FF: Jaan-E-Mann: Part 3, Page 4:July 19

JAAN-E-MANN

hi evryone, i'm Dimple...i have decided to start this ff...I hope y'all read it! It's dedicated to my sister...Ayesha! ENJOY!!!!!

Part 1

A girl who has her back towards the scene is yelling at the 'dukaandar'

Girl-kya? Iss ghatiya lenga ke liye hazaar rupai? Tum pagal ho kya? Isse kaun khareede ga?

Dukaandar-madam! Pehle toh bahut Pasand tha, ab kya hua?

Girl-jab yeh lehnga 750 rupees ki keemat ka hai, toh 1000 ruppees kyyun doongi?

Dukaandar-madam, koi chutta nahin milega.

Girl-Ek baar main chalegayi, main wapas nahiin aaogi!(She says while pointing at him)

The girl turns around. She is our Vidya. She has her hair down (it looks exactly like Divya's hair when it is straight and down.) She is wearing a salwar-kameez. A combination of Dark blue and normal blue.

Vidya-Chul shalu, hum chalte hai1

Shalu-teek hai Vidya, chalo.

Dukaandaar-(yelling while they are on their way out) MAIN CHUTTA DAINE KAI LIYE TIYAAR HOON!

Vidya-(hears what he said but decides to ignore him!)

They are now outside the shop.

Shalu-Waisey, Vidya, jab hum itne amir hai toh baar baar chutey kyun maangti hai/

Vidya-Shalu, tuh nahin samjhe gi.

Shalu-vidya, bataa naa pleaseeeee!

Vidya-Dekh, bachpan sai leke aaj tak, humne jo maanga wohi paaya! Aur phir hum bina soch samaj kai, kuch bhi maang lete thae. lekin ab, jab main chuttey maangti hoon, toh jhagra hota hai!Aur jitne der main kisi ko moun thor jawaab nahin deti, mazaa nahin aata.

Shalu-Agli baar hum shopping jaayegai, main tumharey saath nahiin jaaney wali.

Vidya-kyun?

Shalu-kyunki tumhari waja se,main kisi bhi dukaan main, achhi taran se shopping nahin kar sakti. Aur kyunki tumhari waja se, main 62 dukaans main pair nahin rakh sakti, kyunki tumne us dukaanse jhaggraa shuru kiya hai.

Vidya-yeh koi waja hai kya?

Shalu-nahin, majboori hai!

Vidya- Chup kar kai driver ko phone kar, aur bolde...yahan paunch.

Shalu-Teek hai, karti hoon.

Next scene is in the gym...Sagar is doing push-ups. he is wearing a black undershirt and baggy shorts. (he is looking sooooo dreamy..😍) Chinu walks in.

Chinu-Sagar, tumne apna cell phone kyun off switch kiya hai?

Sagar-Chinu, I have girls to impress and i have a body to build.

Chinu- Mujhey yahaan anaa para, kyunki dad humhe bulaa rahe hai. So maine socha kai main tumhe pick karloon.

Sagar-Chinu, next time tumne aisa faisla banaaya, DONT!!!!!

Chinu-Aur woh kyun?

Sagar-how would u like it if you were on a date with Shalu di and i come along and say, Hey i thoguht I should pick you up because i was on my way home.

Chinu- oh, would you like to tell me tum kis larki kai saath date par ho.

Sagar-main bas example dai raha tha!

Chinu-Well, dont! Aur haan, dad was sounding pretty serious.

Sagar-Teek hai, let's go!

FF INDEX!

Part 1-Page 1

Part 2-Page 2

Part 3-Page 4

i loved it<333
plZ continue SoooooooNN<333
btw im tahmina=]]

Originally posted by: cutey55

i loved it<333
plZ continue SoooooooNN<333
btw im tahmina=]]

hi tahmina, i'm Dimple...Thnx for ur comment!

hmmm sounds interesting=)) plzz continue soon ...cant wait to read next one=))

Originally posted by: ramsha1990

hmmm sounds interesting=)) plzz continue soon ...cant wait to read next one=))

thnk u ramsha di!

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome start! 😃

thnkz sonali di!

r u guna update sooner or later?? i really like it<333

hey dimple..... 😊
fantastic start of ur new ff the starting seems to be good lol 😃
wen u gonna countinue ?

...Narmeen...

nice start. please continue. 😊

Originally posted by: cutey55

r u guna update sooner or later?? i really like it<333

will do so soon!😃