FF: Hamesha Saat Saat -[Update Pg.128]Last Part - Page 59

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thank you with the sweet and awesome comment. You are very nice and very good and excelent person. Have a great time and take care!!!Love you

Love S.Rina

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bmtd11

BRAVO! BRAVO! CONTINUE SOON!

I will continue moomoo. You have to continue too. I can't wait. I really seriously man I love your ff. It's so...awesome...

Love you

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Posted: 17 years ago
omg...lil sis u updated agen thnx u and i realli appreciate u updating agen seriously... 😉 i will be waiting tomorrow for another update truss me...i will eat ur brain like how i did todai 😆 and i will be accompanied by Charri 😳

Tumhari Di...Narmeen
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Originally posted by: narmz

omg...lil sis u updated agen thnx u and i realli appreciate u updating agen seriously... 😉 i will be waiting tomorrow for another update truss me...i will eat ur brain like how i did todai 😆 and i will be accompanied by Charri 😳

Tumhari Di...Narmeen

Narmeen sis you and Charri sis is bully me.😆I will update today and tomorrow my summer vacation starts and then from tomorrow I will update many parts as possible. I don't want to see my sisters are appreciating. The next part will be dedicated to you and of course Charri. Always you two is so like you...I love you😆😃

Love you sis and take care...

Tumhari choti behen S.Rina

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Posted: 17 years ago

Great new part my sweet little sister...Really good 👏 👏 Continue soon when you have time
I really love your fanfic...you are doing a wonderful and great job...Keep it up 😊 Great part

Mein dua karongi ke tumhaari har sapna aur har khawish puri hogi...Tum zindagi mein hamesha safal hogi

Hamesha khush rehna aur apna khayal rakhna

Aap ki Di jho tumhe bahot zyaada pyaar karti hai
Reena
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jaanlover


Great new part my sweet little sister...Really good 👏 👏 Continue soon when you have time
I really love your fanfic...you are doing a wonderful and great job...Keep it up 😊 Great part

Mein dua karongi ke tumhaari har sapna aur har khawish puri hogi...Tum zindagi mein hamesha safal hogi

Hamesha khush rehna aur apna khayal rakhna

Aap ki Di jho tumhe bahot zyaada pyaar karti hai
Reena

Di mujhe khushi horahihe kyun ki aapko meri part to accha laga hai aur uske upar aapki haar baatein mujhe khush kardetihe. Di aap kaisi hai aur aapka par haye kaise chalrahihe aur aapka exam...???Di aapki aunty kaisi hai? Woh aab behtar maisoos karahihe ya abhi bhi dard pe hai? Main aapke liye as always dua karongi aur aapki aunty keliye dua karongi..Dekhna di woh jald se jald theek hojaenge!!!Miss u di and I will update the next part today and soon!!!Love you and take care of you and your aunt..

Tumhari choti behen S.Rina jo tumse bohut pyar kartehe aur tumhari liye dua kartehe...!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveBMTD

Narmeen sis you and Charri sis is bully me.😆I will update today and tomorrow my summer vacation starts and then from tomorrow I will update many parts as possible. I don't want to see my sisters are appreciating. The next part will be dedicated to you and of course Charri. Always you two is so like you...I love you😆😃

Love you sis and take care...

Tumhari choti behen S.Rina

yes i luv bullying esp my lil sista 😆😛 its a habit now....ur summer vacations start so early got to admit i still have 4 weeks left but i will also be waiting for todays update and the summer vacation updates...as u noe i luv reading ur fanfic as i jus cnt get enough of it...thnx for dedicating to me and charri its really nice to hear that 😳

Tumhari Di Narmeen 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: narmz

yes i luv bullying esp my lil sista 😆😛 its a habit now....ur summer vacations start so early got to admit i still have 4 weeks left but i will also be waiting for todays update and the summer vacation updates...as u noe i luv reading ur fanfic as i jus cnt get enough of it...thnx for dedicating to me and charri its really nice to hear that 😳

Tumhari Di Narmeen 😃


Oh you love bully me😉😛You love my ff. It's really nice to hear from you especielly from you. Yeh my summer vacation start from tomorrow and then free for me. Your summer vacation is after 4 weeks???How???I did't know that!!!You can't get enough of my fanfiction. Is my fanfiction good???I love your fanfiction. I always read the parts twice. You write it so well and both of our fanficis different. Your fanfic is so so I'm speechless about your fanfic. I will update todays part very soon...Love you

BTW how are you?
Tumhari choti behen S.Rina
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Posted: 17 years ago
This part is dedicated to my funny sisters Charri sis and Narmz sis and of course Reena sis. Hope you like this part.
Recap: Everyone forgave Sagar. Sindoora and Surili are thinking of another plan.
Chapter 43

Vidya – Who ek baharwale kyun na ho.
Surili looks at Vidya and she was about to slap Vidya when someone's hand stops her.
It was Sindoora. Sindoora slaps Surili. Surili looks at Sindoora with an angry look.
Sindoora – Surili yeh tum kya karne gaye ho. Vidya ko kabhi koi bhi Vidya ko martihe toh mujhe bardash nahi hotihe. Maijn tumhe kuch nahi kehna chatiho kyun ki tum iss gharko ek waris dene jarahiho.
Surili goes to her room. Sindoora goes to her room. She picks up her mobile phone and calls Surili. Surili sees Sindoora's number but doesn't care.
Surili – Sindoora didi jo aapne aaj kiya who toh kabhi kisine nahi kiya. Meri papa kabhi mujhe haat nahi uthaya hai meri upar. Aap kaun ho meri upar haat utane ke;says to herself.
Sindoora – Yeh larki phone kyun nahi utharahihe.
Sindoora then decide to go to Sindoora's room. She slowly goes to Surili's room.
Scene shift to the living-room
SV's mum massaging Sagar's head.
Shalu – Maa hum kyun naa kaal Sangeeta ki godh bharaye rasamh kare.
SV's mum – Shalu yeh tum theek kehrahiho. Hum kaal godh bharaye rasamh shuro karenge.
Vidya – Maa kyun na kaal sirf larkiya yeh rasamh main shamil hosaktehe.
Sagar then looks at Vidya. His mouth was open.
Vidya – Aab isme itni shock kya hai. Aap kyun apne moo khole rakhehe. Shalu di hum theek kehrahi na.
Shalu – Ha maa Vidya ki idea toh mast hai.
SV's mum – Ok jot um dono chatiho who hogi.
Shalu and Vidya give a high 5 to each other while Chinu and Sagar had open mouth with no words. The wanted to be in the function too.
SV's dad – Aab bacche log jahihe aur kaal tum sab log ko jaldhi atna parega. Function ki tayari bhi karna hai. Vidya aur Shalu tum dono Sangeeta ko tayar karonge. Main tum donoko yeh zimedar dehrahihe.
Vidya & Shalu – Jee baba hume hokom dijiye.
SV's dad – Betiyaan tum itni dahador ho issliye maan nahi karte tum donoko kuch kaam sapo.
Vidya – Baba aisi kyun kehrahihe aap hume humesha aap aur maa ko madat karna chatihe. Hume mauka to dijiye.
Everyone leaves to theirs room. Sagar take Suraj and Sanvi to the room. Vidya and Shalu go to Sangeeta's room. Sagar is a bit confused why Vidya is going there.
Sagar – Vidya tum Sangeeta ki kamre me kyun jarahiho?
Vidya - Aaj hum teeno ek saat soenge.
Sagar didn't want to be without Vidya. Same with Vidya didn't want to be without Sagar. This was theirs planning.
Scene shift to Sindoora and Surili
Sindoora – Surili main nahi chatitho tum Vidya ko sab ke samne maro. Toh tum ek bohut bari mushkil main parjaongi aur mujhe tumhari zaroorat hai.
Surili – Par Sindoora didi mujhe kabhi kisine ek thapar nahi marehe aur aap mujhe ek thapar denge.
Sindoora – Ok Surili kaal Harsh aane wale hai.
Surili – Di yeh Harsh he kaun?
Sindoora – Yeh Harsh Vidya ko jantihe aur Vidya usse bohut naftar kartehe. Main chatiho Harsh Vidya ki saat theek behviour kare toh Sagar ko jalan honge aur uski maan main bohut ghatiya sawal honge. Aisi hi karte gaye hum toh Sagar Vidya ko iss ghar se nikal denge aur meri sab se bari khata meri rastese nikal jaenge.
Surili – Sindoora didi aap aisi kaisi soch saktehe. Meri dimag main kabhi aisi baat nahi aye hai.
Sindoora – Tumhari dimak honge tab tum aisi socha sakteho.
Surili gives a nasty look but calm down with the angriness.
Vidya fixes everything for tomorrows function. Then Sangeeta sleeps on the middle of the bed Vidya sleeps on the left and Shalu on the right. Everyone felt comfortable but not the men.
Sagar was in his room with the babies. Chinu was in his room with the baby. Tushar was in Chinu's room but slept on the sofa. He didn't sleep in SV's room because of the babies and it's just SV's room. Sagar can't sleep without Vidya. He couldn't go to the bed. He was near the window and thinks about today what happened. Vidya slowly gets of the bed and slowly so nobody can see her goes towards her room. She sees Sagar standing near the window. She slowly goes to Sagar and hugs from the back. Sagar turns Vidya so she can hug him front not back.
Sagar – Vidya kya hua. Tum meri paas. Mujhe miss karahiho na.
Vidya backs of and cross her arms so she can show she is angry.
Vidya – Nahi toh main yaha aye ho kyun ki mujhe meri pati ki paas aana tha aur meri bacche ki paas. Maine aapko kahi dekha hai. Kaha dekha hai? She is thinking but in fake.
Sagar sees at her and both start to laugh. He then puts Vidya up and starts to turn her. Vidya feels so happy and now giddy. Sagar saw that and lays her on the bed.
Sagar – Vidya tum theek toh hona? With worried face (isn't fake)
Vidya starts to feel better when Sagar hold her hand and was holding her head.
Vidya – Hum theek hai.
Sagar – Tumhari Shamboonathji ki laak laak shukar.
Vidya starts to smile and hugs Sagar so tight that Sagar can't even hug her.
Sagar – Vidya main jantiho tum mujhe chorna nahi chatiho par main aab breathe bhi nahi saktiho.
Vidya stop hugging him. She must go to the room.
Sagar holds Vidya's hand – Vidya kaha jarahiho tum.
Vidya – Hume aab wapas jana hoga. Main Sanvi ko meri saat lejatiho. Aapko kaal uthna hoga office keliye vagera vagera...
Sagar – Par Vidya main nahi chatiho tum jao. Main tumhari bina nahi rehsaktiho. Main maar bhi jao...Vidya holds her hand on his mouth.
Vidya – Aap kabhi aisi baat nahi karenge. Aap aisi kabhi kahenge toh main aapni jaan lelongi tab bhi main aapko marne nahi dongi;with tears coming out.
Sagar hugs Vidya – Pagli main mazak karahitha. Tum itni seriously kyun hogaya. Main toh aisi tumhe rokhna chaha tha.
Vidya – Main sab kuch seriously leti ho kyun ki aap humari pati hai aur main aapki baatein manti ho.
Sagar lets go of the hug and stands with his hand on his ears.
Sagar – Sorry Vidya mujhe maaf kardo main sach much tumhe hurt nahi karna chatithi.
Vidya goes to him and takes his hand of his ears and lays them on her waist. Sagar was surprised very surprised to see Vidya took his hand and laid it on her waist. Why did Vidya do that?

Hope you like this part gentle men gently woman and everyone who is reading my ff and like my ff!!!
and especielly my funny sisters and sweet sisters NARMEEN SIS, CHARRI SIS AND MY SIMPLE AND SWEET Reena sis!!!
Love you all

HSS ki writer S.Rina
Edited by LoveBMTD - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
cute part....
plzz cont soon..

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