FF: Hamesha Saat Saat -[Update Pg.128]Last Part - Page 57

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Posted: 17 years ago
i have updtaed charri but u jus have not commented on it 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveBMTD

Di I'm glad that you liked the part. Main bhi aapse bohut zyada pyar kartiho. Mera summer vacation wednesday shuro honge matlab tab main continue karongi. Di aapka aunty aab kaisi hai? Main dua karongi tumhari aunty keliye aur tumhari khushi keliye. Tum humesha hasi khush rehna. Guess what? Aaj main kaha gaye? I have cut my hair. And everyone like my new style. I will send you a photo of me and then you can write what you think!!!Oki di main continue soon karongi. Main tumhari saat humesha ho. Hum hamesha saat saat rahenge!!!Love you di

Tumhari choti behen S.Rina jo aaj bohut khush hai!!!

I really love your new part...it's really good. You are doing a wonderful and great job 👏 👏I wish you all the best and luck in life...Tum hamesha khush rehna

Mein apni aunty ka subha phone kiya tha before I went to college...she has still a lot of pain. I'm really worried about her...I hope she will get well soon. Tum bahot sweet hoon ki tum meri liye aur meri aunty ke liye dua kar rahi hai..You are so sweet...mein tumhe batha nahin sakti tum meri liye kya hoon...meri dil ke bahot kareeb hoon tum

Jab tumhe waqt mile tum apna photo dens karo..mein bhi apni photo tumhe send karongi...Mujhe puri yakeen hai ke tum bahot achchi lage rahi hai...Tum bahot achchi hai...

Hamesha khush rehna aur apna khayal rakhna...mein tumhaari saath hamesha hoon...Continue when you have time

Aap ki Di

Reena

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: narmz

i have updtaed charri but u jus have not commented on it 😳

OMG, Haven't I?! Have to go and write a comment straight away!😕

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Di, I had wrote a comment 2 days ago!😆 Maybe you didn't see it...😳
But are you feeling better now?😕 I'm worried... Very worried...😕

Edited by charri7878 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
^haha charri i guessed u missed my update but im not shoked as i noe my ff is not good 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
^^ OMG Narmeen Di what are you saying????!!!!!!!!'
Your FF is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good! I just love it!

And 1 more thing, Don't dare to say again that your FF isn't good! Main pehle plane ke saath aajaongi, aur wo bhi danda lekar! 😆 😛
Edited by charri7878 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: narmz

lil sis wer is the new update ? 😆

Narmeen di just give me 6 minutes. I will update very soon..!!!

Love you

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi guys and I like to thank everyone with the comment. I'm glad the last part I updated you felt better. So here is the next part!!!Enoy and have a great time!!!
Recap: Sagar and Vidya had a romantic time but unfortunatly Surili came and destroyed everthing.
Chapter 41

Vidya – Shamboonathji kaal jo honewale hai woh aap hi rook saktehe. Shamboonathji humari madat kijiye. Humari madat kijiye!
Sagar – Surili mujhe kyun tumhari room main le aye ho. Mujhe aab wapas jana hai.
Surili – Sagar calm down babe. I was just thinking if we could spend more time together. We must know each other. We are going to get a baby very soon.
Sagar – What did I say Surili? Mujhe tumhari gande hato se kabhi choa maat.
Surili – Sorry but Sagar we are going to get a baby very soon. We must know each other.
Sagar – Surili kabhi maat socha main iss bacche ki pita hoon. Main sirf aur sirf Vidya ki pati hoon aur Suraj aur Sanvi ki pita hoon. Main tumko bohut acche tarah jantiho.
Surili get andry she was about to slap Sagar when Sindoora comes. Sindoora signals Surili for not to do anything bad.
Sindoora – Sagar mujhe tumhe ek file dena tha. Tum meri kamre me asakteho.
Sagar – Di main baad main aajaong main thora akela rehna chatiho.
Sindoora – As your wish! Main jatiho Surili mere paas aajao. Mujhe tumse thora baat karna hai.
Surili – Jee Sindoora didi.
Sagar goes from there and goes to the garden. He sits on a bench. Thinking of Vidya and Vidya is standing near the window. The song Haan tu hai from Jannat plays.
Jo kwaabo khayaloon mein socha nahin tha
Tu ne mujhe itna pyaar diya, Sagar thinks of the moment he spent with Vidya.
Mein jab bhi jahan bhi kadi dhoop mein tha, Sagar thinks of the romantic night when they first came so close.
Teri zulf ne mujh pe saya kiya
Haann
Jo kwaabo khayaloon mein socha nahin tha
Tu ne mujhe itna pyaar diya, Vidya thinks of Sagar and the moments she and Sagar spent.
Mein jab bhi jahan bhi kadi dhoop mein tha, Vidya thinks the moment she was in Banaras with Sagar and the night when Sagar was very naughty. She smiles.
Teri zulf ne mujh pe saya kiya
Haan tu hai haan tu hai, Sagar gets up from the bench and goes near his window outside.
Meri baaton mein tu hai, Vidya sees Sagar and sees him in the garden and is watching her.
Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu, Sagar and Vidya look at each other.
Irradon mein tu hai, Vidya turns and has her back on the window.
Irradon mein tu hai Sagar looks at her and wants her to come near.
Yehhh…we could fall in love, Vidya goes downstairs.
I say… I could fall in love, she runs to the garden.
Yehhh…we could fall in love, Sagar didn't notice that Vidya runs. He thought it was just his mind.
And I say… I could fall in love with you; Vidya goes and hugs his back.
Koi bhi aaisa lamha nahin hai, Sagar hold Vidya's hand.
Jisme mere tu hota nahin hai
Mein so bhi jaao raathon mein lakin
Tu hai ki mujhmein sotha nahin hai, Sagar turns Vidya so she can face him.
Tu hai ki mujhmein sotha nahin hai, Vidya's tears is rolling down but Sagar catch the tears.
Haan tu hai haan tu hai, Sagar hugs Vidya and Vidya hugs Sagar. Vidya start to cry even more. Sagar holds her head and smoothly take it down to her waist.
Meri baaton mein tu hai, Vidya – Kabhi hume chor kar maat jaiye.
Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu, Sagar – Main kabhi nahi jaongi tumhe chor kar.
Irradon mein tu hai, Vidya hugs Sagar tighter.
Irradon mein tu hai, Sagar hugs her tight too. He didn't want to waste the time. Now he and Vidya is alone and the night.
Yeehh…
Ohh…
Hai teri innayat tujhse mili hai
Hoonto pe mere hasi jo khili hai,Sagar holds Vidya and turns her face to him. He sees her rosy lip. He smoothly kisses her.
Usse mera chehra chupa bhi na paye, Vidya kisses Sagar too.
Tujhe paake hasil huye jo khushi hai, Sagar smiles and kiss her. He then bites her lower lip.
Vidya – Ouch!
Tujhe paake hasil huye jo khushi, But Vidya didn't give up. She pecks him and then kisses him. Both kiss very differently.
Haan tu hai haan tu hai, Sagar holds Vidya's waist very tight and pulls her closer.
Meri baaton mein tu hai
Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu, they are very close. Not an inch away.
Irradon mein tu hai
Jo kwaabo khayaloon mein socha nahin tha, Vidya hold his neck.
Tu ne mujhe itna pyaar diya
Mein jab bhi jahan bhi kadi dhoop mein tha
Teri zulf ne mujh pe saya kiya, Vidya's hair is blowing on Sagar's face.
Haan tu hai haan tu hai, Sagar take the hair away from him. He wants just Vidya no one else to be with him.
Meri baaton mein tu hai, Just then Vidya slips and both fall on the ground. Sagar on the top and Vidya on the bottom.
Meri kwaabo mein tu yaadon mein tu, Vidya's hair is on her face. Sagar notice that. He slowly takes the hair and put it behind her ear. He kisses her ear. Both have their eyes closed.
Irradon mein tu hai, they are just laying on the ground.
Irradon mein tu hai, And is thinking of the romantic and romancing night. They heard someone cry! Whose cry can it be?

Hope you'll enjoy this part...

Sorry Narmz di for updating it late. I said that I will update but I was doing a thing so it took time!!!Hope you'll understand and I will say I love your ff!!!
Love you

Love S.Rina
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Posted: 17 years ago

Saving my 1 one place! 😆

***EDIT***

WOW Rina, I am speechless!
It was so beautiful written and I got tears in my eyes!
My eyes are still full of water!

I don't know how you can write it so good. It was touching, sad and nice/wondeful at the same time. I think this part was the best one you have written.

Cont soon when you have time. Maybe today later...😆

Aapna khayal rakhna aur humesha hush rehna!

Aap ki Di Charri<3

Edited by charri7878 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jaanlover

I really love your new part...it's really good. You are doing a wonderful and great job 👏 👏I wish you all the best and luck in life...Tum hamesha khush rehna

Mein apni aunty ka subha phone kiya tha before I went to college...she has still a lot of pain. I'm really worried about her...I hope she will get well soon. Tum bahot sweet hoon ki tum meri liye aur meri aunty ke liye dua kar rahi hai..You are so sweet...mein tumhe batha nahin sakti tum meri liye kya hoon...meri dil ke bahot kareeb hoon tum

Jab tumhe waqt mile tum apna photo dens karo..mein bhi apni photo tumhe send karongi...Mujhe puri yakeen hai ke tum bahot achchi lage rahi hai...Tum bahot achchi hai...

Hamesha khush rehna aur apna khayal rakhna...mein tumhaari saath hamesha hoon...Continue when you have time

Aap ki Di

Reena

Reena didi aap bhi utni sweet hai jaisi aapki baatein bohut sweet hai. Main jaldhi tumhe meri photo bejongi..Aur main bhi aapne didi ko dekhna chatiho. Woh kaisi dekhtihe of course acchi!!!

Love you di and take care. Aapna khyal rakhna aur aunty ka khyal rakhna!!!

Tumhari choti behen S.Rina

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Posted: 17 years ago
lil sis omg...ur update was awesome if onli i was as good as u.... 😛
ur update was awesome got to admit io jus loved it and thnx alot for liking my ff and u too charri i realli appreciate it 😃 😳

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