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Posted: 4 years ago

Prit🤗

You're such brilliant writer re👏

I completed upto 7th chapters

It's awesome👍🏼

Mishti is such a cute name givn by aniruddh❤️

Mini ko itna positive bana diya(iski harkatein dekhne isko positive role me dekhna mushkil ho raha hai😆) but I like your twist here😳

Please it's request next chapters ke page numberr mention kar do first page😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujz

Can you please update the whole index so that we can find all the chapter page numbers on the first page rather than going through all the pages?

Jaisi agya 😆

Kar diya behen

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Sorry for being late 🥱

Mujhe laga I read and commented


Aur kitna thadpaogi tum hummein Rudhita ki shadi keliye tum toh makers ki waat laga di🤣

Waise I want only Rudi's in PKI 😆❤️ yahan toh un dono ki alawa aur sab hai 😭

Mujhe bas woh log chaiyea 😭 aur agle update mein un dono ki shaadi bhi puri hone chahiye ba

Inta wait karwaya toh double update dene hoga aur long long long wala update 😳

P.s I love this part and want only Rudi's in PKI

Yaar bahut beman se likha tha and Srishti aur Krish ko Salim Sahab chahiye the kya karun😆

Thoda jyada hi ho gaya Salim Sahab thing😆

Rudhita ki sadi ke liye thoda intezaar to banta hai

Next me sirf Rudi milenge 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: wayback2

I have just started reading your ss..

And i so want to give review of chapter i read.. Because it look so beautiful.. So be ready your notification might be spammed 😆

Chapter 1.

Firstly i love the way you described the scene.

Surely something to learn.. Vi am making my notes😆

And the fall.. Bon in Ani keh bahe.. Haaye

And i am so happy Sampoo And Sauda are smart and good.. I so feel both my bacha 's need them.. But they always disappoint us in show.. At least here they are good❤️

@bold: I would love if my notif spammed this way 😆

OMG 🙈 Writers like you making notes from my story 😲😆 Aise mazak nhi karte Rashi 😆

Fed of Sampoo Mini on show isliye yaha apne man ki kar li 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: listmist

Prit🤗

You're such brilliant writer re👏

I completed upto 7th chapters

It's awesome👍🏼

Mishti is such a cute name givn by aniruddh❤️

Mini ko itna positive bana diya(iski harkatein dekhne isko positive role me dekhna mushkil ho raha hai😆) but I like your twist here😳

Please it's request next chapters ke page numberr mention kar do first page😊

Ash 🤗

Thank you behen ❤️❤️

Mishti mera idea nhi tha 2-3 os maine padhe usme Mishti use kiya sabne maine unhi se inspire hoke naam diya.

Har jagah negative Mini ko dekh ke paresan ho gayi thi mai kya karun thoda positive imagine kar liya 😆

Kar diya Ash 🤗❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Yaar bahut beman se likha tha and Srishti aur Krish ko Salim Sahab chahiye the kya karun😆

Thoda jyada hi ho gaya Salim Sahab thing😆

Rudhita ki sadi ke liye thoda intezaar to banta hai

Next me sirf Rudi milenge 👍🏼

Hahah I know Srishti Salim saab ki fan hei 😆 ab krish bhi kya 😆

❤️❤️


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Hahah I know Srishti Salim saab ki fan hei 😆 ab krish bhi kya 😆

❤️❤️


Ha Shrishti to diwani hai unki 🤣 Krish ko v thoda thoda pasan hai 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Ash 🤗

Thank you behen ❤️❤️

Mishti mera idea nhi tha 2-3 os maine padhe usme Mishti use kiya sabne maine unhi se inspire hoke naam diya.

Har jagah negative Mini ko dekh ke paresan ho gayi thi mai kya karun thoda positive imagine kar liya 😆

Kar diya Ash 🤗❤️

Mishti name is too sweet ghsp ne ML ne FL ko diya tha❤️

Haan acha laga mini ko aisi dekhkar😆

ok raat ko Padhungi aaram se😳😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Prit🤗🤗

Pehle toh ek hug for writing such a cute book

Chap 2 : i absolutely loved the bond between sampoo - mini - bon..

How cute my bacha is.. Always on side of her husband.

Chap 3 : i love this Ani.. How he was like meri Mishti

And then ani - mini - sampoo bond..

Why cant they show us such cute scenes..

Why are only negative characters present in show rn.. Hopefully after leap we get some of those moments there too.

And when Ani said mai samjha dunga❤️❤️


Chap 4 :how much i love this Ani, i cant even express..

So playful, so cute..

And his punishment.. Haaye

Chap 5 : ok i just cant stop reading..

When Ani said ab hum.. Even i expected more.. But he 💔

.. But koi nhi.. I loved the way he filled her hairline and vermilion putting..

Even som is so good in your book i love how Bon teased him.. And Batuk bihari scene was cute and funny..

And the last❤️


Chap 6 : I love this bawarchi babu of yours.. ❤️.

Aww he made from his own hands and all the planning..

Mini is so good..

Wondering how he will propose.. And thankfully I don't have to wait😆

Chap 7.. Aww.. It was such a sweet proposal..

The red saree.. I can imagine how pretty she must be looking..

And then the proposal ❤️

Bondita I love you. Mai tumhe kitna pyaar karta hoo ye to nhi bata sakta. Mai ye v nhi keh skta mai tumhe saagar ki gehraiyo jitna pyaar krta hoo qki ye kehna galat hoga. Kyuki sagar ki gehrai bahut choti hai mere pyaar ke samne. Mai bas itna kehna chahta hoon ki mai tumse bahut bahut pyaar krta hoo itna Jo koi andaza v nahi lga skta.”

Itna acha prit. Man this dialogue.. I fall in love with it ❤️

And bechare Rudhita..🤣mai chali next chap padne


Chap 8 :my god i had a big smile reading the entire chap.. I loved the group.. They are so damn cute. Bechare ani ki special night barbad kr di.. Pr koi nhi sabr ka fal meetha hota hai..

Wondering what the special day it is.. Hopefully Rudhita 's remarriage or something like that.. Chalo chap pdkr aati hu😆

Chap 9 :yesss.. My guess is right.. Rudhita' s marriage

Haye my babies waking up whole night dreaming about each other..

Excited to read next chap to see Ani 's reaction seeing Bon in wedding dress


Chap 10 :haye can it get any better.. Loved this Anirudh so much.. Haye kitna betab hai janab apni dulhan se milne ke lie..

And Mini.. I just love her smartness here.. Hope to read some shower romance.. ❤️


Chap 11 :shit iss baar guess glt ho gya.. Though i was expecting shower romance.. But yeh bhi bhut cute tha..

Them applying hldi..

And his abhi toh bhut kuch baki hai☺️.. I am seriously blushing now myself.. ❤️


Chap 12 : this is so sweet.

Him seeing her photo.. This seriously is the sweetest thing i have ever read.. It was plain beautiful..

I even liked Ananya Som.. They will surely make a good pair..

I read all.. In a day.. But now i feel empty.. I want to read more.. Pls update that too soonish. Me cant wait more.. 😒

Edited by wayback2 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Completed chapter 8 & 9❤️

Bechara aniruddh was so happy to spent night with his wife but sabne plan fuss kar diya😆

Mini bahut hi jyada shararati hai😆

So rudhita remarriage muje laga hi aniruddh babu ek din ki baat hai zara sabar karo☺️

Excited for next part... Wil continue tomorrow❤️

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