saif arub n sana have with shabana and ghulam... my apologies) zain would heave a helpless sigh and will take the three kids with him... at bhopal every one will be happy to see the three kids... most of all aaliya... will zain be able to take back aaliya? keep reading to know...
so here's the teaser... i know its kinda cute... but again i rock at making things sweet and cute... so i will update the part as soon as i can... it may take time or not at all take time... wish i get time to update as fast as i can...
thanks...😊

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Ravina

@Ravinanaik

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

aww so cuteee
loved it...

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Hey dear

the teaser is so cute

Awiiee so the kids also want to accompany Zain

to meet their Cahchi

so cute

plz continue soon

PS: Can u plz tell me ur name?😳

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Nandini

@cupcaked

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdesire
Hey dear
the teaser is so cute
Awiiee so the kids also want to accompany Zain
to meet their Chachi
so cute
plz continue soon

PS: Can u plz tell me ur name?😳

thank you soo much...
yeah cute kids with cude deeds...
will surely continue by tomorrow or today...
and my name is tanya...
nice to meet u...😆
thanks...😃