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ok well this is my first ever ff n im not hindi so itll all be in enlgish unless someone wants to help me if ill sound much better in hindi i hope u can...well here it goes......



SAGAR- Rich boy lives in Delhi....2nd year of University studying Engineering. Very popular n al the girls are after him 😛

Vidya- Just moved to Delhi and its her first year in University studying Political science. Shes new so she only has one friend.its her 3rd dy at university.




Sagar is sleeping in because he spent the whole night writting up his essay.
Chinu(sagars bro)-SAGAR...flips his bed
sagar falls off the bed. aching n holding his back
s-what the hell was that for
chinu points at the clock
s-oh Shooooot thnx bro. He runs to the shower and is ready .

Vidya also sleeps in because she had been studying for her test all night.
Shalu(vidyas sis)-VIDYA...shakes her
V-mmmm(eyes closed)
shalu- YOURE LATE U HAVE A TEST!!
v-OMG she runs to the showr.


Sagar came out of his car WALKING very fast.. as he's skimming through his papers((very UNorganized))looking for his essay.
Vidya on the other hand is infront of sagaar n is walking fast aswell for she doesnt want to fall((she has heals))
since sagar isnt looking up he bumps into her and all his papers and her books fly in the air slowly coming down.

vidya kneels towards him positioned to pick up her papers....
V-WHAT Th....as shes looking up to see who she has bumped into she shuts up(thinking:::soooooo cuteee)
s-omg im so sri.hes collecting all her papers n thn his.
vidya is syl staring at him thn snapps out n says
v-uh..thts fine....uh..i..m..late
sagar looks up at her n is hypnitized by her gorgeous eyes.Vidya gets up slowly.Sagar sees this n thinks::Sooo hot))
They run to their classes n is in JUST in time.

its been close to the end of class and Sagar's professor has asked everyone for their assignment.Sagar is scanning through his papers and cant find it..he is wondering where he has put it..gets mad at himself.

Vidya has fnished her test very confidently n was juss scanning through her books n she finds sagars essay. she wonders how it got there. since it was a formal essay obviously...it had his name n room number on it. she asks her professor if she can go to the washroom.her professor says yes.

She goes to sagars classroom and sagars professor has opened the door.
V-hi uh i have something here for sagar
sagars professor calls sagar telling him he has a visitor.
sagar gets happy thinking its Chinu who prolly found out hes forgotten his essay n is dropping it off.right wen he enters the door he is shocked.
V-uh..i have here somthing that belongs to u...looks pretty important so i thought id drop it off.
S-omg thank u soooooooo much u dont noe how much this means to me.he says this n not knowing what hes doing hugs vidya.vidya doesnt hug him back cuz she just met this guy today,Sagar found out what he was dooing n noticed vidya was really uncomfortable n quickly backed away.
s-sri..(looking down))
v-ye(looking down aswell)as shes about to walk away
s-wait
vidya turns around
v-hmm?
s-i didnt get ur name
v-Vidya
sagar thinks::Beautiful as she is))
s-thts a beautiful name..mine...
v-Sagar..i noe she says smiling n walked away
Sagar scanns through his convo in 2 seconds in his head n thought OF COURSE she had my paper...he lightly hit his forhead.

its been the end of the day n vidya is standing by her locker talking to her friend Priya. sagar walks by with his friends n quickly gives a light smirk towards vidya.Vidya looked down confused..wondering wow..thn smiled a little.
Priya-UHHH sagar is sooooooooooo cute
v-hmm(in agreement))
priya looks at her
v-hmm??((n questionin))
p- ntn


its late in the evening n vidya just walked out of the building aftr a long study in the library.
sagar is hanging around his car at tht time with his friends n doesnt notice vidya but his one friend does.

s-ok guys im out ..peace
sgars friends-CU bro

sagar jumps inhis car n drives away ..first thought hed put gas in his car which was on the right side of the school.

vidya whose home is in the opposite direction has already walked past so sagar didnt see her.

vidya is walking...one of sagars friend follows her. vidya has noticed this now n is walig faster.hes looking at her thinking::oooo god i didnt noe u cold make a girl this HOOTTT.

meanwhile sagar has finished putting gas n has turned his car n is driving the direction left of the school(vidyas direction)


sagars fiend-HEy baby wait up
vidya is running now
now sagars frend is running.
vidya falls n twists her ankle..all her books fall she tries getting up but cant.
sagars friend gets closer n closer. sagar is driving n sees this not knowing its vidya runs up to hisfriend whom he also didnt know was his friend. n pulls him away. he thn sees its his friend but styl hasnt noticed vidya. vidya also hasnt noticed its sagar.
s-hey Rohan what the hell u doing how can u be sucha jerk
R-o shut up u just aint got guts to do this..look at her she HOTT.
sagar looks back n sees its vidya n her eyes are filled with tears.vidya cant move remmeber so she wouldve escaped in the middle of sagars convo.
sagar turns around furious n notices Rohan is up n punches rohan right on he nose.
s-besharm
Rohan quckly gets up walking backward
r-what the hell sagar watch tomorow ok WAATCH
sagar doesnt care cuz he noes he can take him anytime.
sagar quickly kneels down to vidya n asks her how she is
vidya styl in tears. not knowing what shes doing hugs sagar soooooooooo tight. sagar feels alittle twinkle in hs heart n wonders cuz he hasnt felt this before. sagar thn hugs her . she quickly noticed this n backs away. she cant move n sagar notices this.
s-come ill give u a lift.
sagar lifts her n carries her to his car. vidya is juss staring at him.she also feels that twinkle n her heart.n feels awkard but wonderful cuz she hasnt felt tht way before. he lays her in the fornt seat n he sits down in the drivers seat n starts driving.



Hope u guys enjyed i noe its very long but i wanted to pour my thougts out becuz i loved this story line i made, 😳 but whats important is if u guys love it n if i should continue it or not 😕 thnx o yea n if anyone wants to help me plz do like the backgrd music stff i have no idea rememba im not hindi..lol thnx 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i loved it 👏 👏 👏
awsome job 😃 😃
cant wait till the next one 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz conitnue i like sorry scratch tht i love it.
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Wowwww...Awsommeeeeee start 👏 👏
pls cont soon i want to know what happens next..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Such a wonderfull start.. 👏 😃 i really loved it.. pleasee update soonn 😃
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Wow such a wonderful update...
Continue soon as possible...
Can't wait for next updating!!!

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Awsome Start 👏 👏 👏
Love it 😊
Cont soon
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wOW thnx guys i hope ull like my next update::


Pre-cap:::Sagar vidya meet n saagar saves vidya from his perverted friend Rohan n is now taking her home.


sagar is driving vidya home. it was so silent n sagar really wanted to talk to vidya.
s-uh..vidya
vidya looks at him
v-hmm?
s-im sri bout tht, that was Rohan i dont noe why he did that i mean who...
v- its ok ...and...thanks.
vidya looks back down
s-[smiles] well i hope ur leg is fine.
v-its fine i think[holding her ankle]
vidya gets very teared up.
sagar notices this and asks::
s- whats wrong vidya
v-ntn..just im styl confused y u wanted to save me..i mean we dont even noe eachother .. i dont noe anyone for that matter n look wats happened to me bu thnk u soooo much i dont noe how to thank u....
s- id do it again anytime....but hopefully this doesnt ever happen again.[pause] hey so ur new here right? because i havent seen u around?
v-ye its my first year i jus moved a few days back
s-o ic...dont wri i wont let anything happen to u in this schoool..u have nothing to wri bout...infact in this whole school Rohan is prolly the only one who is a jerk.
they now reach vidyas house after a few directions n sagar stops the car.he opens the door to go n help vidya but she holds his hand.sagar looks at their hand thn looks up at her.
v-wait,..i dont want u to do that. my mom will think really wrong..ill manage,
sagar didnt want to argue that so he nods
s-r u sure?
v-yes thnx
vidya opens the door but before she steps out she turns around
v-Sagar..
s-hmm?
v-thnk u[looking down]
s-goodnite
v-goodnite. vidya struggles to get out n slowly limps her way home and turns around to see sagar still there n waves goodbye.sagar does the same n drives away.
-------------------------------------------------------- vidya is now home in her room looking out the window thinking of sagar n how he saved her today. but she also thought of Rohan's threat to Sagar..n was really worried.
meanwhile sagar reaches home n is quite happy. he goes to his room takes his shirt off n jumps on the bed. he is thinking of vidya..n is very confused as to why her gorgeous face keeps comn to his mind when he closes his eyes. Chinu thn walks in
c-Hey bro wassup
chinu sits on the bed beside him.{{Chinu is a senior high school student n his prom is comn up}}
sagar sits up
s- hi..nothing much...u?
c-prom is commn up n i got a date!
s-WOW...very proud.. who is it?
c-shes everything....i juss knew she was the one wen i saw her soi asked her n she said yess...her name is...

meanwhile vidya is reading a novel n shalu comes in
shalu-VIDYA!!!!GUESS WHAT
v-[smiles] u seem happy watsup?
shalu-igot a date for prom..
v-wow shalu who is it?
s-his name is....Chinu....[she flickers her eyes like she always does]
v-cool
shalu-but i dont want to go alone n were allowed to bring a guest socan u come plzz
v-i dunno....
shalu- comn...since u werent able to go to urs...this is a perfect opportunity
v-how .. i dont have a date..n im not dancin with somone younger thn me
shalu-plz vidya plz coe
v-fine ill come.
shalu hugs vidya n tells her to watch her dressup n choose which dress to wear.

------
c-her nae is Shalu
s-wow man thts great... have fun eh.
c-wait can u come with me?
s-what me...no way
c-comn plz
s-wat am i going to do there? watch u guys slow dance?
c-comn plz...
s-nooo
c-comn i always do wat u want n now this...ukh sagar ur such a ..
s--OOKOKOK..ill come jeez
c- great thnx
chinu walks out.

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@ vidya n sagars university

its early in the mornng n classes doesnt start in half hour. everyone is hanging outside. vidya is looking around to see where sagar is. sagar just drives in.vidya sees this n walks up to his car.
v-Hi
sagar comes out
s-hi vidya... wats up
v-nothig just..
ROhan walks in their convo..
r-Hey sagar... so u push me away so u can have her eh...i see how it is
s-what?
r-ye dont think i forgot about what u did yesterdai
s-ok Rohan its nothing like that ...
r-i noe exactly what it is...u dragged me away from this beauty[points to vidya] so YOU can have her.
Vidya is confused
r-ive had enough.
Rohan pushes vidya away to face sagar.
vidya falls to the ground
v-ah[said that<< very quietly]
s-Vidya!.
he reaches for her but Rhan gives him the shoulder. he starts walking toward sagar[usually right before guys fight they push eachother around] Sagar is now mad because vidya got into tears. sagar pushes rohan back
s-what the hell is ur problem man
r-what! [pushes sagar back]what u gonna do
vidya quickly gets bacck up
sagar pushes rohan back.. rohan comes back to push him thn BAM...Sagar punches him.Rohan falls back but quickly gets back up n punches sagar.
vidya runs to sagar.. sagar's lip is bleeding.she has both her hands on his chest.
v- omg sagar stop this ur gonna get eachother kicked out of this school..plz stop SAGAR
sagar n vidya look at eachother for like 2 secnds
v-for me plz
rohan comes n holds vidyas waste from behind n pulls her to himself. vidya is uncomfortabble n is trying her hardest to get away from him but cant.
r-hey baby.. this is all i needed...just to hold u
sagar gets FURIOUS n takes vidyas hand..pulls her away n BAM again. this time rohan is struggling to get up.

Vidya is in tears n runs upto sagar.
v-omg sagar what did u do?
s-he deserves it.

now the security comes n kicks both rohan n sagar out of school property.

rohan's friends help take Rohan away...

sagar gets into his car..vidya runs to the passenger seat n sits down in fear for wat sagar will do.

v-where r u going?
s-to finish him off
v-NO..Sagar ull get urself in huge trouble.
s- i dont care..
V-WHY????!?!?! why do u care so much...[tears]
sagar doesnt say anything n drives fast.
v-stop...STOP!!!
sagar sstops the car[they are 20 metres away from school
vidya touches sagars face n turns it to her. she sees the blood n gets into tears.
v-look what happend
she takes her finger n whipes the blood. sagar sees this n is just staring at her.
v-i donno why all guys do is fight. i mean what does that bring they...
sagar takes his finger n puts it on her lips
s-BUSS((thts enough))
vidya looks at him
sagar turns the car around..hes driving towards school
vidya is confused. he drops her off n tells her to go to class.
v-Sagar where r u..
sagar Drives away.

hope u guys liked it .. n plz..more comments this time 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg plz plz plz continue. if u can continue today i am very impatient. plz plz plz.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bmtd11

omg plz plz plz continue. if u can continue today i am very impatient. plz plz plz.



AWWWWW thnx sooo much...ok imo write veryyyy fast becuz i have to go n do my assignment for math .....

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