laakham OS...ONLY MINE

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Posted: 9 years ago
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ok I dnt believe m gonna write an OS thnk u dear u all encouraged me to write this is my first try so plzz bear me with my mistakes n plz my English is nt tht good so sorry in advance... in my OS laakhan is obviously as a hot headed man but minus punishments Poonam as usual scared of Laakhan... M starting m story when they get married nt like they shown in d show normally wd all rituals they finally married to each other... For Laakhan it was a dream come true moment n for poonam d mst hard moment of her life ... Poonam in a bridal avtaar waiting for laakhan when finally he entered sitting besides her but was little nervous he dont know wht to do n from where to start finally he broke the slice... Laakhan: do u need anything? she nodded in a no.. L: u should change now u must b tired...n she went to washroom to change ..actually laakhan had a secret desire to watch poonam while sleeping..(quite wired but he has so many desire )..poonam slept and he watched her all night sleeping peacefully... nxt morning she woke n found Laakhan sleeping sitting on bed right infrnt her... today was her real test...she went to washroom to freshen up n was getting ready when Laakhan woke up...obviously for him tht was d mst beautiful sight he ever saw poonma getting ready wearing all d accessories n other stuff...when suddenly hold her hand ... ok so this is d first part of d OS I know I know plzz dnt throw tomato n egg on me my English is really bad sorry for bearing me plz tell me should I continue or not there is only 2 parts

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bhavi.k thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Do continue dear...mine english is so bad stil i wrote on os..its gets better with writing more..waiting for oart two..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ashu , you should continue , that's how you will learn.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ashu nice plot ...just pen it down and keep writing ...u will get better with time
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oye jaldi 2nd part likh le yaar..its interesting 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thnk u bhavi,andy, saba n mitu for ur comments overwhelmed ...definitely I will continue d last part n will try my level best to write as good as other writers on this forum ...muaaah
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ashu...it is nice, short and sweet..
Do continue writing...will wait for nxt part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice second part jaldi se chahiye

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