Drabble : Unnamed Feelings

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aniruddh was pacing up and down on the terrace. "Nahi maine cheating nahi ki, Shotti." He could here Bondita say while Batuk blamed her for cheating in the game of chess. "Yahan andhera hai iss liye tumhein dikha nahi samjhe." Bondita said. Not that it was really dark. It was a full moon day and all the stars in the sky made it just the perfect night for a night out on the Roy Choudhury Mansion's terrace. Aniruddh didn't pay much heed to what those two were saying because he had other things to concentrate on, more so, some unknown feelings to cater to. From the past few days, to be specific, since the time he saw his dear wife with that 'male' friend of hers from her college. He was a broad minded person for the era to be honest but the way that guy looked at his wife didn't sit right with him. That guy looked so much in love and he hated it. No, Aniruddh Roy Choudhary didn't love his wife, how could he? Or, did he? But why did he feel so angry towards this specific guy out of all the people? He had no answer to it, or maybe he did have, he just didn't want to accept. "Pati Babu, idhar dekhiye Batuk ko. Ye mujhe tang kar Raha." He could hear Bondita complain. "Kyun tang kar rahe Bondita ko Batuk?" Aniruddh said, in a little fake anger tone. "Aap bas apni patni ka saath Dena, Mera nahi." Batuk said, disappointed. "Haan toh wada Kiya hai unhonein har waqt saath dene ka, Apne vachan se peeche hat sakte hain kya ab pati babu?" Bondita said with a giggle. Aniruddh looked at her and smiled. Brushing aside his feelings hewent to join them in their game of chess. You just don't need to answer all your inner questions, it's not worth it!







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Another one that was dumped in my draft section. Why Octo why!!!!! Ugh! Sorry guys🤔



PS : to everyone who's just reading and liking this and not commenting, paap lagega bata rahi hoon. 😭

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Octothorpe

Aniruddh was pacing up and down on the terrace. "Nahi maine cheating nahi ki, Shotti." He could here Bondita say while Batuk blamed her for cheating in the game of chess. "Yahan andhera hai iss liye tumhein dikha nahi samjhe." Bondita said. Not that it was really dark. It was a full moon day and all the stars in the sky made it just the perfect night for a night out on the Roy Choudhury Mansion's terrace. Aniruddh didn't pay much heed to what those two were saying because he had other things to concentrate on, more so, some unknown feelings to cater to. From the past few days, to be specific, since the time he saw his dear wife with that 'male' friend of hers from her college. He was a broad minded person for the era to be honest but the way that guy looked at his wife didn't sit right with him. That guy looked so much in love and he hated it. No, Aniruddh Roy Choudhary didn't love his wife, how could he? Or, did he? But why did he feel so angry towards this specific guy out of all the people? He had no answer to it, or maybe he did have, he just didn't want to accept. "Pati Babu, idhar dekhiye Batuk ko. Ye mujhe tang kar Raha." He could hear Bondita complain. "Kyun tang kar rahe Bondita ko Batuk?" Aniruddh said, in a little fake anger tone. "Aap bas apni patni ka saath Dena, Mera nahi." Batuk said, disappointed. "Haan toh wada Kiya hai unhonein har waqt saath dene ka, Apne vachan se peeche hat sakte hain kya ab pati babu?" Bondita said with a giggle. Aniruddh looked at her and smiled. Brushing aside his feelings hewent to join them in their game of chess. You just don't need to answer all your inner questions, it's not worth it!







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Another one that was dumped in my draft section. Why Octo why!!!!! Ugh! Sorry guys🤔



PS : to everyone who's just reading and liking this and not commenting, paap lagega bata rahi hoon. 😭

It's beautiful dear❤️.
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Posted: 5 years ago
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You freaking read my mind and posted a jealous Ani drabble. God bless you. This is amazing amazing amazing Octo.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Octothorpe

Aniruddh was pacing up and down on the terrace. "Nahi maine cheating nahi ki, Shotti." He could here Bondita say while Batuk blamed her for cheating in the game of chess. "Yahan andhera hai iss liye tumhein dikha nahi samjhe." Bondita said. Not that it was really dark. It was a full moon day and all the stars in the sky made it just the perfect night for a night out on the Roy Choudhury Mansion's terrace. Aniruddh didn't pay much heed to what those two were saying because he had other things to concentrate on, more so, some unknown feelings to cater to. From the past few days, to be specific, since the time he saw his dear wife with that 'male' friend of hers from her college. He was a broad minded person for the era to be honest but the way that guy looked at his wife didn't sit right with him. That guy looked so much in love and he hated it. No, Aniruddh Roy Choudhary didn't love his wife, how could he? Or, did he? But why did he feel so angry towards this specific guy out of all the people? He had no answer to it, or maybe he did have, he just didn't want to accept. "Pati Babu, idhar dekhiye Batuk ko. Ye mujhe tang kar Raha." He could hear Bondita complain. "Kyun tang kar rahe Bondita ko Batuk?" Aniruddh said, in a little fake anger tone. "Aap bas apni patni ka saath Dena, Mera nahi." Batuk said, disappointed. "Haan toh wada Kiya hai unhonein har waqt saath dene ka, Apne vachan se peeche hat sakte hain kya ab pati babu?" Bondita said with a giggle. Aniruddh looked at her and smiled. Brushing aside his feelings hewent to join them in their game of chess. You just don't need to answer all your inner questions, it's not worth it!







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Another one that was dumped in my draft section. Why Octo why!!!!! Ugh! Sorry guys🤔



PS : to everyone who's just reading and liking this and not commenting, paap lagega bata rahi hoon. 😭

Kyun nahi karenge comment... Zarur karenge... It's so sweet to see Jealous Ani😳 beautifully penned down by you❤️. Really enjoyed reading it.

(P.S If u can, then think of writing a short story on same or similar concept)

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Posted: 5 years ago
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If we comment on this drabble saying it's great, well defined inner conflict of a possessive husband, then hum ko kya milega Octo dear???😛🤗

Edited by Viswasruti - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Octothorpe

Aniruddh was pacing up and down on the terrace. "Nahi maine cheating nahi ki, Shotti." He could here Bondita say while Batuk blamed her for cheating in the game of chess. "Yahan andhera hai iss liye tumhein dikha nahi samjhe." Bondita said. Not that it was really dark. It was a full moon day and all the stars in the sky made it just the perfect night for a night out on the Roy Choudhury Mansion's terrace. Aniruddh didn't pay much heed to what those two were saying because he had other things to concentrate on, more so, some unknown feelings to cater to. From the past few days, to be specific, since the time he saw his dear wife with that 'male' friend of hers from her college. He was a broad minded person for the era to be honest but the way that guy looked at his wife didn't sit right with him. That guy looked so much in love and he hated it. No, Aniruddh Roy Choudhary didn't love his wife, how could he? Or, did he? But why did he feel so angry towards this specific guy out of all the people? He had no answer to it, or maybe he did have, he just didn't want to accept. "Pati Babu, idhar dekhiye Batuk ko. Ye mujhe tang kar Raha." He could hear Bondita complain. "Kyun tang kar rahe Bondita ko Batuk?" Aniruddh said, in a little fake anger tone. "Aap bas apni patni ka saath Dena, Mera nahi." Batuk said, disappointed. "Haan toh wada Kiya hai unhonein har waqt saath dene ka, Apne vachan se peeche hat sakte hain kya ab pati babu?" Bondita said with a giggle. Aniruddh looked at her and smiled. Brushing aside his feelings hewent to join them in their game of chess. You just don't need to answer all your inner questions, it's not worth it!







______________



Another one that was dumped in my draft section. Why Octo why!!!!! Ugh! Sorry guys🤔



PS : to everyone who's just reading and liking this and not commenting, paap lagega bata rahi hoon. 😭

it's amazing dear 🤗
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Posted: 5 years ago
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It's beautiful ❤️ After yesterday's episode now I badly want to see a protective/jealous Ani because afterall he should get a taste of his own medicine 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Octo🤗

So again back with a beautiful drabble haa😉

As usual different and beautiful ❤️

Yaar I too wish to convey in short words

The last sentence speaks volume❤️

Come up again with another one okay🤗

Don't ever call this crap or boring🤬

Edited by Rudhitafan - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Octothorpe

Aniruddh was pacing up and down on the terrace. "Nahi maine cheating nahi ki, Shotti." He could here Bondita say while Batuk blamed her for cheating in the game of chess. "Yahan andhera hai iss liye tumhein dikha nahi samjhe." Bondita said. Not that it was really dark. It was a full moon day and all the stars in the sky made it just the perfect night for a night out on the Roy Choudhury Mansion's terrace. Aniruddh didn't pay much heed to what those two were saying because he had other things to concentrate on, more so, some unknown feelings to cater to. From the past few days, to be specific, since the time he saw his dear wife with that 'male' friend of hers from her college. He was a broad minded person for the era to be honest but the way that guy looked at his wife didn't sit right with him. That guy looked so much in love and he hated it. No, Aniruddh Roy Choudhary didn't love his wife, how could he? Or, did he? But why did he feel so angry towards this specific guy out of all the people? He had no answer to it, or maybe he did have, he just didn't want to accept. "Pati Babu, idhar dekhiye Batuk ko. Ye mujhe tang kar Raha." He could hear Bondita complain. "Kyun tang kar rahe Bondita ko Batuk?" Aniruddh said, in a little fake anger tone. "Aap bas apni patni ka saath Dena, Mera nahi." Batuk said, disappointed. "Haan toh wada Kiya hai unhonein har waqt saath dene ka, Apne vachan se peeche hat sakte hain kya ab pati babu?" Bondita said with a giggle. Aniruddh looked at her and smiled. Brushing aside his feelings hewent to join them in their game of chess. You just don't need to answer all your inner questions, it's not worth it!







______________



Another one that was dumped in my draft section. Why Octo why!!!!! Ugh! Sorry guys🤔



PS : to everyone who's just reading and liking this and not commenting, paap lagega bata rahi hoon. 😭


I am usually a silent reader, pressing the like button is also quite a dharamsankat for my mostly socially anxious personality.... but your PS really cracked me up! Ab paap nahi lagega because after reading and liking, comment bhi kardiya! 😂😂😂And I've thoroughly enjoyed a few of your other drabbles too here in BB forum!



You do write, of course, so exquisitely and very concisely too - conveying so much more in less than half a page! Which is nothing less than a very admirable talent! Makes room for an awesome reading experience, and for a lot of fun and imagination of the setting of the story in your piece🤩



Please don't save these in drafts! Post them all, please, if possible, for they are too good! They can certainly be accompanied by a quirky PS like the one above, which will hopefully make silent readers like me like & comment!

Edited by HahaHeheHuhu9 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Tell me one thing darling, why do you save such beautiful drafts and don't share wih us...? Tumhe paap lagega for not posting here..smiley36

Now coming to your drabble, it was such a wonderful piece of work Octo!...The way you conveyed the inner turmoil of Ani was amazing..💔

He seemed to be so possessive and jealous and now I want more of it..😆

I want you to post all your amazing drafts here..Don't chupaoing from us nahi to tumhe paap lagega Octo..😛

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