FF: Hamesha Saat Saat -[Update Pg.128]Last Part - Page 55

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveBMTD

Hi Reena didi. Aap kaisi hai aur aapki aunt kaisi hai? I'm glad that you liked the part and thank you I know I will not say that but I want to thank you to be so nice and special for me. Di aap meri zindigi main itni kaam samay jaga liya. Love you di and I will continue...

Tumhari choti behen S.Rina

Tum bahot sweet hoon my sweet little sister...Mein thiek hoon...I was busy with my studies...I was really tired so I decided to take a break..and than I saw that you send me a sweet message and a great next part of your Fanfic...Ab mujhe phir takkat mili hai to go on with my studies...

Maine abhi abhi meri aunty ka phone kiya hai...use abhi bahot dard ho rahi hai...I'm really worried about her...agar mujhe kal college nahin tha to mein use ki paas jaati lekhin the next two weeks mera exams hai...

Tumhaari new part bahot achchi hai...tum hamesha safal hogi apni zindagi mein..mein yeh dua karongi...tum bhi bahot kam waqt mein meri liye itni important hoagaya...ab mein tumhaare bina nahin rehe sakti hoon

Hamesha khush rehna aur apna khayal rakhna

Aap ki Di jho tumse bahot pyaar karti hai

Reena

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jaanlover

Tum bahot sweet hoon my sweet little sister...Mein thiek hoon...I was busy with my studies...I was really tired so I decided to take a break..and than I saw that you send me a sweet message and a great next part of your Fanfic...Ab mujhe phir takkat mili hai to go on with my studies...

Maine abhi abhi meri aunty ka phone kiya hai...use abhi bahot dard ho rahi hai...I'm really worried about her...agar mujhe kal college nahin tha to mein use ki paas jaati lekhin the next two weeks mera exams hai...

Tumhaari new part bahot achchi hai...tum hamesha safal hogi apni zindagi mein..mein yeh dua karongi...tum bhi bahot kam waqt mein meri liye itni important hoagaya...ab mein tumhaare bina nahin rehe sakti hoon

Hamesha khush rehna aur apna khayal rakhna

Aap ki Di jho tumse bahot pyaar karti hai

Reena

Reena didi main dua karongi tumhari aunty keliye. Mujhe aapar pura vishwaas hai. Jo bhi tumhari faisla hoga yeh choti behen aapki saat humesha hoga aur rahenge. Aap aapna khyal rakhna aur khush rehna...

Love you

Tumhari choti behen S.Rina

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Posted: 17 years ago
dat was sweet but Sad, and i STILL loved it<<3
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: cutey55

dat was sweet but Sad, and i STILL loved it<<3

Tahmina I'm happy that you stilled loved it.

Yes this part was sad!!!

Love you

Love S.Rina

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Posted: 17 years ago
Here guys for being so nice and kind. Especielly I want to thanks
Reena sis, Charri sis, Narmz sis, Moomoo, Ankita and Laila to like my ff and everyone who is reading can't remember everyones name...Enjoy!!!
Recap: Sagar and Vidya hugged. But Surili came at the same time and destroyed the moment.
Chapter 40

Sagar and Surili goes back home. Surili was holding Sagar's arm. She was pretending to be Sagar's wife. Sagar didn't notice. He was lost in his sad world. He was thinking of Vidya the whole time but smiled when Vidya hugged him.
Sagar – Vidya tum meri paas ek na ek din aongi aur who din dher nahi hai, to himself. Main jantiho tum abhi taak mujhe behat pyar karteho aur yeh pyar tumhe meri kareeb aane denge. Surili – Jaan tum meri paas aaj asakteho?
Sagar – Surili let go of me. Dubara aisi sochna bhi maat. Main sirf Vidya ki ho aur rahongi. Points his finger – Main aur Vidya ek saat honge.
Sagar goes to his room leaving Surili angry.
Surili – Dekhenge Sagar tum meri paas kab taak dhor rahonge. She goes to her room.
Sagar sees Vidya fallen a sleep and saw a picture, she was holding. He goes to Vidya and very slowly takes the picture. He sees him in the picture. He smiles.
Sagar – Vidya main jantiho tum mujhe behat pyar karteho aur main tumhari dil main basi hoon.
He was about to go to the sofa when Vidya hold her hand. She was in her dreaming mind.
Vidya – Please aap hume chorkar maat jaiye. Main aapke bina ek pal nahi jisakteho. Vidya Sagar ki bina adhori hai.
Sagar get teary eyes. He was about to hug Vidya but he thought about the misunderstanding between them. He must clear the misunderstandings.
Sagar – Vidya tum ek din toh meri paas hongi. Uss din ka mujhe besibrise intezaar karongi. He leaves Vidya's hand and goes to the sofa.
Sagar is asleep. Vidya seeing that Sindoora have a gun and is pointing Sagar. Then she shoots at Sagar. Vidya wakes up. She take her hand and puts it on her forehead and then on her neck.
Vidya – Bhagwan ki laak laak shukar yeh ek sapna tha. Hume aisi sapne nahi chaiye jo hakikat main hosaktehe. Hume kuch jald se jald karna hoga.
She saw Sagar was freezing. She goes downstairs and brings a quilt. She was going upstair but she heard Sindoora talking with Surili.
Sindoora – Surili tum job hi karahiho who ek daam chakkas. Kaal Harsh ayenge tumhari saat help karne keliye.
Surili – Sindoora didi jaisi aapke marzi. Mujhe toh sirf Sagar chaiye hai.
Sindoora looks at her with a nasty look.
Surili – Mera matlab Sagar aur Vidya ko alag karna. Yeh mera maksar hai. Par didi aap kyun Sagar aur Vidya ko ek dusre se alag karna chatiho?
Sindoora – Tum tumhari maksar se kaam rakho. Mujhe meri haal par rakhdo. Aur ek aur baat kabhi hoshiar nahi hona chaiye mujhse main aag ho jo kabhi koi nahi dekha hai aur samajh saktehe sivay Vidya. Vidya main tumhe bhi aisi galath faimli pehda karongi Sagar ki dil main jo kabhi mith nahi sakte. Tumhar haar nishtin hai.
Vidya puts her hand on her mouth. She gets tears rolling down her soft skin.
Vidya – Shamboonathji mujhe aab aapki pura madat chaiye.
Vidya goes to the room. She was lost in her thought. She didn't hear the baby cry. Fortunately Sagar was consoling the babies.
Sagar – Suraj aisi nahi rote beta. Vidya Surajko tumhari saat chaiye. Tum isse lesakteho.
Vidya was very deep lost in her thought. She couldn't hear anything. She goes toward Sagar and hugs him not noticing what she is doing. Sagar held the baby in one hand and held Vidya's wait on other hand. They were hugging like 5 minutes. Vidya came to her sense. She was slowly goes out of Sagar's grip.
Sagar – Oh tumne mujhe…
Vidya takes the baby and console him. She then lays him down on the bed.
Vidya – Mujhe maaf kardejiyega. Hum nahi jantite…
Vidya was going to the sofa when Sagar hold her hand.
Sagar – Vidya main ek baat kahongi tum laak chupao ke tum mujhe nahi pyar karteho par main jantiho who sach. Vidya tumhe meri kasamh bolo tumhari dil main meri liye nafrat hai ya nahi. He puts her hand on his head.
Vidya didn't have any choice.
Vidya – Meri dil main aapke liye nafrat nahi hai. Par hume maaf kardijiyega, while crying.
Sagar – Vidya tumhe mujhse maafi nahi mana hoga. Try to console her. He holds her cheek.
Vidya – Maine aapse job hi kiya uske liye mujhe please maaf kardijiyega. Main sach main aapke bina nahi ji saktiho, she hugs him.
Sagar – Vidya main bhi tumhari bina nahi ji saktiho. Tum meri sab kuch ho. Meri sab kuch. Meri dil main aur zuban se ek hi naam ate hai Vidya! Vidya main tumse behat pyar kartiho. He takes Vidya's head and takes her chin toward him. He is coming closer to Vidya and gives her a long live life kiss on her lips… He kisses her till both can't breath. But they didn't care about the the breathing. They were just thinking of each other. Sagar hold Vidya's neck and slowly put his hand on Vidya's waist. He pulls Vidya closer to him. Vidya was squeezing and was holding Sagar's collar. Vidya was happy to have Sagar with her and so close. Both were kissing and squeezing. But the Sanvi interrupt them with crying. Both looks at her and smiles and puts their head on head. Sagar was holding Vidya's hand while he was smiling. Meanwhile someone knocked. Who could be?
It was the devil Surili.
Surili – Sagar please meri kamre me ao.
Vidya then come to her real sense. What was she doing?
Vidya – Aap Surili ki saar jana hoga aur uski khyal rakhna hoga.
Sagar was now confused and disappointed with Vidya's word. What just happened 5 minute ago. Sagar looks at Vidya. Vidya looks the other side.
He goes with Surili. Vidya get now hurt with what she has done 5 minutes ago.
Vidya – Meri saat humesha aisi kyun hota hai? Hume aab aur kitna dhook sehna hoga. Hume hi kuch karna hoga aur kaal Harsh bhi arahihe.
Vidya goes to a Shamboonathji ki murti in her room. She prays.
Vidya – Shamboonathji kaal jo honewale hai who aap hi rook saktehe. Shamboonathji humari madat kijiye. Humari madat kijiye.

Hope you'll like this part...
Love you

Love S.Rina
Edited by LoveBMTD - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
lil sis both updates wer awesome and too good got to admit...its funni how the babies interrupt them two romancing 😆 dnt worrie lol im perfectly fine now and i have gotten my smile bak aswell... 😉 im bak to normal and thnxs soo much for the helpful PM'S they realli made me think sum1 cares bout me 😳 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow Rina, this part was so good!
This time I didn't cry! 😆 *happy*
Haha, it's so funny when the babies interrupt them when they are doing romance! 😆 But anyway, I really liked this part!

Cont soon!

- Charri<3
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: narmz

lil sis both updates wer awesome and too good got to admit...its funni how the babies interrupt them two romancing 😆 dnt worrie lol im perfectly fine now and i have gotten my smile bak aswell... 😉 im bak to normal and thnxs soo much for the helpful PM'S they realli made me think sum1 cares bout me 😳 😊

I'm glad that my big sis is now in her normal life. Wow di I'm more happy than what I was because you loved my two parts...Sis don't think every that no one cares this lil sis cares very much about you and will always care about you. I will continue when I have time oki don't be disappointed or something else I will try...

Love you and take care

Tumhari choti behen S.Rina jo tumse bohut pyar kartehe aur karte rahenge...

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Posted: 17 years ago
Great Update 😃 .. like alwayss.. 😳 i loved it .. please cont sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: charri7878

Wow Rina, this part was so good!
This time I didn't cry! 😆 *happy*
Haha, it's so funny when the babies interrupt them when they are doing romance! 😆 But anyway, I really liked this part!

Cont soon!
I'm happy to see my big sis happy and she liked this part more then the pther part...Yes is was funny to see again the baby start to cry!!!

I will continue when I have time!!!

Tumhari choti behen S.Rina
- Charri<3

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