Puchki Ki Zindage (Part 4 Added)

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Simra

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi everyone. This story is about Puchki our loved character. My story will start from the point where Rama asks for Prem. It will be based on the normal story but will have more action. Hope you enjoy and please comment. These stars (*****) mean the setting has changed. Will add part 4 soon.

Part 1

Rama storms into the Sanghvi house. She shouts Purva's name loudly. Purva and the others comes running. They ask what's wrong. "My kid has just died and your asking what's wrong" Rama says. Purva tries to calm her. But Rama is more angrier then ever. "Puchki has died only because of you so you'll have to pay for that." "I want Prem" Rama says. Purva, Mihir and Smirti are shocked. Mihir is very angry. Purva feels very sick and faints. Rama carries on talking badly about Purva. Mihir runs and calls the docter. Kamini is annoyed by Rama. Mihir also rings Aakashi and Anokhi. Purva wakes up. Rama walks up to Purva and tells her that she only has a week to give her Prem. Rama goes away.

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Puchki wakes up she is in a strange house. She tries to get up But a lady comes and tells her to rest. The lady brings her some food and water. Puchki sees loads of wounds on her arms. Ointment has been applied to them. The lady asks Puchki what her name is. Puchki says she can't remember anything. The lady tells Puchki not to worry they will get her home soon. "Sunita give the girl a blanket since it's cold." A man says. Sunita gets Puchki a blanket.

Precap - Aakashi slaps Anokhi. Purva tells her this is no way to solve matters.

Please press the "Like" button if you like my work and would like me to carry on. And thanks for the comments.

Edited by Simz786 - 14 years ago

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Riyaa147

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice start 👍🏼
continue soon!!

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Good work. waiting for the next part

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 2

Purva is upset. Aakashi, Anokhi and Smirti decide to stay at the Sanghvi house for a few days. Smirti is annoyed that no-one has asked her about the Prem situation.
Everyone is upset over then next few days.
A few days later Purva decides that to keep Rama happy and to avoid trouble she will give Prem away. Smirti fights with Purva and says she has no right to decide about Prem since she isn't her mum, Anokhi agrees. Aakashi and Purva are shocked. Kamini tells Smirti not to argue with her older sister.
Smirti says she wont let them take Prem anywhere. Smirti takes Prem and run into a room and locks the door. Aakashi says that Smirti has turned mad again. Anokhi yells at Aakashi and says it's unfair to Smirti to talk like this about her. Aakashi slaps her. "What way is this to talk to your older sister" Aakashi says. Anokhi runs off crying.
Purva tells Aakashi that this is no way to solve these matters.

Precap - Anokhi tells Mihir about what hapenned.

Please press the "Like" button if you like my work and would like me to carry on. And thanks for the comments.

Edited by Simz786 - 14 years ago

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Riyaa147

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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome part 2
hope this would happen in the show
and good anokhi is with smriti and akashi needs a slap

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Simra

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Part 3

Anokhi is back and she has a angry look on her face.Anokhi goes to the kitchen and gets some food and Prem's milk bottle. Everyone is banging on the door. Kamini is secretly worried about Prem and hopes that Smirti wont do anything stupid. Anokhi tells everyone to back off as she wants to talk to Smirti. Everyone goes and sits down in the hall. Smirti lets Anokhi in. Smirti slams the door shut and locks it again. Anokhi gives Smirti the food. Smirti picks at it but doesen't eat much. Smirti feeds Prem the milk.
Smirti asks Anokhi if everyone is asking about her. Anokhi says wait till Mihir Jiju comes home i'll tell him about everyone's cruelty towards you. Anokhi opens the door and walks out. Mihir comes home. Anokhi runs to tell him about what has just hapenned. Mihir is stunned. Mihir decides to talk to Smirti. Mihir talks to Smirti.
. Mihir tells Smirti that he is sorry that Prem has to be given to Rama. They both cry and hug each other. Mihir tells Smirti that he misses her. Smirti says that the unborn baby should be given away, Mihir agrees.

Precap - Mihir tells everyone about his desicion. Puchki remembers something about her familly.

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Edited by Simz786 - 14 years ago

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Simra

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Part 4

Mihir tells Smirti that he will tell everyone about his desicion right now.
Mihir tells Purva that she should give her own child to Rama. Purva and Kamini are really shocked. Purva doesen't want to argue so she agrees. Smirti apologises for being so rude and says she was only protecting her child. Smirti notices that Purva isn't really happy so she tells everyone that Prem will be given instead. All the sisters are once again together. They are sad but try to be happy. Rama told them that they have to give her Prem in a months time.

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Puchki is sitting down. Sunita tries to ask Puchki to remember something. Puchki says she can remember that there was a nice person who she called Shota Saithani. Sunita asks more information but Puchki get annoyed and tells her to go away. A few weeks later Puchki is healed. Sunita tells her husband Ajay to take Puchki to the bazaar and buy her some clothes. Ajay takes Puchki to the bazaar. Puchki sees someone. She shouts "Shota Saith" Mihir doesen't hear her. Mihir gets in the car and drives off. Ajay quickly notes down the numberplate.

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Mihir arrives home. Mihir went to the bazaar because he wanted to buy some toys for Prem before he left. He gives them to Purva.

Precap - Ajay tries to track down the car owner that Puchki recognised.

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Edited by Simz786 - 14 years ago

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Simra

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It's Prem's last day. Purva and Smirti are sad. Mihir says they should Prem away with a smile. They orgainise a party with balloons. Purva and Smirti just manage to crack a smile. They bought a cake for Prem. Anokhi and Aakashi give him toys.

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Ajay goes to the Police Station and shows the Police Officer what he wrote down. The Police Officer tells Ajay the house of the owner of the car.

Edited by Simz786 - 14 years ago