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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
thank u guys 4 such wonderful comments. i will be updating tom 4 those of u awaiting the next update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I hope you guys enjoy today's update:
Part 3:
recap: Sagar and Vidya's families are at Vidya's farm house.

Shalu is just about to spill the thezab on Vidya. Vidya stops spinning and faces Sagar who is running after Chandra. He doesn't see Vidya and falls on top of her. Vidya's heart begins pounding hardly. Sagar and Vidya have an eye lock. Meanwhile Shalu stops and puts the thezab away. Chandra sees shalu and signals her to come down. Chandra notices that sagar is still on top of Vidya. Shalu sees this.
Sha; Arrey Sagar vidya ko rape karna ka arada hai?
Sagar gets up and helps Vidya up.
S: Sorry vidya. Mene tumhe deka nai. Chandra ab muhje meri journal do take me jao.
C: Ye lo. Sorry Vidya par sagar both hi uncoordinated hai.
S: Tumse to me bad me nimtoon ga. Tumhari dosto ke samne me tumhe embarrass nai karna chata. Sagar leaves. Shalu is really mad as her plan failed. So she decides to enact her other plan.
Sha; Umm Vidya kyun nai hum samose banayie. Im sure sab ko book lagi hogi.
C: Hain muhje bi both book lagi hai.
V: Of course. Mein kitchen me ja kar tayari karti hoon tum dono aja na phir. She leaves.
Sha: Chandra tum ase karo ke ja kar vidya ki help karo me ati hoon.
C: Oki doki. Chandra leaves.
Sha(thinks): Chalo vidya tumhari khoobsurti na sai par tumhari bolti to band kardoon.
Meanwhile in the kitchen Chandra is talking to vidya while vidya is making samosas. Shalu enters with something hidden in her hand.
Sha: Umm Vidya ase karo tum ja kar ye baro ko serve karo me hum saab ke liye banati hoon.
V: Acha. Vidya leaves. Chandra follows her to help. Shalu takes out a medicine.
Sha: Vidya ye dawai kana se tum phir kabhi bol nai sako gi. Shalu pours the medicine into one of the samosas and cooks it. She takes the samosas to the backyard. She gives on to Chandra. She tells vidya to give one to sagar and then take the last one. Vidya goes to give it to sagar but he accidentally picks up the one for vidya. Shalu notices and goes and throws the samsosa out of his hand.
V: Arrey shalu ye tumne kya kia?
Sha: Woh us par koi bug ta.
S: Shish shalu. Bilkul pagal ho. He leaves annoyed.
V: Bug ta to patadi. Istara unke haat se to na chinti.
Sha: Just shut up. Ye sab tumhari waja se ho ra hai. Vidya leaves. She goes to the kitchen and makes a whole new batch of samosa. She goes to sagar's room and knocks.
S: Come in.
V: ahh woh sagar me ap ke liye samose lai ti.
S: Is ki kya zaroorat ti.
V: Woh muhje pata hai ke aapko samsoe acha lagta hai aur phir shalu ne aapke hat se islye me bana ki layie aye so here. She sets it on the table. She leaves when sagar tells her to stop.
S: Vaise vidya muhje samose acha nai lagte par tumhara hat kea cha kagte hai. She smiles and leaves. Sagar's parents over here their conversation and smile.
It is night time:
VD: Acha chale to hum saab apne apne kamro mein chale jai.
SD: Arrey mere paas aik idea hai. Kyu nai hum sub mard ise kamre me so jai aur sab aurte us kamre mein. Istara both maza ayga. Then Sagar, Vidya, Chandra, and Shalu enter. Sagar was wearing a black shalwar kameez. His top bottoms were open showing his chest. Vidya was wearing pink kameez with a black shalwar and dupata. They walked in together and seeing this sagar's mom smiled.
SD: Kyun bacho. Kya keta ho.
C: Papa muge to ye idea both acha laga.
Sha: Yea me too.
VD: Toh phir tik hai. Hum sub ya soyge.
V: Mein ja kar kambal aur takye lati hoon.
VM: Shalu tum bi help karo.
Sha:Maaa. Mein both taki hoo. Vidya leaves. Later she is walking down the steps with bundles of blankets. Sagar is standing by the stairs. Vidya trips and everything falls on sagar. Meanwhile she is sitting on the steps.
V: Oh my god. Sagar I am soo sorry. She goes and gets everything.
S: Its ok. Vaise tumhari fault nai hai. Tumne itni cheese utai wi hai. Lao me help kardoon.
V: Nai sagar iski koi zaroorat nai hai.
S: Please vidya. Kai phirse tum muhje par ye sab na girado. Vidya laughs and lets sagar help her. He carries some blankets and so does vidya. Sagar and vidya's dad just watched everything that happen.
SD: Vaise bhai sab apko nai lagta ke vidya aur sagar ke bich kuch chemistry bar ri hai.
VD: Hain muhje be asa hi lagta.
Everybody is ready to go to sleep. Vidya gets into her blanket when se notices that Chandra and shalu are not here. Then Chandra comes and begins whispering to vidya.
C: Vidya sagar hume night drive par le jar a hai. Hum idar lake ke pas ja ri hai. Chalo.
V: Par agar hum dono ke parents ko pata chalo to kya hoga.
C: Nai pata chale ga aur pata chalo to kya huwa. Sagar humara saat hai. He can take good careo f us. Lets goo.
V: Ok. They all go to sagar's car. He drives and there is music on. Vidya doesn't like the song that is playing and sagar notices. He changes the song.
Sha: Sagar appne song kyun change kardiya.
S: Woh bas asi hi. Muhje gana acha nai laga. Chandra notcies that sagar changad it cuz of vidya. They reach the lake. Vidya goes and sits on the rocks. Meanwhile sagar is just walking around. Vidya stands up as the rocks are hurting her. Shalu sneaks up behind her and scares her. Vidya gets soo scared that she falls into the lake.
C and Sha: VIDYA!!
Precap: Chandra yells at Shalu.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
Superb update
i loved it so much
keep it up......
n make like dis updates more..
keep goin...
Best Of Luck!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
omg ur ff is awsome 😃 šŸ‘
sooo adicting plez continue soon šŸ˜› 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
Ur FF is so frikin AWESOME!!!! i was actually blushing when he fell on top of her!!!
PLZ PLZ PLZ CONTINUE SOOON<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
wow!!!what a lovely FF its rilly good šŸ‘ !!pls cont. soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
Your ff is so awesome..
I loved the part...!!!
Continue soon...can't wait!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
thank u all. u dont know how happy i feel knowing that everyone loved it. thank u. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
yh pls update soon! 😃
priya!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
the stairs scene reminded me of Vivah, exception of the stuff falling on him of course! Why does Shalu have to be so mean? Anyway keep it up! 😃

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