Zaya ff Forever Yours... chap 12: pg 40

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Dr.Fear

@Dr.Fear

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

Amazingly awesome update

Persephone is so kind n it was nice 2 see that Zain repented and huff that smirk and aww poor Zain will be criticized again by those gods and waiting for Zeus' decision 😊 and aww the questioning about the kiss was a v cute scene, Zain doesn't know d answer too ❤️

V eager 2 know How their love story will start .
M smile like an idiot when I imagine the whole update like a show, u describe things in d BEST way .

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aparnalokam

@aparnalokam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Simply superbb dear...
I lykd each and ever lne...
And u r nt gng 2 end it so soon...
Ty so much 4 pm...

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GOOGLU

@GOOGLU

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Awsm update dear. ..
Really loved it..
Love zain mother character. ..
She is sooo sweet..
Egrly waiting for zaya's love story. ..
Thanks alot for pm dea..
Keep rocking

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Lovely update Gulab Jamun! 😃 Zain is feeling guilty for his behaviour but his ego didn't allow him to apologize to Aaliya.. Maybe someday he will learn to say sorry 😛.. She actually asked him about the kiss!! Nice 😉.. His mother is really sweet and caring.. So Hades is taking this matter to Zeus.. Eager to read the next part.. Please continue soon.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care 😊

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Amazing n beautifully written!!!

Zain is in guilt but presprone has taken things in her hands..zain has dine enuf damage..but d surprisr is Aaliya's question...eager for next n thanks for the PM!!!

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panamaa

@panamaa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#246

very nice story
waiting to get responces of both
loved it

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#247

Amazing chp..ohhh god zain is a bastatd!!
Woh chata kya hai aaliya se kuch samaj hii ni aa rha!!
He is so egostic n nean!!
Poor aaliya!!
Zain ko punishment milna chaiye isliye!!
😉 😕

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#248

Hey Lara,

Glad to see Zain is in guilt for behaving wid her like this... Aaliya asked him a question, why did he kiss her? now I want this answer too... Persephone is really a sweet and kind god. waiting to see how she alone with manage the whole domain, when Hades n Zain is out. Also waiting to see Hades Zain encounter... and most eager to see how this interesting, taboo love story will begin, how Zain Aaliya being mortal and God respectively will end up together... You know I love ur this story... Update real real SOON ... TC

Preity ❤️

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ZainXAliya

@ZainXAliya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#249

Wow, this chapter was just wow!
Loved every single parts of this chapter.
I can't believe how amazing you are, your just too good. You actually drown me hard into reading your wonderful stories. I literally just want this story to keep continuing forever! Sadly, every stories need an ending. Hope this one is long though! By the way you really know how to write a persons point of view very well and described too! Even I can't top your writing! By the way thanks for the beautiful update Lara! 👏