Rudhita/Rumini TS: DEVDAS

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hello! I am Aaliya...A ghost you will find roaming in this forum😆!!


So I really love Devdas movie and this TS is somewhat related to it.


Plot:

Anirudh marries a young girl named bondita who is very clever and also curious enough to know about social affairs. However, Anirudh loves Soudamini, his childhood friend, and accepts Bondita as a student to him. Bondita finds out about Anirudh and Soudamini and is confused. What will happen next??


Stay tuned to know!!

Hope you like it!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter 1: "Is loving you a sin??"


Anirudh stops teaching little bondita, as he finds her too sleepy. He closes the book and asks bihari to make bondita sleep. Bihari takes bondita to her room. After arranging his books, Anirudh suddenly remembers that he had to meet Soudamini which he forgot. Anirudh rushes to Soudamini and is stunned to see Soudamini's decorated room. Soudamini comes to him beautifully dressed with a candle burning in her hand.


"Anirudh..I have waiting a long for this moment. Whether you say about your heart's condition or not but I will say..."


"Sou...Soudamini...I can't understand what you are saying...and why have you decorated your room so much??"


"Anirudh...This is not a room! It's my heart!! Yes...my heart has been so beautiful since you stepped in. I....I love you Anirudh..."


"What are saying?? Are you out of your mind? And now stop this drama. "Saying this Anirudh blows out the candle.


"Anirudh...I...I now that you are married but do you have any sense? She's just a small child. I don't have any problem if you also me to adopt her a our daughter!!!"


"Aaa.....so Miss. Soudamini ji you feel that I married her just for a joke? I married her as I wanted to save her...."


"Yes...that's what I am saying you married her to save her Anirudh.."cuts Soudamini.


"Soudamini...forget me and those memories...."softly Anirudh said.


"Forget you?? That childhood love..!! Are you serious Anirudh?? Love is not a joke....and if I feel in love with you is it my fault? Is loving you a sin? I wished only for you!!"wept Soudamini.


"Do you think I didn't love you? Even I did...but I am trying...you should also try.."


"Do you accept Bondita as your wife?"asked Soudamini boldly.


Promo: Anirudh's answer!


Thank you

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Posted: 5 years ago
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just write rudhita/saudamini dont write rumini plsss... what's rumini? rudhita-saudamini?🤣😵 okay sorry ur story ur wish i get it..!!!😃


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Posted: 5 years ago
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Waiting for the answer 😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Waiting for next part and his answer!!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Great update dear. Eagerly waiting for ur progress in the story. I don't know if ani will answer or not but I wish it is not answered till he himself gets a closure about his relationships😍😍😍

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Posted: 5 years ago
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So finally I got fursat to write second chapter!!

Chapter 2:


"Tell me Anirudh....tell me....do you accept that 8 year small girl as your wife?"forced Saudamini

"Good night Saudamini"was all he answered and left.

Bondita hadn't slept yet. She was busy thinking about her Rashogullas. Anirudh entered her room to check whether she had gone to sleep or not. Well, he was not quite shocked he knew bondita wouldn't sleep before showing all her tantrums to him!


"Abhi tak soyi nahi?"asked Anirudh


"Ba--ba--baris--bistar Babu hame need nahi arahi hai. Bina need ke kaise soyun?"


Anirudh had a small laugh over her calling him "Bister Babu".


"Bister nahi bondita....Barrister.... aur need kyun nahi arahi tumhe?...hmmm....kahin roshogulle ke wajah se needh to nahi udi tumhari? Roshogulle khane hai?"he knew what disturbed her mind. He was her closet friend.

"Maa kehti hai neeki aur puch puch??!!"

"Acha...."he started to make her laugh by making funny faces. He made her sit in his lap and pampered her.

"Chup chap so jayo...kal subah pakka kha lena...thik hai??"said Anirudh with a pleasant smile.

"Thik hai bistar babu...waise Maa kehti hai jis rishte mein khushi aur pyaar nahi hoti woh rishta rishta nahi hota... kya yeh sach hai?"

For a moment Anirudh was taken aback with this question but he dared to answer "haan....kyun?"

"Kyunki saudamini didi kehti hai ki aap khush nahi hai mujhse...toh maine maa se pucha ki isse kuch hota hai toh maa ne yeh jawab diya.."

Anirudh busted with anger within. He felt what a rubbish kind of women is Saudamini. She was poking these nonsense kind of things in a small and innocent child's mind.


He made Bondita sit on bed and replied her "bondita...Saudamini didi ke paas aaj se tum nahi jaogi. Aur eisa kuch nahi hai. Mein tumse khush hun aur me aur jyada khush rahunga agar tum ache se padhai karke barrister banogi."

Bondita's face had a big smile on this. She went to sleep but left Anirudh disturbed.


The end!

Will update the next chapter and send this TS as I am disturbed with this one😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Good one 😃

I loved this story ❤️

Pls continue soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Amazing start !

Continue soon !

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