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Posted: 11 years ago
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the 2nd part of the OS
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aaliya was sitting near zain.it had been nearly 3 hours and still he hadn't opened his eye.aaliya was looking at his innocent face wishing and praying that he should open his eyes at least once .she was feeling very weak😔.she had not eaten anything after her last nights dinner except for a cup of tea.her yearning to see zain opening his eyes did not make her feel the weakness at that moment chand bibi came

aaliya beti,tum ghar jakar aram karo hum hena zain ke pass.i will come with u and others would stay with him'
aaliya did 't want to leave zain even for a second
'nehi,chand jaan i will stay with zain"
'she pleaded but chand bibi did not want aaliya to be near him at this state of health.aaliya's pleadings were in vain .finally she had to go after chand bibi said that she could come back after one hour. with much repentance ,aaliya left the room .she was looking at him hoping that before she leave he would open his eyes but still zain was unconscious

30 minutes after aaliya left finally zain opened his eyes slowly .
all of his family members were there but only one person was missing and that was aaliya.his eyes was continously searching for her but she was not there

it was true that zain desperately wanted aaliya to leave him and finally it had happened but his happiness was not complete.some thing was bothering him.though he wanted to push that feeling away from his mind he was not able to do that.he was missing the presence ofr her,he was missing the fights they had everyday but he could not realize why he was feeling all these feelings ,why he was missing her?these questions were still unanswered.

'why isn't aaliya here?wouldn't she come once and see me ?i am in a desperate state and can't she even come and take care of me?why aaliya ?why" these questions were rushing in his mind unknowingly.he did not want these questions to arise but he could not stop him self.

doctor came and told others to go out while zain could take some rest.
then aaliya came after resting a bit at barkat villa.she was feeling restless there.she wanted desperately to go but chand bibi was not letting her go.aaliya wished that the time would fly away and finally she was able to go to the hospital

finally aaliya reached near zain.zain opened his eyes a bit feeling the presence of her... the presence that he was yearning for so many days.yes she was there .she was there for him.unknowingly to zain ,a smile formed in his face

aaliya was relieved and happy to see the smile on zains face when he saw her.but she was unaware of the fact that this happiness won't last for long

hope u all like it share ur views😃





Edited by luvnishal97 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its awsome dear
i loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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finally zain open his eyes.he also feel restless for aliya.waiting for next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
oh wow!👏 lovely story cutie!👍🏼❤️ really loved reading it! do write more on ZaYa pleeaassee!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update finally zain has opened his eyes and he s happy seeing aaliya yippe plz update the enxt part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmmm vry nc it was.. Loved it... Continue soon

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