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Posted: 17 years ago
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yahooooo! we got an update 😆 wowowowowowowow! i totally loved it i wnder if vidya FAILED 😕 well i guess she passed 😃 or failed 😕 😆 anyways i just luved dis part so wooooooow!!!!!!exellent... 👏
continue soon when you have time tht was sooo sooo good!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_dreams22

yahooooo! we got an update 😆 wowowowowowowow! i totally loved it i wnder if vidya FAILED 😕 well i guess she passed 😃 or failed 😕 😆 anyways i just luved dis part so wooooooow!!!!!!exellent... 👏
continue soon when you have time tht was sooo sooo good!

thx. im gonna update tom inshallah.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutey55

o yA! nvm, i forgot<<3

yea. so r u gonna update any of ur fanfics. im w8ing impatiently especially 4 tere mere pyaar oh and pyar ishq aur mohabbat and rishte rishte janam. but mostly tere mere pyaar. its my fav. anyways i hope u update either one of those. 😆😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was awesome...i hope she passed....please countinue todai agen if u can 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: narmz

that was awesome...i hope she passed....please countinue todai agen if u can 😳

thanks. and no i cant again cuz i already updated twice 2day but tom i promise.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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i cant update again today cuz i already updated twice but thanks 4 liking it and tom inshallah i will update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wowwww..you are doing an AWSOMMMMMEE job 👏 and i love ur other FF..
soo cont soon plsssssssssssss. 😊
--Nelly
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
Wowww..you are doing AWSOMMMEE job.. 👏 and i love ur other FF too..
soo cont soon plssssssssss..
--Nelly
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sorry guys 4 the dealy but heres 2day's update:
Recap: Vidya, shalu and Chandra get their test results.
C: Arrey vidya pato na kya mila tumhe.
V: Chandra irme lika hai ke mere results sab se high te. I got the highest grade.
C: Amazing!
S: Ye great job. He raises his hand to give her a high five. Vidya sits there looking at him as he and her never exchanged high fives. Finally she returns the high five. Sagar and vidya both feel tingles in them whilst touching each other. The grown ups over heard and came over to congratulate vidya.
VD: That's my child!
VM: Kitni achi beti hai meri.
Sd: Vidya beta both Mubarak ho.
SM: Hain beta hamesha asi hi kaam karna. Shalu gets annoyed as to how much everyone is complementing her and how much vidya is always the center of attention.
The scene changes to sagar in his room. In his hand is vidya's picture and he is thinking.
S(thinking): Why do I feel weird. Kyun muhje asa lag ra hai ke me vidya ko pasand karta hoon. Maa ne aik dafa ka ta agar mere dil sach me kisi ko chata hai to me apni aken band kar ke chaonga ke woh mere samne aye aur agar aken kolna par woh mere samne ho to phir me shaid use pasand karta hoon. Sagar closes his eyes and wishes for vidya to be here. After a few seconds he opens his eyes and… Vidya is standing right infront of him! Sagar gets the shock of his life. She has juice in her hand.
V: Woh Chandra ne ka ta ke aap ko is waqt juice peena acha lagta hai toh isle me la aye. She hands him the juice and as he gets it from her his hand touches her fingers. He feels something inside. Vidya leaves. Sagar wants her to stay so he tries to come up with an excuse.
S: Umm vidya wait..
V: Yea?
S: Who vidya what other places are there to see here?
V: Weel there is a great picnic spot and aah garden with a lake and … oh and an amusement park.
S: Oh cool. U wanna go to the amusement park I think we are a little too late for the picnic today.
V: Umm sure but why don't u ask Chandra and shalu first. If they wanna go then I have no problem.
S: Sure ill go downstairs with u. Sagar sets the juice aside and walks down the stairs. He tells her a joke and she laughs. Sagar's dad and vidya's dad are happy to see them happy with each other. Sagar and vidya go outside to find shalu and Chandra meanwhile sagar's dad id talking to vidya's dad.
SD: Bhai sab aapko nai lagta ke hume kuch hi din mein woh bat aga lane chaiye.
VD: Hain par abi nai. Bas vidya aur shalu ka college katam hone ke nazdik aye tp phir soche ge.
SD: Gee jaise aapki marzi. Outside sagar asks Chandra and shalu if they wanna go to the amusement park.
C: Yea that sounds fun.
Sha: Yea and we definitely have to go on the roller coaster.
V: Nai shalu me nai jaongi.
S: Arrey kyun?
Sha: Vidya ko roller coaster se dar lagta hai. Sagar luahgs.
S: Its ok if u don't want to go no one is forcing u to. Acha tum logne tayar hona hai to hoja nai to me ja kar gari start karta hoon.
C: Hum sub tayar hain. Bas chalo. They all walk to sagar's car. Like usual Chandra was gonna sit in the front and shalu and vidya in the back but Chandra didn't want o sit in the front.
C: Vidya tum aga bat jao. Mein aaj piche batna chati hoon.
V: Par Chandra.
C: Plz. Kuch nai hota Sagar tumhe ka nai jayga. Plz.
V: ok. She sits in the front with sagar. Sagar at first is surprised that she sat there but was happy. There is much traffic and shalu is getting bored like usual.
Sha: Hey sagar can u put some music on im really bored.
S: Sure. He turns on the radio. The song that is playing is kuch is tarah by atif aslam.
Kuch is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aansoo tere saare meri palkon pe sajaa de…. He looks at vidya who is looking outside.
Kuch is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aansoo tere saare meri palkon pe sajaa de… he puts his hand on the gear shift and it accidentally touches vidya's hand.
Tu har ghadi har waqt mere saath raha hai
Haan yeh jism kabhi door kabhi paas raha hai
Jo bhi gham hain yeh tere unhein tu mera pataa de… they have a solid eye lock.
Kuch is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aansoo tere saare meri palkon pe sajaa de…. Sagar smiles at vidya whose attention is turned to the amusement park. Sagar parks the car.
Sha: Aao pelhe water ride par jate hai. The water ride is a log with two long vertical seats. Shalu gets in on the first seat and Chandra sits behind her. Sagar gets in the second seat and holds out his hand for Vidya to sit infront of him She sits infront of him. Then suddenly the the log is going up. Due to the log going up vidya falls back on sagar. Vidya was scared but after falling on sagar she feels relaxed. Then the drop comes and they all get wet. When the log stops. Chandra and shalu get off. Sagar gets off and helps vidya off too.
V: This like the second time in two days ive gotten this wet.
S: I know right. So where do u guys wanna go next.
C and Sha: ROLLER COASTER! They arrive at the roller coaster and vidya doesn't want to go on. Sagar sits in a car.
S: Vidya mere saat bat jao plz. Me akala fool lagoon ga.
V: Umm ok…. She sits next to him. They pulls down the bar and the roller coaster starts going up and vidya gets really scare and holds on to sagar. She is soo scared that her eyes become teary. Sagar pulls her head up and looks at her. Rest of the lyrics to Kuch is tarah.
Mujhko toh tere chehre pe yeh ghum nahin janchta
Jaayiz nahin lagta mujhe ghum se tera rishta
Sun meri ghuzarish ise chehre se hataa se
Sun meri ghuzarish ise chehre se hataa se…. he wipes her tears.
Kuch is tarah teri palkein meri palkon se mila de
Aansoo tere saare meri palkon pe sajaa de…. Just right at that moment SAGAR (only sagar) realizes his TRUE feelings for vidya which are…..
Precap: Everyone is going back home.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
omg...moomoo that was awesome please countinue soon 😳

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