FF: Jaan-E-Mann: Part 3, Page 4:July 19 - Page 2

Originally posted by: narmz

hey dimple..... 😊
fantastic start of ur new ff the starting seems to be good lol 😃
wen u gonna countinue ?

...Narmeen...

'm gonna conitnue after I continue Tere liye...wich i'm hoping to do tomorrow!

Originally posted by: Ghia

nice start. please continue. 😊

thnx for ur comment!😃

AWESOME START!!!!! 👏

Sounds so different... Vidya ka toh itna different character hai I bet mera character better hoga.... 😃I can't wait for my character to arrive... Or Sagar i am feeling so dreamy kay perhaps u might make me meet him... 😃 😛
Anyways I am liking this... Plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 😃

Originally posted by: chand pari

AWESOME START!!!!! 👏

Sounds so different... Vidya ka toh itna different character hai I bet mera character better hoga.... 😃I can't wait for my character to arrive... Or Sagar i am feeling so dreamy kay perhaps u might make me meet him... 😃 😛
Anyways I am liking this... Plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 😃

I'm gonna conitnue...Don't worry...I'll make sure u get ur romance in to....😳 😃 😉 I'll make ur dream come true!

Part 2

Recap-A bit of Sagar and Vidya's charactes were described. Sagar is the cool dud type and Vidya is in love with having arguments.

In the next scene Sagar is at home in front of his dad(SD) since he had called Sagar.

Sagar-Jee Dad

SD-Tum kal hi US se wapas aaye ho, abhi gym jaana shuru kardiya?

Sagar-Dad, aadat ban gayi hai na, iss liye.

SD-College kai baare kya socha hai?

Sagar-Kuch nahin

SD-Kuch nahiin? Uski aadat nahin bani abhi tak?

Sagar- Dad aisi koi baa-

SD-Kal monday hai, tum kal college jao ga

Sagar-Lekin dad, main kal hi ayya tha!

SD-Gym jaate hue tumne socha nahin!

Sagar-(thinks for a while)FINE!!!!1(He stomps off and goes into his bedroom)

The next scene is Vidya in her room. Shalu comes and sits on her bed as Vidya is staring at the sky. It's a bright sunny day.

Shalu-Vidya, tum aise aasmaan ko kyun dekh rahi ho?

Vidya smiles and turns to her and sits on the bed.

Vidya-Aaj kitne dinno baad, itna sunny day aaya hai! (Since it had been raining for a while)

Shalu-Haan, kitne memories aatay hai naa?

Vidya-Haan, memories...Ayesha humhare saath hoti thi, phir hum waterghun laike waterfights karte the...Aur phir dad ki yelling suntey thay

Vidya-Dad (whispers with a sad face)

Shalu-Vidya (hugs her)Chalo, ab apna room clean karo!

Vidya-KYUN?????

Shalu- (sighs) Vidya, kal Ayesha wapas aa rahi hai...Toronto say! Woh room aise dekhe gi toh...

She looks around the room...It has clothes on the floor the bed was unmade...The alarm clock time was messed up and started to beep...

Vidya-Can u help me?????

Shalu-Dekho Vidya, u didnt need help making the mess, so u wonmt need help cleaming it up.

Shalu walks out, and Vidya stares at her with an angry look on her face.

Precap-Vidya goes to her dormitory for the week...Ayesha is der!

Hello everyone...As ya'll noe...I havent updated in a while...That is because i updated my other ff...Please read from the next one on...this one was the setting for the next update so it was kinda boring...Anyways..TATA 4 NOW!!!!!

Nice update!
Sorry, didn't got time to write a reply to the
first part. But anyways, it was a good start! 😃
Cont soon!

- Charri 😊 😛

Originally posted by: charri7878

Nice update!
Sorry, didn't got time to write a reply to the
first part. But anyways, it was a good start! 😃
Cont soon!

- Charri 😊 😛

thnks Charri Di and no problem!😉

~😛 Dimple!

omg.....dimple u updated after so many days man it was jus too good 👏 ...and is Ayesha my lil sis or is it jus a name ?

Originally posted by: pinkpinkers

thnks Charri Di and no problem!😉

~😛 Dimple!

Your welcome sis😳

awesome update! please update again soon!