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Snanpurna

@Blackrose92

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Posted: 4 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Shrabana99
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It's about Aniruddh.. So santi de padh ke review deti hu.. okk..😳

sure dear 👍🏼

Take your time ☺️

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ishkaraforever

@ishkaraforever

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Posted: 4 years ago

#22

I wish the same too, sweetie

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Snanpurna

@Blackrose92

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Posted: 4 years ago

#23

The chuffed night

Frowning at your statement I took the lead

If I had a wish, I'd wish to bewitch you with greed...

Greed to be mine.. Greed to love me to the core

Greed to spend amorous nights together at the seashore...

Believing your words I pressed my lower lip

Closed your eyes and saw your tears drip...

The moon showed up to be a full moon night

You hugged me in the serenity of moon light...

The sky blushed due to the lover's view

The most chuffed night I've ever spent with you...

~~Bondita~~ ~~Das~~

Bonjour readers 🤗

It's me again 😛

It's the second poem I've written...

Hope you all liked it 🤔

Do comment 😳

Till then

Happy reading❤️

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Snanpurna

@Blackrose92

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Posted: 4 years ago

#24

Some more tags 😳

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Aashi

@Aashi_009

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Posted: 4 years ago

#25

This one is beautiful Snan ❤️

Her greed of being with him always , her unconditional love for him , her trust on him !!!

She is on her mission to make her his and his hers !! Let her this greed be fulfilled as her this wish will bring happiness and peace in their lives

Emotions are penned beautifully dear

If life is a Rain he is her raincoat 🥀

Edited by Aashi_009 - 4 years ago

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Snanpurna

@Blackrose92

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Posted: 4 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Aashi_009
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Shanti se padhungi...then I'll write 👍🏼
Pakka promise 🤗

okkk sure Ashu🤗❤️

Edited by Blackrose92 - 4 years ago

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1194386

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Posted: 4 years ago

#27

Both poems are written well.... the emotions the characters feel have been put down beautifully

Edited by jdr_26 - 4 years ago

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ishkaraforever

@ishkaraforever

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Posted: 4 years ago

#28

Oof, this one. I have never been in love but I think this reminds of that love sonnet - if thou must love me by Elizabeth Barrett Browning.

This one was so pretty. The greed for getting his love is now her mission in life and she does not want to stop. She wants to be his, and wants him to be hers, spend her every second with him. For her that would be a bliss abd blessed life.

I love this ❤️