Originally posted by: AnotherAdmirer
I dont know how to begin. I saw the VM again. It's so true, each person will find a story in it, and that's the beauty of it.And once I heard your version, I am left stunned.Those two were indeed life-changing moments... that is an amazing insight, you said it perfectly well.I Love your take on them being the light, I couldn't nail this. Vibrant but those shades of grey, I perceived it as darkness around them, which was trying to engulf them but they shined bright fighting it, but it's them the light in the dark. ๐I don't know how you wished it's lengthy version to be but this VM is perfect. you are a skilled VM-maker, looking forward to more of your work. Do you write? Have you ever tried?Luv ZJ ๐ค
Sorry, totally forgot to revert back here. I am glad my version did make sense. And I guess we will never know if a longer version was available, how it could have been.
And nope, I don't write. I had made some very feeble attempts at it, which trust me were very very very bad. But my language, grammar, vocabulary has been increasing. I read a lot of fiction, especially romance, so that might rub off on me.๐๐
Some days, yes, I do feel like writing some of my imaginations. But I never got the confidence to go ahead with it, I feel myself lacking at a lot of instances. ๐