||Rudhita Poem Series|| 2nd Poem on page 3||

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Posted: 4 years ago
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My guillotined feelings



Humid shadows hovering all around

Complete serenity and no one to be found...


What a relief of the tears falling

And the memories they keep on crawling...


Following the fate I went to see you dear

But all I got.. Memories which I couldn't gather...


I took nothing from there

Fortune's mind games... Gosh it's not fare...


I saw you crowned with beauty

But we had a distance of infinity...


Bondita... I swear... I payed a lot

But believe me... There's nothing I got...


You weren't here... It's me who felt the pain

So leave me alone... Your actions will go in vain...

- Anirudh Roy Chaudhary


Bonjour readers 🤗

It's me again 😛

It's a poem I've tried 😃

Hope you all liked it 🤔

Do comment 👍🏼

BTW it's the thread where I will continue to post some relevant poems 😳

Till then

Happy reading ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Some more tags 😳

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Some more tags 😛

Edited by Blackrose92 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blackrose92

My guillotined feelings



Humid shadows hovering all around

Complete serenity and no one to be found...


What a relief of the tears falling

And the memories they keep on crawling...


Following the fate I went to see you dear

But all I got.. Memories which I couldn't gather...


I took nothing from there

Fortune's mind games... Gosh it's not fare...


I saw you crowned with beauty

But we had a distance of infinity...


Bondita... I swear... I payed a lot

But believe me... There's nothing I got...


You weren't here... It's me who felt the pain

So leave me alone... Your actions will go in vain...

- Anirudh Roy Chaudhary


Bonjour readers 🤗

It's me again 😛

It's a poem I've tried 😃

Hope you all liked it 🤔

Do comment 👍🏼

BTW it's the thread where I will continue to post some relevant poems 😳

Till then

Happy reading ❤️

@ ul: can he leave her alone when she is in pain and felt lonely. Then why will she do it😭. Superb lines. Amazing 👏bass aise hi weekend's ko hum sab doston ne guzrdenge. Gloominess ko paas nahi aanedenge
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: mprvn36

@ ul: can he leave her alone when she is in pain and felt lonely. Then why will she do it😭. Superb lines. Amazing 👏bass aise hi weekend's ko hum sab doston ne guzrdenge. Gloominess ko paas nahi aanedenge

haan aise hi guzardenge.... Gloominess paas toh kya aankhen uthakar nehi dekhega😎

Likhkar rakh lo🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aapko tag karna bhul gayi thi 😭 sorry sorry 👎🏼🥺maaf kardena🤔

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blackrose92

haan aise hi guzardenge.... Gloominess paas toh kya aankhen uthakar nehi dekhega😎

Likhkar rakh lo🤣

yeh rangu channel ne hamko dhoka diya Saturday ko humae cheenke. I will also post another FF. Just in a process of completion
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blackrose92

Aapko tag karna bhul gayi thi 😭 sorry sorry 👎🏼🥺maaf kardena🤔


Arre arre.. isliye maafi kyu 🤗


It's a wonderful poem, you are very talented my friend! ❤️


Please write more, it was perfect echo of Ani's feelings.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow. It was beautiful. It beautifully captured the feelings of Ani. You are very talented. Please write more. ❤️

Edited by Smiley.6 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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It's beautiful Snan ❤️

A perfect portrayal of Anirudh's feelings

This man is high like sky and deep like ocean , having ideologies which touch the sky and a heart full of emotions which is as deep as ocean !!!

"The emotion that can break your heart is sometimes the very one that heals it."

Love you to the moon nd back Snan 🤗

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