Zaya ff Forever Yours... chap 12: pg 40 - Page 4

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

awesome update.
zain was god of death,its really intersting.he came to take aliya soul but fail.aliya can see him when no one can,is she have some sepcial power.this ff is too much intersting.can't wait for next part.

Originally posted by: Emaani.95

OMG!! Clara? 😲 You dedicated this part to me?? 😲 I mean really?

Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou buddy 🤗

I felt so amused the moment I read your dedication 😃 Thanks :*

Now coming to the chappy,

I was not at all wrong when I said 'You write stupendously' 👏

This concept is very much fresh for me as I haven't read any FF like this one on any Forum. 😊

You have all rights to write your imagination and I wouldn't say anything on it but I just hope that you'll not pen down something which would be against the muslim culture or would hurt any of your muslim readers. Though, what you wrote is not what actually happens but I am ok with ut as it's just a fiction. 😳

I liked this segment of the chapter:

'So her name was ... aaliya... in between his determined thoughts he couldnt help but to say her name to know how it felt rolling out of his tongue...

" Aaliya... "

As if the girl whose name was aaliya could hear him, she moaned a little and replied in her deep slumber...

" Hmmm... "

A ghost of a smile involuntarily played on his lips.'

I am glad that Aaliya didn't die! 😊

Now, when are you gonna update the next part? 😛

I hope it would be up soon. 😃😉

Originally posted by: kateyes

Nice prologue Lara sounds interesting n seems very different it was written very beautifully 👏👏👏👏 a luv story with a mythological concept i m so excited 4 dis dat how luv will develop in dis concept 😃😃😃😃
Ch 1 # Brilliant grl just luved it u hav written it so beautifully 👏👏👏👏👏 , d way u described death n zain character i just luved it 2 d core dat wht people feels about death n him he himself is d god of death 😲😲😲😲 ( i hav not thought about it ) who takes ur life 4rm urself ( firstly i got confused dat no it can't happen den got excited dat now how will u show luv in dem ) n dere first meeting he was dere 2 take her life but can't do dat bcoz of sum reasons 4 which he is confused dat y he can't snatch her soul 4rm her d story is like a fantasy movie i was smiling like idiot while reading it n thnk u so much 4 d pm 😃😃😃😃😃

Originally posted by: aparnalokam

Wowww such along update...its realy superb loved ur first update...dis is realy interesting...
Realy its a different concept nd v.interesting to read...
Looking forward for your next update dear...

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Superb start Lara!! 👏👏 Mind-blowing.. I love reading fantasy books and you have described every moment just brilliantly.. As if I'm watching a movie.. Too good.. Zain's looks and his emotions are very well portrayed.. He couldn't separate her soul from her body and he was infuriated by his failure.. Aaliya can see him! It seems she has some special powers.. This is really interesting.. Loved it.. Eager to read more.. Please continue soon.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care 😊