FF: Hamesha Saat Saat -[Update Pg.128]Last Part - Page 53

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: narmz

awesome update lil sis...i have noticed one thing u never mebtion the cute lil twin babies of sagar and vidya's... 😳 btw i cnt see them apart for long...please please countinue soon 😊

Narmz di I mention the babies but the two parts I have updated I wanted to explain the feelings when someone is like that. You know what I mean...If you want to know more about the babies then I will have them too...Love you and I will continue soon...

Tumhari choti behen S.Rina

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks...I will continue soon oki..

Love you

Love S.Rina

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Irika

When are you continuing ???

Irika I have so much to do...I'm really busy...

I don't know if I will be able today 😒 I will continue

Love you //S.Rina

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveBMTD

Irika I have so much to do...I'm really busy...

I don't know if I will be able today 😒 I will continue

Love you //S.Rina

Okay plzz try if you can tomorrow.

have a nice day

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Irika

Okay plzz try if you can tomorrow.

have a nice day

I will update tomorrow...Promise sach main Kasamh Se..Have a great time and I'm glad that you understand me..

Love you

Love S.Rina

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Posted: 17 years ago

Great part my sweet little sister 👏 👏 Really good...it was fantastic, super...I'm so sorry I'm so late with my comments but I was really busy and you know why...Jab bhi mujhe time milte hai mein aapki Fanfic zaroor parti hoon

Please continue soon when you have time...You are doing a wonderful and great job..I really love your fanfic...great storyline.

Mein dua karongi ki tumhaari har sapna aur har khwahish puri hogi...aur tum hamesha safal hogi apni zindagi mein

Hamesha khush rehna aur apna khayal rakhna

Aap ki Di jho tumse bahot bahot zyaada pyaar karti hoon aur tumhe bahot miss kar rahi hai

Reena

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jaanlover

Great part my sweet little sister 👏 👏 Really good...it was fantastic, super...I'm so sorry I'm so late with my comments but I was really busy and you know why...Jab bhi mujhe time milte hai mein aapki Fanfic zaroor parti hoon

Please continue soon when you have time...You are doing a wonderful and great job..I really love your fanfic...great storyline.

Mein dua karongi ki tumhaari har sapna aur har khwahish puri hogi...aur tum hamesha safal hogi apni zindagi mein

Hamesha khush rehna aur apna khayal rakhna

Aap ki Di jho tumse bahot bahot zyaada pyaar karti hoon aur tumhe bahot miss kar rahi hai

Reena

Di mujhe khushi hai aapne meri fanfic pasand hai. Main jantiho aap kyun late hoye hai. Di main kabhi aapar naraz nahi hoye ho aur nahi hongi kyun ki aap meri sabse acchi bari behen hai. Di mujhe aur bhi khushi horahihe kyun ki maine yeh part dedicate aapke liye kiya hai. Di aapna khyal rakhna aur main aaj hi time mile tab main zaroor update karongi next part...Love you di and take care...

Tumhari choti behen S.Rina jo tumse bohut pyar kartehe aur humesha karenge..!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveBMTD



Aww Charri sis really me too. I felt he same when I was writing. This part was so touched for me. After I wrote the part my eyes was full of tears. I'm happy that you liked the part and I had dedicated to you. If you like this part then I know that everyone will like the part. I will continue soon when I have time oki don't be upset and I know what that means..

Love you
Tumhari choti behen S.Rina

Awww... You got tears too? Well, I don't think they other will like it so much. They are maybe just saying it, but doesn't like it...

You got scared now, right? I was just joking! How can no one like it? If I like it, then everyone will like it!😆 So are you going to update today? Just wondering...😆

Aapna khayal rakhna aur humesha khush rehna!

Aapki Di Charri

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: charri7878

Awww... You got tears too? Well, I don't think they other will like it so much. They are maybe just saying it, but doesn't like it...

You got scared now, right? I was just joking! How can no one like it? If I like it, then everyone will like it!😆 So are you going to update today? Just wondering...😆

Aapna khayal rakhna aur humesha khush rehna!

Aapki Di Charri

Charri sis do you trust me? If you trust me then I will if you don't then I don't know😆My answer will be...Yes I will update today and really I get scared with the sentence😛Di aap bhi aapna khyal rakhna aur humesha khush rehna...

Tumhari choti behen S.Rina jo tumse bohut pyar kartehe...

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Posted: 17 years ago
Here guys the next part...Enjoy!!!
Recap: Sagar and Vidya haven't talk with each other the day.
Chapter 39

Sagar – Vidya main tumhe kya kaho? Meri zuban se kuch nahi aate sivay tumhari naam.
Vidya – Main jantiho aapne hume phone kiya hai. Main aapse baat nahi karsakongi. Hosaktehe mujhe please maaf kardejiyega. Main aab aapse kuch nahi kehsakti.
Sindoora sees Vidya talking to herself. She smiles evilly.
Sindoora – Vidya kya hua tum itni jaldi haar mangaye.
Vidya – Sindoora didi main kabhi haar nahi manti. Aap jaisi bhi kare Shamboonathji sab kuch dekhtihe aur woh chaiye kuch bhi karsaktehe. Main toh kuch nahi karongi sivay prathna. Shamboonathji meri saat hai aur rahenge. Main prathna aapke liye bhi karteho kyun ki main kabhi kisiki bareme buray soch nahi sakti. Woh jo koi ho meri dushman kyun nahi ho.
Sindoora – Dekhtihe tumhari Shamboonathji tumhe kaisi bacchae.
Vidya – Sindoora didi itni khushi bhi theek nahi honge. Phir bhi main aapko kuch nahi kahongi. Main bhi dekhtaho Shamboonathji meri saat hai ya nahi.
Vidya points her finger at Sindoora. Sindoora was about to put her finger down when Aniket shouted.
Aniket – Sindoora meri liye ek glas pani milsaktehe.
Sindoora – Arahiho!
Sindoora goes to Aniket and gives him the water. She notices that Sagar hasn't arrived.
Sindoora – Aniket Sagar kaha hai?
Aniket – Main nahi janti. Hoga office main kuch kaam karahihe. Woh meri saat nahi aye isska matlab yeh toh nahi hai main haar waqt uski intezaar karongi. Chinu yaha ajao. Mujhe kuch file dekhana hai.
Sindoora get happier to hear that. No one cares about Sagar.
Vidya heard that but feels uncomfortable with what she heard from Aniket.
Vidya – Shamboonathji aap unki rakhsha kijiyega. Mujhe kyun aisi mehsos horahihe. Mujhe uski intezaar karna hoga. The clock is 11:30 pm no Sagar at home. Everyone leaves from the living room and goes to theirs bedroom. Vidya is still waiting for Sagar. She is sitting on the chair in the dining table. After one hour Sagar arrived. He was tired. He was about to go when he sees Vidya is sitting alone in the dining table. He goes to her.
Vidya – Sab kuch table par hai aap kha lijiyega. Main upar jarahiho bacche ko dekhke.
Sagar didn't say anything but agreed with Vidya's words. Always Vidya is the one who gives company to Sagar when he eats. Vidya didn't want to do this but hadn't any other choice without this. Surili saw that and goes to Sagar. Vidya saw that and goes to the bedroom. She sits on the bed and sees the babies. She brush theirs hair.
Vidya – Sorry baccho aapki mama ko please maaf kardo. Aapki mama jo karahihe aapke papa keliye aur aapki dono ki liye. Mujhe yeh sab kuch pasand nahi hain par mujhe yeh sab kuch karna hoga kyun ki aapki mama ko aur koi rasta mila anhi hai. She kissed Suraj and Sancvi's forehead. She didn't want to take the babies to the sofa because the sofa was little cold and the babies will get cold. She was about to go when Sagar…
Sagar – Vidya tum bed par sojao. Suarj aur Sanvi aapki mama ki bager nahi soenge. Tum yaha bed par sojao main sofa par sojaongi.
Vidya – Bacche log ki aapke papa chaiye. Aapki mama se bhi zyada aapne papa ko chaiye. Aap yaha sojae main sofa par sojaongi.
Sagar – Nahi Vidya tum bed par sojao.
Vidya – Nahi aap bed par sojae. While they were quarrel the thunder came and Vidya didn't know just hugged Sagar very tight. She was very scared. Sagar was smiling and hugged Vidya too. Vidya felt the warm hugged and was happy that Sagar wasn't angry at her. They were hugging forever but someone knocked. They both came to theirs sense.
It was Surili.
Surili – Sagar mujhe ice–cream chaiye ti par ghar me toh koi ice-cream nahi hai. Please tum mujhe bahar leja sakteho.
Sagar – Na…he get interrupt by Vidya.
Vidya – Surili zaroor yeh jaenge. Tum jao aur tayar hojao…she looks at SAGAR.
Surili goes to her room while she was smiling and gave a high five to Sindoora.
Sagar – Vidya mujhe nahi jana tha par kyun tumne mujhe jane ko kehdiya.
Vidya – Main jantoho meri haq nahi banta par Surili maa banewalehe aur usko aapki zarorat hai.
Sagar – Aisi baat hai Vidya toh meri bacche bhi meri zarorat hai. Yeh tum nahi kehsakteho. Aur ha Vidya kabhi maat kehna ke tumhari koi haq nahi banta. Tumhari sabse haq banta hai iss ghar main aur meri upar. Tum iss ghar ki dulhan ho aur sabse important baat tum meri patni ho aur meri bacche ki maa bhi.
Vidya turned the other side.
Vidya – Meri aab aapar koi haq nahi banta…with tears rolling down her cheeks. She bites her lower lip and holds her arm closed. Sagar saw that she was freezing. He goes to the window and closes the window.
Sagar – Main ek baat kahongi. Tumhari sabse adikar hai meri upar aur rahengi. Main bekasor ho aur main sabit bhi karongi. Vidya tabse tumko sach main ehsas hojaenge. Main aab kuch nahi bolongi.
Surili comes to Sagar and pulls him. Vidya didn't want Sagar to go. Surili and Sagar goes out. Vidya just holds the door and kneels down while crying.
Vidya – Main sab kuch jantiho. Aab bekasor hai. Mujhe aapar garz hai aur rahenge.
Pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila
iss pyaar mein hon kaise kaise imntihaan, Sagar drives the car and is thinking of Vidya. Vidya is crying out and is thinking of Sagar.
ye pyaar likhe kaisi kaisi dastaan
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar, Vidya close the door and takes Sagar picture. Sagar sees Vidya's picture in the car.
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila

kaisa hai safar wafa ki manjil ka
na hai koi hal dilon ki mushkil ka
dhadkan dhadkan bikhri ranjishein, Vidya put the picture on her heart.
Vidya – Vidya adhori hai Sagar ki bina.
saansein saansein tooti bandishein
kahi to har lamha honton pe fariyaad hai
kisi ki duniya chaahat mein barbaad hai,
Sagar to himself– Vidya main tumhari bina nahi rehsaktiho. Please Vidya mujhe please maaf kardo jo maine nahi kiya.
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

koi na sune sisakati aanhon ko, Vidya is thinking of the moment she and Sagar was spending while the baby didn't come to the world.
koi na dhare tadapati baahon ko
aadhi aadhi puri khwaishein, Sagar was thinking the same. The moment and was thinking at the same time Suraj and Sanvi.
tooti footi sab farmaaishein
kahin shak hain kahin nafrat ki deewaar hai
kahin jeet mein bhi shamil palpal haar hain,
Sagar – Ek din toh tumhe meri paas aana hi parega Vidya aur tumko tab ehsas hoga main bekasor ho, in his mind.
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho o o pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila, Vidya lays down beside the baby girl now and is just imagine Sagar was here…
ho o o o ho o o o
na poocho dard bandon se
hansi kaisi khushi kaisi
musibat sar pe rehati hain
kabhi kaisi kabhi kaisi
ho o o o... rabba, rabba ho o o ho
rabba ho o o, ho o ho rabba
Sagar and Surili arrived at an ice-cream shop.
Surili could see that Sagar felt uncomfortable.
Surili to herself – Sagar tumhe yeh sab kuch sehna hoga. Main kabhi tumhe aur Vidya ko ek saat kabhi nahi karongi.

Hope you'll like this sad part...

Love you all
Love S.Rina

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