ZaYa TS||She Was The One||Last Part Pg 5|| - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome
Luvd it
W8ing 4 d nxt part
Thnx 4 d pm!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Wow lovely concept...
Whats wrong with aaliyah??...curious to know...
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Marci

Interesting concept dear, love the curious Zain, finally he got to her!

But interested in knowing what's hurting Aliya and keeping her so restricted?!

Anyways amazingly written, can't wait for the next update!!!😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SB-

Awesome . Loved it.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: gowtu

Wow intrstng.. Loved it.. Wht's hurtng aliah.. Y she behvng lk dis... Nd zain.. Fnlly he got to her.. Thnks for the pm.. Continue soon..


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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

beautiful part.zain love aliya a lot,but what happen with her?
finally she accept him.waiting for next.




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

Very well written!

I love the shifts between the past and current situation, very smooth! :)
The gradual development of love is nice too <3
I'm eager to see what makes Aliya behave like that though. I'm guessing her earlier boyfriend abused her (šŸ¤”)
Oh well, great job! :)
Update soon <3


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Glad you liked it! 😊

You'll find out about Aaliyah in the next part!

You're right about the abuse but it's not always by a boyfriend šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey

This was so good <3

the way you described his feelings was amazing <3
I'm sorry I can not comment on your FF now, cause of my boards.
I'll be regular with my comments from 26th onwards :)
Sorry again.
Update this part soon.


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Really glad you liked it! 😊

It's ok! Take your time!

The next part is coming up in a bit! 😊

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