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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: preity_d

hey Lara are u going to update?

You have to wait for two days dear... 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: zzinia2411

omg this is great! love it! update asap! will be waiting👏

Thank u so muchhh... 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hii this is amazing please update soon and pm me pleaseee !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

until aliya's name was not taken only manvi's image was going on in ma head and its still going on 😉😃
amazing update loving the different concept its damn interesting the mixture of the two different world soo much of imagination used up its really exciting to read it wel done ya 👏


pagal Kulli manali tu ek hi jagah atki hui hain OMG buahahaha 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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dorry type kulli nai kullu 😛
sorry Lara for spamming
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Posted: 11 years ago
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again typo sorry not dorry
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Lara, this story is gonna rock! I am sure about that! I loved the prologue as well as the first chapter of this story. They were written very stupefyingly. Please update soon and pm me zaroor 😉Take care! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello friends... thank u for your likes and comments on the first chapter of this story, seriously they encouraged me write more and I cant describe how good I felt after reading all your comments.

Dedicating this chapter to " preeti-di "... :)

Heres the next chapter of Forever Yours, forgive the mistakes please.


Forever Yours



Chapter 2



Furious, agitated.. with questions only circling in his mind... zain spread his wings through the strong wind flowing around him. He flew upwords, cries and pleads of tortured souls followed after him.


What was it with that girl ?? Why he couldn't take his soul ?? Why was she immune to his powers ??


He had been ripping out and carrying out souls of all the weaks and powerfuls, richs and poors. Even the powerful monsters in the ages of their survival.. long before the existence of human kind, would tremble with fear right at the moment he would descend to take their soul and it would be only a glance at those magical.. massive creatures that would bring death to them.


Zain reached the place higher in the sky, higher than the clouds. He flapped his wings a few times making his body float still in that place, He lifted his hand before him as if touching something invisible. It suddenly looked like the world had another skin upon it which started wrinkling, a hole started appearing around his lifted up hand and that hole got bigger with each passing seconds. When that hole got much bigger for him to enter, he suddenly flipped through it and entered the underworld.. his home... his domain.


Zain sniffed in the familiar air of underworld... free from any polution unlike human world, it was situated in another dimension parellel to the dimension of the world of mortals. Zain looked around to the mountains and the cliffs, the horizon of the vast green forest far away, sun was brighter here and in the other side of the sky galaxies, comets.. all the objects in space and the whole cosmos looked much clearer and more beautiful than any other sight existing.


Zain teleported himself in the palace of underworld, in his room. The walls in his huge room were decorated in golden handworks, diamond and other gems were encraved upon them. Everything around him and in the whole palace screamed royalty and wealth. And why not ?? After all zain's mother persephone was the goddess of wealth, riches and all those precious gems and metals which lays beneath the ground, while zain's father Hades was the king and God of the underworld, souls and their afterlife. While zain was responisible to deliver death to mortals in their destined times and lead them to the underworld, his father was the one responsible to perform those souls judgements and decide what and how their afterlife would be.


Not wasting a second, not being able to keep his uncontrollable rage anymore inside him... zain began breaking all the expensive things in his room. The huge mirror shuttered as he glanced towards it with his red eyes and tiny pieces of broken glasses of that poor mirror scattered around, a soul whose last wish wasn't fulfilled begged for mercy from somewhere. He huffed like an angry bull shown a red cloth as he marched to his bed, with a swing of hand.. the golden vase upon it flew across the room and collided with the closed door adding a clattering sound to the other destructive noise coming from his room, wailing of the souls matched theose heavy noises as if competing with them. The beautiful blood red roses falling on the ground which were earlier in that vase... were already burning in fire that he created through his dense anger.


The wing of the palace where zain's room was situated was echoing with the noises of the destruction he was making in his room and him being not just another human but a God... took things to some other level. It was as if a bloody stampede was going on inside in his room.


Persephone... the queen of the underworld... zain's mother was passing by the dining hall after spending a long tiring day in the hall of judgement. Judging the spirits and deciding their afterlife was not at all a plaything, it was so much difficult yet so exciting. Each spirit has always a different tale to tell... each peoples lives and the circumstances and the choices of goods and bads they make in life is always so different, fascinating and sometimes disgusting than the other, it creates inevitable puzzles sometimes. She thanked her fate everytime for she got hades by her side as her king.. as her husband.. as her lover. And it would always flutter her looking at the love in hades eyes only for her, they ruled side by side.. equally... in this dimension, their realm, their domain... in underworld ... as man and woman.. as king and queen but moreover as eqals.


Hades and persephone always respected each other, their love was something which zain would always adore and secretly and subconsciously always wished for to have something like that. But unlike hades and persephone.. fate was not so pleasant and kind to everyone. From the beginning of time zain was alone and after passing a good of time of eternity in such loneliness.. it wasn't that much of his fault to think that he was maybe destined to pass the rest of the eternity just like that.


Persephone stood dead in her track as another loud noise came from the direction.. where she knew zain's room was located. What was up with her son now ?? She wondered.


Zain's anger was so much like his father hades. Her boy got more traits from his father than his mother... persephone thought rolling her eyes.


" Darren.. "


Persephone called the head servant; caretaker; manager and the most faithful person they had.. all in one.. darren.


Darren appeared and bowed his head quickly before persephone...


Darren: " Yes.. my lady... "

Persephone: " Ohh... stop the formality darren and tell me now why is these weird noises coming from my son's room ?? "


Persephone waved her hand and darren rose up his head to look at her...


Darren: " He's apparently in a very bad mood since the moment he arrived... "

Persephone: " Just bad would be an understatement to his mood as I am hearing... "


The moment she said that another loud bang in his room could be heard, both persephone and darren flinched at that.


Persephone looked a little concerned now.


Persephone: " Well... do you know the reason ?? "


Darren shook his head in negative.


Darren: " No... "


Persephone scrunched her brows thinking hard...


Persephone: " Ok... you can go now. "


Darren disappeared the same way he appeared.


Persephone teleported infront of zain's room and touched his door gently. All the bed-chambers in the palace were bound in spells so that no one could use magic and teleport themselves inside the bedrooms or washrooms anytime they want, that would annoyingly be invading to someones privacy and personal space. So hades made this spell long back, the fact that they were God's made things seem so exciting but created so many difficulties too in their never- ending immortal lives.


Seeing in her vision that the lock in his door was open, she pushed open the double door using both her hands.


With a loud screech the door slammed open, the timing was perfect as zain had just gripped the edges of his bed and had lifted the whole bed up high in the air... he was just about to throw it in the walls too.


Persephone took in the scene before her with her eyes opened wide...


Persephone: " What do you think you are doing son ?? "


Her voice held sterness and amusement...


A muscle in zain's jaw twitched as his mother's intimidating voice managed to snap back the sense inside him which got lost for a while.. because of that weak human girl. Was she even weak ?? He asked himself, she managed to defend his power. With that thought and his pride being kicked in the center again.. his grip upon the wooden edges of his bed tightened...


Persephone glared at her son...


Persephone: " Put that bed down zain... "


Zain snorted but did what his mother told him to but that bed broke anyways.. as he kept it back down with such a force that the bed couldnt help but crumble down like a poor matchbox.


Feeling a little bit calmer than before and destroying almost the whole room.. zain took steps backwards and leaned back against the wall behind him while persephone studied the sight of his now pathetic room.


What made zain so angry...?? Persephone thought worried, she had every right to be worried because the last time she remembered.. when zain was this angry was after that occassion a few centuries ago.


There was a party going on in Olympus celebrating Zeus and Hera... the king and queen of all gods and goddesses... marriage anniversary. Dionysus.. the God of wine; merryment and parties were in his ful grace being the life of the party. Zain was as usual being the outcast and odd one among them and was standing in a corner looking at everyone as they were dancing and enjoying the night away. At one moment, dionysus began insisting like a leech to zain to have a few shots. And before zain could understand what was happening, he too was dancing like crazy. The next morning zain woke up with a bad headache and also with a very beautiful minor goddess... selene. Bad news was that... Eros... the cupid.. the very handsome God of love was currently dating selene, eros found them in that compromising position naked in bed. There was war after that... between zain and eros. Though zain won the combat... still everyone blamed him, he felt further insulted and this kind of scenario followed in his room afterhand.


Persephone sighed looking at zain still leaning against the wall breathing heavily glaring out the window. She moved swiftly to him and kept a comforting hand on his shoulder...


Persephone: " Tell me what it is ?? "


As if zain was waiting for her to ask, he grunted and spoke through gritted teeth...


Zain: " She didn't die. "


Persephone tilted her head confused. Zain read her unasked question...


Zain: " A human girl... aaliya, my angels failed to seperate her soul from her body... neither could I... "


That made persephone gasp in surprise. Zain was the god of death, only his single determined glance towards his target would bring its doom's day and he is saying that he... FAILED !!!


Persephone: " But how ?? "


Zain snorted in annoyance at his ignorance...


Zain: " If I knew that.. I wouldnt be wrecking my room over here mother. "

Persephone: " So are you trying to say.. that girl has the power to conquer death and death himself dont has the idea how ?? "


A muscle in zain's jaw twitched gain at that. Someone saying the truth in his face had his anger to raise its ugly head again... a few wandering spirits screamed in pain as zain found it hard to keep his anger in check.


Persephone patted zain's shoulder... " Control your anger son, because we gotta have a serious and confidential talk with your dad right now. This recent problem could seriously damage the balance in the system and we need to solve it immediately, so you better calm yourself before facing your father... "


Zain inhaled and exhaled breaths to cool down the fire in his head, his mother was right. They need to think and act sensibly and him being angry or breaking things would do nothing but to increase the works of the servants.


Talking of servants and they appeared in zains room in an wave of persephone's hand, immediately they started clearing up the mess while persephone again turned to look at zain...


Persephone: " Let's go to your father... "




~~~Note: In Greek mythology... Zeus is the king of all the main twelve gods and goddesses while his wife Hera is the queen of them. Zeus is know to be having power over thunderbolts or lightening in the clouds. Hera is the goddess of marriage and fertility, she is known to be a jelous.. possessive goddess.

Eros is the god of love. In myths he is often represented as a fat kid holding an arrow or something which is know to be cupid. But in this ff eros is an adult man/god...


Instead of hades, persephone and zain... all the other Gods and goddesses resides in Olympus.


As the story progresses you will get to know a few more greek gods and goddesses~~~~


If you have any questions or confusions... feel free to ask through your comments. Suggestions are also welcome.


Dont forget to like and comment, to get pms... like, comment and buddy me. Will be back soon with a new update and yes you will get aaliya there and a sneak peak into her life. And what do you think... zain is going to do now ?? I have already cleared it that aaliya still being alve had hit zain's ego... how do you feel about that ?? Let me know... will be eagerly waiting for your views...


Take care..

Love... clara.. or lara... :)) 😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg nicceee update!😃 i just lovvveee the fact that Aliya won over him!😆😳 Mr. egoistic handsome jerk ko pata to chale humans can be strong n conqueror too!😆 really hope he comes to meet aliya again n then aliya does something unknowingly again that will make him super angry n question her about her power by cornering her n coming way too close to her by making her nervous BUT she'll 'try' to stay strong BUT personally i dont mind if she loses control!!!😳😆...Do update ASAP! will be waiting!😃

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