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ur update was awesome sis....please cont soon 😳
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that was soo Awsomeeeeeee... 👏 👏
i wish we could see something like this in the show
and cont soon if you can plsssssssssss.
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The update ws mindblowing Sonali Di! Please cont soon<3 Love Charri<3<3<3
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thanks everyone for your comments!😃


Part Twenty – Three

Amar and Divya were sitting on a bench as they had a few more minutes before their train arrived.

Divya seemed tensed. He smiled and clasped her hand in his. She looked up into his eyes. He had a secure grip on her hand and it made her feel so much safer. She used to be independent, only asking for assistance when she really couldn't figure things out. She was never a part of a team. She always followed her own paved pathway to wherever she needed to go.
However things had changed since she had left Samrat in the dust for Amar. He was truly her best friend and true love all packaged up in one person. She loved him deeply.

"Don't worry, we can think of something together by chance someone comes after us," he insisted.

She nodded meekly.

He smiled suddenly thinking of something funny.

"The headmaster is still sleeping; we can stay out as late as we want. We can run around the entire night and not get caught," Amar joked.

She giggled trying to keep quiet in the forlorn train station. It was past midnight. Some rough looking guys passed by and Divya ushered closer to Amar.

He wrapped his arm around her.

" Pyar karne ka mood hai?," he asked.

She leaned her head against his chest.

" This is the first time I have ever felt so scared in the middle of the night. I guess I usually ignore strangers when I am alone," she quipped.

The sound of a train whistle came screeching to a halt. Amar looked at the train number and tapped Divya on the shoulder.

" Chalo, humari train agayi hai," he said.

They each lifted a duffel bag and hopped onto the train.

As they passed by a goofy looking guy stared at Divya.

Amar flashed him a dirty look and pulled Divya in front of him. She hinted to him to calm down.

They found their seats and settled down. Amar shoved their bags under their seats and then went off in search for the conductor to see when the train was leaving.

The goofy guy took this opportunity to come talk to Divya.

He tried to flirt with her.

Divya tried to ignore him, but in vain. Finally she put down her magazine and looked at him firmly.

" Listen mister! I have beaten goons like you before. For your kind information I am taken. Now please go before my fiance comes back," she hissed.

The guy silently turned around almost bumping into Amar as he left.

" Tumari bhabi hai!," he called out.

Amar looked at Divya.

" Are you all right?," he inquired.

She smiled pleasantly.

" Of course it was only one this time," she quipped.

Amar smiled before placing a kiss on her forehead. Later they slept for an hour on each other's shoulders. Divya woke up first when they arrived in Beneras.

" Amar wake up we have reached our destination," she said while nudging him.


He woke up and they grabbed their bags and headed out to the platform. The ride had taken longer this time because the train had to make a few stops along the way.
It was now nearing six am. The couple held hands as they got into the car send by one of Amar's contacts.

Maa and Babuji greeted them and told them to rest. Amar and Divya shared their concerns about someone trying to come here and cause problems. Maaji said Chintu would be up in an hour. In the meantime they would have the locals confuse anyone else who tried to find them.

Amar and Divya exchanged grateful smiles. Babuji told them to go rest for some time. They could focus on the rest of the plan later.

Edited by adventure_gurl - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
GREAT UPDATE! this was soooo sweet! i really loved it! plz plz plz plz continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg that was an awesome update =)
I loved it =D
yay! they're in banaras =D finally =)
hehe the bhabhi part....lol =P
plez continue soon hun =D
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sonali di ur update was jus awesome please please countinue soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks everyone, I'll try to update soon! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
  • here is a new update!
Part Twenty- Four
Meanwhile Sindoora awakened with a bloated stomach and immense headache at ten am. She looked at the time and was startled that she had been out so long.
Her chief chamchi, Chandra entered the room with an intense expression on her face. She was twiddling her fingers nervously, knowing her sister would be really angry after she discovered the truth.
Sindoora grimaced feeling very constipated.
"What was in that food last night, Chandra? I feel so awful," Sindoora commented.
Chandra wasn't sure what to say. She was scared her sister would lash out at her for everything going wrong. Amar and Divya were gone. She had no idea where they had gone so she had no information to give and besides most of their goons were injured in Beneras when Samrat had brought them to help get Divya from there a month, and then some got arrested. Very few remained.
Sindoora winced before running towards the bathroom before her sister could answer.
Meanwhile back in Beneras, by noon Amar and Divya had awakened and freshened up. They decided to visit temples to pick one for their wedding. They would have a small engagement ceremony the following evening, and two days from now the wedding.
They called Bharat and discussed the final stage of the plan. Rajeev and Mahua would come to Beneras for the wedding.
"I'll tell Mahua tomorrow night. Sindoora just got up a few hours ago. She hasn't emerged to the dinning hall yet. I presume Chandra hasn't been able to open her mouth yet," he quipped.
The couple had to laugh at this. It was all good in favor of their planning. It would take Sindoora a few days to be well enough to travel, which was all good for their plan. She would come to Beneras to finish them again, but this time she would not be successful.
The couple explored the nearby temples, asking priests where they could have their wedding in two days time.
Most of them had religious events or weddings already happening. Then they approached the one where Divya and Amar had exchanged garlands by "accident". Divya felt that this one is where they should get married. She looked at Amar and he seemed to share her feelings.
This is where their love story all began and this is where they would wed.
"I guess everything was fated," Divya commented as they sat near the Ganga ghat later that evening.
Amar nodded.
"I never thought we would go through so much to get married. I hope this time we actually get to experience all the joys we missed out on last time," he stated. He smiled at her with a mischievous glint in his eyes.
She stared into his eyes before suddenly nudging him.
" Tum phi na!," she playfully punched him in her arm.
Meanwhile back in Delhi …
" I want the results of that lab test as soon as possible," Sindoora ordered as the doctor left.
After spending three hours that morning in the bathroom, she had told Chandra to get her a doctor as soon as possible. The doctor had taken a blood sample along with her vitals.
Now Sindoora wondered where Amar and Divya had gone. It was now after eight pm. Neither of them was in sight. The house was also too quiet today.
Sindoora turned to Chandra.
" Woh dono kahaan hai? I need to convince everyone that Divya is unstable and need a mental asylum," Sindoora stated.
Chandra grimaced.
" Chandra go see where they are. We should be keeping tabs on them. We cannot let this opportunity pass," Sindoora declared.
She swallowed hard before answering.
" Sindoora Didi, woh yahaan nahin hai,"
" Kya?," Sindoora turned around quickly and stared horrified at her sister.
" What are you saying? Don't we have anyone watching them?," Sindoora inquired.
Chandra shook her head.
" Most of our goons are out of commission. Samrat is in jail and Bharat is out of station," she quipped.
Sindoora scowled.
" Okay just let me know what the doctor says when she calls. I need to know what caused me to sleep so long. Drats I need the restroom again!" she yelled before running off.
Edited by adventure_gurl - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
lol! sindoora ko kya hogya ! lol... great update! continue soon. 😊 👏

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