Zaya ff Forever Yours... chap 12: pg 40

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Dr.Fear

@Dr.Fear

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

OMG OMG OMG!!! Dedicated to me? Thank u sooo much dear 🤗 its the first time experience for me 😳 ...

And the update was amazingly fantastic, it was seriously awesome . Loved everything ❤️ Apollo is so friendly, loved how he cured Aliya.
I love the kindness of persphone too, she is so hard working .

And hope Rhea helps Aliya to get away from here 😆 and omg Eros is there 😲, pakka something will happen and loved how Aliya compared him to her handsome monster Zain 😆, hope Zain get jealous 😳 and wow now I just really say that you have the BEST way ndeed to describe things whether its the palace, the appearances ofthe characters and their feelings ...wow amazingl job girl 👍🏼

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mridula

@-Minion-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

awesome update.
aliya get friendlly with apollo.i love their scene.aliya going to meet eros,hope zain don't come that time.waiting for next part.

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aparnalokam

@aparnalokam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Aww as usual awesome...
I jst loved it...
It was simply superb...

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divikash

@divikash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

great update

but yes i did the god of death in this chapter

but nice, explaining how the god's relationship, and their behaviors are

now im very curious whats Eros's reaction will be to aaliya and of course on their meeting

update soon, waiting for it eagerly

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Divya

@hakunamatata

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Ooohhh I sense some jealousy coming up...

bless apollo and persephone. ..aaliya is fine all over again to weaken zainc. ..she surely has it in her to make zains heart go dingdong...

loved how the story is shaping..so unique

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Eeekss...ur on updatin spree...:):) !!!

Loved the update...apollo is a friendly god n quite well gelled with aaliya n her amusement on bein healed...liked d sweet n clean banter between pres n apollo...:)

Aaliya shown around d palace n hope rhea helps her sneak out...but den ders also an interetin intro god of love...damn d huge difference or say two different extreme ends aaliya would gt to knw (zain at oder end;))...eager for next !

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Superb!! I'm really liking the way story is proceeding.. Very unique 👍🏼.. Apollo sounds fun.. Liked the lil argument between him and Persephone.. It seems Aaliya is quite comfortable in hell now :p and thinking about a certain someone every now and then 😉.. So she is going to meet the God of Love who is Zain's arch-enemy.. Let's see how Zain will react to that.. Will be waiting for the next.. Take care 😃

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ZainXAliya

@ZainXAliya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

This was written neatly and incredibly! 😉 I loved every part of it, plus I do hope Rhea is the reason how Aaliya will get out of the underworld! 😊

Apollo accompanying Aaliya was very sweet, he's very friendly which I admired about him. 😳

Haha! Aaliya comparing the 'God Of Love' with her handsome hunk Zain. 😳 🤣 I am falling in love with every updates you send us, Lara! 😃

Keep up the good work!! 😉

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

Freaking Amazing update Lara Di!Aaliya got cured by Apollo & He's friendly with Aaliya!Aaliya has already sensed that Zain had a scandalous past!But when She asked about it to Peresphones She changed the topic!Eros is here!Aaliya noticed that He's handsome but not as much as Zain!Waiting for next!Pls continue soon & pm Me!& Pls can U send Me a friend request?