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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
Great,Excelent,Awsome...... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Love it sooo muuchh ๐Ÿ˜ณ
pllzz con soon
narmz thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
that was a fab update please countinue soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
precap- sagar vidya got marriedd ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


they both walk down stairs n vidya was introduced to SINDORA n aniket. sindoora seemd very nice. aniket gave thm tickets to switzerlnd as wedding gift. they were leaving the next morning.

night time sagar n vidya go to sleep.

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sagar is holding vidya as her sheild n there is a bunch of goons surrounding thm . vidya is terrifiied n someone shoots sagars arm.
v-SAGARRRRRRRR!!![she holds his arm]. hes in pain

vidya jumps from bed
v-SAGAR!!
sagar jumps from bed n hugs vidya
s-wats rong
vidya holds sagar tight.
v-sagar...sagar,..[looks t his arm..he was fine] she starts crying.
s-just a nihtmare vdya dont worry im here
v-sagar[hugging him for ever]
he tells her to sleep now. so she does..in his arms.


next moring they are packing
sagar comes from behind n golds vidyas waiste. vidya gets scared n jumps.
s-o sri
vidya is still tensed from her nightmare
s-vidya ..can u tell me what u dreamt
v-no
s-u noe.. they say if u dont share ur dream itll come true [winks]
vidya lightly hits his chest n hugs him.
v-i doont believe in that
s-fine....
v-promise me ull never leave me for a second.
s-now why would i do that?
v-juss dont..promise
s-vidya u noe i wont...
v-promise!
s-okok.i promise.


they have arrived in their hotel it is the evening
s-u wanna go out for a walk
v-i uno
s-o com on .. r u still scared? remember im still here
v-ok fine
they are walking n laughing when all of a sudden a bunch of goons surround them. vidya gets scared n sagar hugs her like her shield.
v-[whispers] sagar. this was my dream
s-[gets tensed] What do u guys wanttt
then samrat appears from behind.
samrat-wll well...looks like we meet again
s-[gives an angry look]
samrat- u think i would give up eh? vidya was my wife but u thought maybe if u acted tough shed like u...well u noe shes only ur wife because she thinks u can protect her.
s-[gets FURIOUS]
v-sagar dont listen to him sagar...hes lying
the goons approach him n vidya n seperate them with difficulty becuz they wouldnt let go of eachother.

slow version of the theme song playing...
Sapno ki saji yeh chunarya ...vidya starts crying.
Mehendi ki rangile boteh
Sapno ki saji yeh chunarya
Mehendi ki rangile boteh ..sagar is very mad. the goons are holding his hands.
Tere pyar bina sabh roohte
Tere pyar bina sabh toote
Phaon ki janakthi jaanjhar
Haaton ke khanak thi kangan
Tera rasta dekhein sajan
Tere rasta dekhein sajan ...samrat signals the other goons to start hitting him. they start hittng sagar.

Mere baahon mein har pal bahaaron ke mausam hai
Boondh na badal koi phir kyun aankhein nam hai
Teri sindoor ki lali .....v-SAGARRRRRRR
she is held by some goons tooo

Ab nahi mitne wali ...v-let me gooo[samrat approaches her n
samrat-calm down [just stands there watching]

Kehrahe har dharkan ....sagar is getting beaten up n is all bloody. he is finally unconcious n the goons drop him down.

Saath janmou thak saajan ....vidya struggles to get out of the goons' grip but couldnt.
v--sagar,...wake up...sagar dont let me go with these people...SAGARRRRR

Banoo main teri dulhan ....sagar can hear her but cant do anything. thinking::vidya...

Banoo main teri dulhan ....the goons including samrat walk away carrying vvidya with them.
v-sagarrrrrrrrr!!!!

Banoo main teri dulhan
Banoo main teri dulhan .... sagr has a tear roling down his cheek



precap-sindoora had something to do with this
Edited by mushtari - 17 years ago
Ankuu thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
omg!!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ
i cant believe that stupid samrat is back
sagar!!! get up!! lol
anyways awsome update!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
plez continue soon ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75
That was soo goodddd..i feel soo sad for Sagar..i hope nothing happens to Vidya..
Plsssss cont soon..
--Nelly
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
omG i hope Sagar gets Vidya bak and they can enjoy dere time for sure<<<3 oo plZ i hope dat stupid samrat doesnt et in therir way again<<3
PLZ CONT SOON<3
.Senorita. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
oohh!!!soo sadd ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Stupid Smart is back ๐Ÿ˜ก
Con soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
Buhuhu... ๐Ÿ˜ญ I have tears in my eyes.
The update was amazing!
Hope everything goes fine... ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Cont soon!

- Charri ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
thnx for loving it.. this is my fav ubdate everf..thts y imo cont. again

precap-vidya is kidnapped by samrat

some men run upto sagar n tke him to the hospital.

sagar gains conciousness and asks fo vidya.
sagar sees that vidya wsasnt there then remebers what happens. the doctor had tld him to get rrest but he quickly ran out the room. the men who brought him told him to stay but sagar wouldnt listen. so they went with sagar to find viya.


vidya is in a dark room with one dim light in the corner. shes siitting in the corner by the wall with her knees up n her head on her arms. samrat walks in. vidya [had swolllen red eyes because he cryed so much].
samrat- vidya..vidya ..vidya...you know we never really got the chance to finish what we started.[he spit on the floor while approaching vidya.
vidya was so scared she was pushing against the wall thinking itll move back.[tears came down her face]
v-how dare u...where am i ..y did u brin me here
s-i just said right?...we need to finish what we sarted.
samrat lifts viya from her shoulders.
vidya slapped him right in the face. samrat hit her face n she dropped. samrat had his hand one his face where she slapped him.
smarat- u noe ure gonna make it more difficultif u act like this. just relax. ill do the work thn ill let u out. he starts to appraoch her again. he grabs her dupatta n pulls it off. vidya is in tears n has her hands infront of her.samrat no takes thedupatta n puts it around her waist n pulls her towards him. she shruggs n struggles to move away but cant. samrat starts kissing her neck. she has tears rolling down her face.


sagar has an awkward feeling that vidya is in trouble . he starts running. he doesnt know where hes running . he went back to where he was with vidya n followed where the goons ran off. the menthat helped him had followed him aswell.

vidya was sooo disgusted. she fained. samrat got mad.
samrat-eyy get up..[slapped her] get up
vidya was still unconcious. samrat left
samrat ill be back [left ..locing the door]
vidya wakes up[faking it]
v-jerk[she takes her dupatta n wraps it around her]
she looks around n finds a small window near the top of the ceiling. [looked like she was in a SMALL basement]the ceiling was loow so all she had to was stand on her tip toes n she could see outside.

ya rabba is plaing in the background
sagar is running[limping] n calling out vidyas name.
s-VIDYA...VIDYA WHERE ARE UUU...VIDYA

vidya is looking out with tears in her eyes. thn she hears something.--song stops-

in the other room samrat is talking to a girl..
samrat- ye i knocked him unconsious n vidya is locked up
[girl]-good. now all u have to do is kill them both
samrat - peice of cake[girl hands him money]
[girl]- ye.. wat ever. and listen dont mention my meeting with u to ANYONE..ok!![gives a threating look]
samrat-ok sindoora ji
sin-dont ever mention my name
sam-okok[sindoora leaves]

vidya herd all of this n is shocked n has tears roollling down her cheeks

s-VIDYA...he runs n bumps into someone. they both fall back.

sagar looks to see..sindoora
s-sindoora??!!?
sin-sagar...
s-[hugs sin.] oh sinoor u have to help me..vidya is kidnapped n im looking for her.
sin-what? omg
s-ye...but what r u doing here?
sin-o uh..busineess things..u wouldnt know
s-o..sindoora can u come help me look for her plz
sin-ye sure ofcourse.
s-[hnds her vidyas pic] u show this to people on the road , ill go the other way
sin-[takes vidyas photo. and wen sagar left, she ripped it up n walked away] the men who were walking with sagar saw this

s-[showing pictures]have u seen her?
some man-yes yes..that way with some bad looking men
s-o thank u sooo much
some man- no problem

sagar starts running. whil hes running.. one of the men who had saw sindoora rip up vidyas pic, said
man-arey,, thatwomen ,,,u knew her>
s-[running] ye
man- she helping u look?
s-yess
man-o.....[running] i saw her rip up the picture u gave her
s-waht?[stops running]
man- ye
s-[grabs his collar] what r u saying.
man-sri ...i saying what i saw.,
s-[ignores the fact , apologizes n starts running again]


vidya looks around tosee if she can find something she can break the window with
she couldnt find anything. so she used a piece of her dupatta n wraps it around her wrist] [she starts hitting the window] she hit it like the 5th time n it broke] it made a shattering sound. vidya heard samrat running towards the door. she quickly struggled to fit through the window n managed. right when she was outside, samrat ran in the room n saw her running away. he ran back out n came out the room n started running after her.

sagar is running including the men.
vidya is running, and samrat is running after her
smarat-vidya .. wait...vidya[gets mad]
vidya runs faster n is tired but couldnt quit so she ran faster.

sagar is still running n calling her name.

vidya trips n falls. she turns to see samrat infront of her. vidya is crawling backwards
v-HELP[looking around to see no one ]
sam-no one is here, beautiful , time to go back[he grabs her hair n right when he pulls it. ..
sagar grabs his hand n punches his head.

vidya sees this n is happy.
sagar is punchng samrat SOOO MUCH.
s-wheres ur goons to help u now huh>?
the men who helpd sagar had stopped sagar n took samrat to the police. sagar thanked them.

sagar ran to vidya n vidya quickly got up n huigged him TIGHT.

v-o sagar., i dont know what to do without you.[tears roll down her face]
s-im here now .. im here.[tears roll down his face too]
v-[wanted to say what she had heard-sindoora- but thought shed say it later since now is not the time-sagar will get FURIOUS]

sagar n viya reach there hotel. after they both freshend up they were out on the little balcony.

s-r u ok>?
v- yes[smiles n turns toward him, holding his hands]
s-vidya....i saw sindoora
v-[surprised].. what was she doing here?
s-some business thing
v-busines?.u believed her?
s-weell at first ye, but thn..
v-sagar...[interrupted]
s-ye
v-sindoora had something to do with my kidnpapping.
s-WAT>?how?
v-i hear her talking to samrat while i was locked up
s-n way..thatcant be true[lets go of her hands]
v-[teary]sagar[rubs his back conforting him]
s-i cant believe shed do that...[turns around to face vidya] u noe waht. forget her, we'll deal with her later.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
that was awsome!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
thank god samrat that evil jerk is with the police now! ๐Ÿ˜Š he deserved that ๐Ÿ˜›
that was an awsome update though ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
plez update soon ๐Ÿ˜Š
btw i started a new ff...its called sirf dosti? tell me what you think
but as for ur update plez continue soon ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š i wanna see if sagar believes her

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