Rudhita Drabble: A Love Astray - Page 3

Originally posted by: Soma84

Though it was heartbreaking to read about Bondita's unrequited love, yet this concept and your writing was very beautiful. Had a good time reading this 🤗

Glad you had a good time!❤️😊

Originally posted by: Home786

Sujz this is so wonderful behen..Thank you for writing this. This is truly appreciative and wonderful👏👏

I just loved it. In fact, this drabble made me emotional as it reminded me of something personal...

You have penned down the emotions so aptly.. I can connect to their feelings here. It's really good Sujz.. Emotional stories had a great impact on readers.. And you have slayed it with your words so gently yet with damn superb perfection... This is my favorite work of yours... Superb it is!!!👍🏼

Bondita's pain and turmoil of losing close one can be picturised clearly with the way you presented it... Thanks again for writing this...

Do write more of this emotional stories.. I liked it..❤️🤗

Shaheen🤗

@bold, weird that this idea kind of creeped up from one of my personal experiences. I am sorry for you whatever that was.

Thank You so much Yaar. I would like if you checkout the Ball Dance OS too.

I will surely write more of Emotional Os'. I like doing them. Thank You❤️

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Pain and sad 💔

Sujz I always wonder how do you decipher the emotions rightly in your wordings.! You are an amazing writer 😳 Don't ever stop writing ❤️

This drabble was heartbreaking 💔 with heavy heart I'm saying this , I don't like this ARC of yours 😈 can't see bon crying and she will become vulnerable without her patibabu.! How could he do this to bon? 😭

I'm sad after reading 😭 this is so heavy for me 🥺

Hey,

Glad you think I am a good writer. Thank You. It really means a lot. I would try to not stop writing until I die, but I am not sure though, but I would try.

Even I don't like this ARC being biased about Rudhita, but can we blame him for wanting to finally live with the love of his life when he fulfilled all his responsibilities towards Bondita? Wouldn't it be selfish? towards him and even Saudamini who waited a lifetime for him?

Yes, Bondita crying makes me cry too. But no, she is a strong lady. ❤️

Thank You for commenting Lalz.

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Maar dala re!

Ani ko ChiniMini ke saath 💔

But its so well written.. Amazing to read... I wish I could have that sort of skill 😆 I really liked the raw agony you explained

Aww, Thank You.😊

Originally posted by: briti_asfiya

I actually cried. No one's doing it like you. You're the best at this. Shotti. 😃

Jhooth nahi hai yeh, sau pratishat sach hai.

:)

Originally posted by: Prit_007

It's not flattering it's a fact I wanna learn but koi mujhe sikhata hi nhi 🥺 but fir v mai apni crap stories post kar deti hoon 😆

Prit I have read your work. I binge read Pyaar Ka Izhaar some weeks ago, staying up at night. You are a really good writer Prit. I had downloaded the story offline to read, thus I couldn't comment and then I didn't get time. But I do read your works and I really love them. Its not crap at all. ❤️

Originally posted by: Sujz

Prit I have read your work. I binge read Pyaar Ka Izhaar some weeks ago, staying up at night. You are a really good writer Prit. I had downloaded the story offline to read, thus I couldn't comment and then I didn't get time. But I do read your works and I really love them. Its not crap at all. ❤️

Thank you so much behen ❤️ but I know I am not that great 😆

But I would love if you share your views and critics too

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Thank you so much behen ❤️ but I know I am not that great 😆

But I would love if you share your views and critics too

Trust me I want to, but I am not getting time.

I will do it surely once I get time. I will read it again and give you a long comment. Only if I had some time...😒

Originally posted by: Sujz

Trust me I want to, but I am not getting time.

I will do it surely once I get time. I will read it again and give you a long comment. Only if I had some time...😒

Okay I have written so many stories time nikal kr sab pe critics share karna 🤗

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Okay I have written so many stories time nikal kr sab pe critics share karna 🤗

for sure!

Me is waiting for the ball dance one. That's dedicated to you.❤️