Rudhita Drabble: A Love Astray - Page 2

Pain and sad 💔

Sujz I always wonder how do you decipher the emotions rightly in your wordings.! You are an amazing writer 😳 Don't ever stop writing ❤️

This drabble was heartbreaking 💔 with heavy heart I'm saying this , I don't like this ARC of yours 😈 can't see bon crying and she will become vulnerable without her patibabu.! How could he do this to bon? 😭

I'm sad after reading 😭 this is so heavy for me 🥺

Maar dala re!

Ani ko ChiniMini ke saath 💔

But its so well written.. Amazing to read... I wish I could have that sort of skill 😆 I really liked the raw agony you explained

Originally posted by: briti_asfiya

It's bittersweet. I don't know what say apart from typing that you are a brilliant writer who knows how to pull the strings of heart and when. The icing on the cake was the lyric from Aayat. Brilliant. I'm simply speechless.

Thank You.

Glad you liked it.😊

Originally posted by: wayback2

Its so damn beautiful dear.

I love the way you emote emotions, you are one of the fan fic finest writer whose work i have read in my lifetime.

I dont know what to say, but i did feel Bon 's unrequited love and i can feel her pain, its so beautifully written, all i want was it to be longer, i just couldn't stop reading it, i would love if you can write a ts or whole series on it.. It is one of my fav genre and you wrote it so well.. I just couldn't stop but read it again and again.

Thank you so much for this peice ❤️

@bold Well, I don't know how to reply that... but, glad you felt that way even though I think I am not.

Even I have a fetish for unrequited love or lost love, I really like the pain it gives you know, the pain in itself becomes a way to live when it stays with you for long, its addictive.

I will try to write something similar to this as a TS or SS, but will leave this as it is, I guess the shortness of this is the beauty in it.

Glad you liked it!❤️

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Sujz it's so deep 💔❤️

I can say only one thing you have written a whole story with so much depth with a few words 👏You're an awesome writer.

And that "Ek lafz me chipi kaynaat hai" makes it more meaningful and touching ❤️❤️

I must learn writing drabbles from You and Octo

Prit...😊

@bold yes, even I love that line a lot.

learn? lol. That's flattering. Thank You!

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

It's bittersweet in true sense! Heart breaks for Bondita but can't blame Anirudh either!

Thank You so much dear. ❤️

Originally posted by: Sujz

Thank You.

Glad you liked it.😊

I actually cried. No one's doing it like you. You're the best at this. Shotti. 😃

Jhooth nahi hai yeh, sau pratishat sach hai.

Originally posted by: Sujz

Prit...😊

@bold yes, even I love that line a lot.

learn? lol. That's flattering. Thank You!

It's not flattering it's a fact I wanna learn but koi mujhe sikhata hi nhi 🥺 but fir v mai apni crap stories post kar deti hoon 😆

Originally posted by: Apsana14

Sujz I opened this drable thinking to read some Rudhita moments but you made me cry 😭

Yes if Soudamini would have been a loyal lover their story would have been different. But in this way🥺

Boni was always his responsibility but how can he leave his first love who is waiting for him💔

In a love triangle one heart has to break.. Loved the last para my fav one💔

the way wrote it has my heart❤️

I don't why I am asking but still do give a 2nd thought to continue it.. It will be little complicated as Soudamini is positive still want you to write more of it. If possible then please.

🤗

Sorry for breaking your hopes💔

Yes, I tend to think about it a lot, but I think even if she loved him truly he would have eventually fell in love with Bondita who is that one progressive girl he always wished for and wanted while Saudamini is very conservative and narrow minded. But yeah, this was a different take.

I will leave this as it is, because that's the beauty of it. But will surely think of writing something on this storyline soon.😊❤️

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Omg....this is heart breaking yaar😭

It's so sad yet beautifully written👏

I like reading drabbles since I always find it too difficult to emote through short words..I'm really bad at it

Your story premise is interesting 👍🏼because it opens up a possibility that what turn the story would have taken if mini was really a selfless and dedicated lover....I wish the makers showcased a grey mini but

I honestly can't see bon crying 😒but liked the part she tried to suppress it and smile holding her emotions😭Ani walking away was so sad too😒

The last four lines 👏it's superb ❤️...it concluded the exact summary....😒

Do try more drabbles

try poems too dear ....you have good taste in it👍🏼

Eagerly waiting for your ball dance OS

Aww, thank you so much.

You should try writing a drabble Krish. You cannot decide unless you try.

Grey characters in ITV are almost next to impossible.

Same here, you know when I write, I feel the character Bondita, I kind of live her. Writing her pain makes me cry too and you have no idea how I cried writing this Drabble. Her character will always be very close to my heart. Maybe its because we don't have a face for the elder Bondita that I feel for Bondita a lot more than I would normally.

Thank You so much Krish!❤️