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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
very sweet part! great start, keep it up! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
Awesome start! Shalu is so rude!
But anyways, awesome start!
I read your FF on apnicommunity and it's fantastic!
Cont soon!

- Charri
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys im glad of the response i got and those of u who really wanted the next update here it is. Enjoy:

Recap: Vidya's and Sagar's parents are going on vacation together.
As Shalu and Vidya release from the hug they tell their parents they have to go and study for their exam:
V: Maa hum dono ko kaal ke exam ki tayari karni hai.
VM: Hain to jao beta. Kal to tum logo ka akri exam hai na.
Sha: Gee.
VD: Toh phir is ke bad tum log tayari karna. Itne dino bad hum farm house jayenge na jana kis chees ki zaroorat ho.
Shalu(thinks): Papa muhje to pata hai ke muhje kya chaiye.
V: Of course mama. Shalu aao hum ja kar study kare.
Sha: Yea.
The next morning in class: Vidya, Shalu, and Chandra are taking their tests. Chandra and Shalu seem to have everything down but Vidya is tensed and can not think.
V(thinks): Akir kar me kyun nai soch sakti. Kyun ye bat mere dil me a re hai ke kal hum ja re hai. Bas test! Vidya tries taking the test and after a while gets all her answers down. She hands in her test and goes outside to get some fresh air. After a while Chandra and Shalu show up.
C: Arrey Vidya. Kya hogya ta tume. Mene deka ta ke tum kitne tense ti. Sab tik to hai na?
V: Hain woh basa asi hi test ke tension me meri tabita karab hori ti.
C: Toh kya howa ab to test de dia. Ab to tension door hogi hai.
V: Hain ab meri tabiat bilkul tik hai. Shalu thought that she should make vidya tensed again.
Sha; Hain par Chandra abi test ke result ana baki hai. Pata nai humne kiase kiya hoga.
V: Hain me bi ye hi Soch ri ti par mere nikalne ke bad professor ne muhje ka ta ke mere paper dek kar unko lagta hai ke mene pass kia hai. Toh ab no tension.
Shalu gets annoyed.
Sha: Ab choro ye sab. Ghoomne chalte hai.
C: Hain kyun vidya?
V: Of course.
Sha; Um Vidya tumne to gar chake packing shoori karne hai.
C: TOh kya howa. Me to raat ko karoon gi to vidya bi raat ko karde.
Sha: Hain par vidya ne sab ki packing karni hai. Vidya sort of gets the idea that Shalu doesn't want her to go.
V: Um Chandra chor de. Shalu tik ka ri hai. Muhje both kaam hai. Chanra understands what shalu did but she is pulled away by shalu. Vidya is left along as shalu took her car. She thinks on how she shud get home when sagar shows up.
S: Umm Vidya who Chandra kidar hai.
V: Woh aur shalu goomne gai hai.
S: Oh. Ye Chandra bi na pata ke nai jati. Vaise tum nai gai?
V: Woh ghar par both kaam ta.
S: Acha. Tum ghar kaisi jaogi.
V: Woh um bus par. Shalu meri gari le kar chali gi.
S: Oh ao me tumhe chor doon.
V: Nai app ke liye phir mushkil hojai gi.
S: Arrey nai hogi mein abhi office jar a hoon to rasste me tumhara ghar ata hai. Aao. She hesistates but needs to get home so agrees. She walks to the car and sits in the back accroos of sagar. He drives and neither one says anything. Sagar deicides to ask how Chandra though the exam was.
S: vaise vidya Chandra ko test kasa laga.
V: Use toh both asan laga.
S: Aur tumhe.?
Vidya is surprised she asked.
V: Um muhje bi acha laga. Bas result ki fikar hai.
S: Im sure tum acha karogi Chandra aur shalu se zyda smart toum ho. Ull do fine.
V: Thanks. Sagar stops in front of the house. Vidya is about to open the door but remembers yesterday.
V: Umm Sagar thank you.
S: No problem. She walks into her house. Her parents are sitting in the living room.
VD: Arrey vidya beti agi tum.
V: Gee papa.
VM: Shalu kidar hai?
V: Woh aur Chandra ghoomne gai hai.
VD: Tum nai gai?
V: Woh kal ke liye packing karni hai. Isle.
VM: Acha acha beta. Me shalu ko call kar ke kati hoon ke woh ajai. Hum log aaj jar ke farm house ko saaf karenge aur Chandra log kal aynge.
V: Gee maa.
Story goes to vidya's farm house. Sagar's family had arrived.
VD: Arrey bhai sab aye aye.
SD: Aap janti bi nai hai hum kitne khush hai yaan ake.
VM: Shalu aur vidya jao Chandra aur sagar ko unke kamre dikao.
ShA: MAA!!! Mein Chandra ko backyard dikati hoon. Vidya tum sagar ko le kar jao aur humre kamre mein Chandra ka suitcase rak do aur sagar ko bhi uska karma dika do.
VM: Shalu beta…
V: Maa chor dein. Muhje koi problem nai hai. Aye sagar. Sagar grabs his and chandra's suitcase and follows vidya upstairs.
V: Sagar ye kamre aapka hai. He puts his suitcase inside.
V: Laye me Chandra ka suitcase le jati hoon.
S: Arrey ye both heavy hai.
V: Nai koi bat nai hai is par wheels hai.
S: Ok as u wish. Vidya leaves and sagar walks in. He sees pics of vidya and shalu. He picks up vidya's pic. He nods in impression.
S: Cute.
Scene switches. Sagar is in the backyard writing in his journal under a tree. A few feet away Vidya loves the breeze so she begins spinning around. Shalu sees vidya from the terrace and thinks of this as the perfect moment. She takes out a bottle of thezab.
Sha; aab viyda tumhari khoobsurit aur nai hogi.
Meanwhile Chandra is trying to read what sagar is writing.
C: Sagar dekoa na kya likra ho.
S: Nai chandra ab jao. Shalu is ready to pour the tehzab on vidya. Vidya clueless is still spinning around. Chandra sntaches sagar's journal and he runs after her. Shalu prepares to pour the thezab……
Precap: Vidya is brining down pillows and blankets and sagar asks to help her.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
wow i love ur FF moomoo<<3
plZ continue soon<<3
and i wont update tera mera pyaar today but ill update my new FF today, hehehe
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
Thanks for continue today
I hate Shalu 😡
but i love SV's scence 😊
cutee 😳
Edited by sayara - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: cutey55

wow i love ur FF moomoo<<3
plZ continue soon<<3
and i wont update tera mera pyaar today but ill update my new FF today, hehehe

thank you very much. i will continue soon. awww oh well when r u updating ur new ff?😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: bmtd11

thank you very much. i will continue soon. awww oh well when r u updating ur new ff?😊

im working on it ryt now, ull see it later<<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutey55

im working on it ryt now, ull see it later<<3

oh oki doki.😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome update moomoo!
I have already started to like your FF! 😳 😃
Plz cont soon!

- Charri 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
moomoo...i luved it...please countinue soon 👏

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