OS:i will never leave u part 2 updated ( page 3)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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well yesterday i thought of a story in my mind about ZaYa.this is my first OS.i don't think it would be so good but hope u all like it😃


zain's given period of one month had got over.and eventually zain abdullah had won it over aaliya and as he said aaliya had herself made a decision to leave zain .now Aaliya was at her home in bhopal.her family members didn't know about the truth about why she had come here.aaliya had made a simple excuse hoping that something would turn up and give her courage to tell the truth before its too late.it had been just one week that she had come to bopal

aaliya had just finished praying and was reciting Quran .Then her phone started to ring.aaliya thought it must be Zain😛. He had not given even one call after she left barkat villa😔.though aaliya had left on her own decision she had a small hope that Zain would take her back home and also back into his life.with a hope she went to pick up the phone.but it was not zain but it was chand bibi. aliiya wondered why chand bibi was calling so early in the morning?she usuallly calls her but not so early.aaliya picked up the phone

aaliya :'assalamualikum chandd jaan,how are u'
chand bibi:'walaikumussalam aaliya beti,i am fine .i had called u to give an important messsage'
aaliya;(why is chand jaan is looking a tensed)what important message?why are u looking tensed?is evrything there okay?
chand bibi:its about Zain'

Aaliya's heart beat just stopped for one second.zain the name she yearned to hear but without knowing why she always wanted to hear about him,to feel the presence of him.being one week away from him had made her feel the missing part of her life slowly and slowly.she hoped that nothing bad had happened to him

aliyya:Zain.what happened to him?is he okay?
chandi bibi: wo alliya zain met with an accident

Aaliya was shocked to hear this😲 .it was like as everything in her world had come to an end.though aaliya didn't hate nor love zain .she would never imagine of something happened to him.she had thousnads of questions in her mind ..she wanted to know what had happened to him?how he was?but no words were coming out.
chandbibi:aaliya are u there?aaliya...
aaliya:hann
chandbibi;don't worry aaliya we are with him.he is in the city hospital in room no 243.ii have to go dear.don't worry.kudhahafis
aaliya;kudhahafis

aaliya had no moment to think about what she had to do .she quickly booked a ticket to mumbai and had reached Mumbai.all the way from bhopal to mumbai aaliya had cried thinking about zain.she had no time to tell anyone.she was just praying from allah that nothing should happen to zain

finally she reached the hospital and she rushed to the room where chand bibi had told where zain was.she didn't want to waste even second .
when she reached the room her mother-in-law suraiya begum was there.
.aaliya rushed near her and asked 'mami,what happened to zain?how is he now?'
suraiya ;he is fine and u don't have to worry about him .we his family members are there to take care of him
Aaliya:'i want to seee zain 😭."
suraiya;;reallly what kind of a girl are u aaliya gulam haider?when u want to go u leave zain and go and when u need to come u come back.what do u think about yourself
aaliya did not want to stand even second without going near to zain.she was already heartbroken hearing about zain's accident.it hurted her more hearing her mother in laws words.it was true that she left him but she had not left wholeheartdely. no one except she and allah knew that she had left an important part of her life when she went away.now,she wanted to see him,her most important part of her life.no one can stop her from go near him not even his mother
Aaliya;mami i don't think i have to explain to u what kind of a character i am.i am zain's wife and i have every right to be with him.i don't need anyones permisson for that.and remember i am not aaliya gulam haider but aaliya zain abdullah'
with that she didn't even wait for a reply,she went i to the room while her mother in law was standing shocked to hear what she had just said.

there in the room zain was in the bed all bandaged ,and unconscious😭.aaliya was shattered inside seeing the state of zain.she went near zain and sat beside him.a tear rolled from her eye.she slowly touched zain.it was giving her so much pain to seee him in this state😭.

'ZAIN ,i won't ever leave u again.even if you want me to leave from you i won't ever leave u.never.this is my promise to u.i promise that i will never leave u zain abdullah.i will always be there for u ."



it was the end of the story hope u all like it.if its not good u could tell em howto improve.don't forget to share what u think 😃


part 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102025455


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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os.it is short and emotion.want to see zain reaction see aliya.want a other part plz.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i oved the OS.i loved how aaliya was waiting for zains call and the way she fellt when she heard about his accident.and it showed her strong character when she said those words to mother-in-law.awesome work continue soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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continue writing😃
Edited by ZaYaVeeBa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it..Plz write more :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was Short but Emotional..
Please continue this OS.I want to see zain's reaction seeing Aliya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os good work..pls write next part abt zain's emotions😊
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THUMPS UP... TASTE THE THUNDER
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thankz😳
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Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

nice os.it is short and emotion.want to see zain reaction see aliya.want a other part plz.

thanxz .if i have time i'll try to write.thankz for the valuable comments😃

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