maafi mango ....os chap 3 pg 4 updated 11 may - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
good start..update soon..👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏Good 1.! Continue soon n PM me.!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continuation...
Aliya is crying near poolside
Shes thinking(ya allah...acha hua ap ne theek waqt pe mjhe zain ki asliyat dikha di...me ese shaqs se kabhi pyar nhi krugi)
She wipes her tears and goes towards her room
Zain is in the room...he sees aliya and blocks her way
Aliya:raasta choro
Zain:meri baat suno
Aliya:raasta choro
Aliya pushes him and proceeds towards the almirah
Zain pulls her back
Zain:i know mene jo kia ghalat tha...mene tumko rulaya...i am sorry
Aliya:*angry* oh zain abdullah me us bakwaas se nhi ro rhi...ro islie rahi ti k mene tum jese insaan ko apna dost maan ne ki ghalti ki.
Zain is shocked his eyes are brimming with tears
Aliya:*tears flowing out her eyes* aadat chut gayi ti na tumhare haathon insulted hone ki...nikkah jab se hua hai tab se tum ne yehi to kia hai...kabhi akele me kabhi sabke saamne...lekin ab orr nhi
Zain:magr
Aliya:tum mjh se beintehaa nafrat krte they ...me ye bhool gayi ti...mgr ab tum ne mje yaad dila di ke meri tumhari zindagi me koi value nhi hai... ek baar sab theek hojae.me bhopal chali jau gi

She leaves ...leaving a shocked and teary eyed zain
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
hmmm nice one 👏
waitng for next chp😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Nice updaymte loved it hope zain does something to make her mood right update soon and do PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Mindblowing update Dear!Pls continue soon & pm Me!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Very nice.i hope this happens
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
_Nyc waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice..plz continue..and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chap 3

Aliyas words keep spinning in zains head...he feels guilty...for hurting her..he wants to appologize...but how?
Zain enters his room at night but aliya is not there
He finds her around house but discovers that she is in ayats room tonight
He can hear her giggling with ayat and comes back to his room
He sits on his bed sees aliyas photo and his eyes well up
Zain:i m sorry...me tumhare qabil hi nhi hu
Zain texts her but she doesnt reply
Zain misses her terribly

In morning zain dresses up and and sees aliya in the kitchen...he tries to talk to her
Zain:wo mkb
Aliya:han chand khala arhi hu
And she exits...zain is hurt
He decides to manaofy her no matter what

Aliya is sitting on sofa
Sana comes and gives her a red rose and a card
Aliya:sana...ye kia hai
Sana runs away
Saif comes and does the same and so does arub

Aliya starts reading the caards n discovers that the frst card says I
Second says AM thirds says SORRY...SHE UNDERSTANDS THAT ZAIN IS DOING IT...SHE KEEPS THEM ON THE SOFA AND GOES AWAY...ZAIN IS DISAPPOINTED but doesnt give up...continued

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