FF: Jaan-E-Mann: Part 3, Page 4:July 19 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Everyone...Sorry i noe it's been a while...But anyways...Here is the update...I dedicate this update to Narmeen (HAPPPY BIRTHDAYYYYYYYYY) and Ayesha (she will be introduced as a college girl, and Vidya's BEST freind)
Part 3
Recap- We get to noe that Ayesha's coming the next day and Vidya has to clean her room...Because ayesha does not like the mess.
So anyways...
Vidya cleans he rroom, well, not necesarilly clean...She stuffed everything in the closet...Made half the bed and she put some of her clothes underneath the rug. So...she cleaned it, Vidya style. Then she stars packing. she needs to go to college that''s why...the way she goes to college is like ths: she rents a dorm 9her and Ayesha) and she stays in there foer the school week and she gets a ride back home for the weekend..She figured out that it was less hassle that way. She is done packing. Shalu comes into the room.
Shalu: Vidya..is this what u call clean......
Vidya: Shalu, agar tum mujhse kaam karao gi naa...tioh aisa kaam hi mile ga!
Shalu: Vidya...phir tum apne sasuraal jaake kya karo gi?
Vidya: Pehle toh main shaadi nhin karungi..and secondly...main koi kaam-waaam nahin karne vali!
Shalu:LagtA hai mujhety hi kuch karna parey ga..nahin toh Ayehsa's gonna blow hert top!
The nxt scene is between Sagar and Chinu. saggra is packing for his dorm.
Sagar: Chinu...yaar do i have to go to college? Tujhey pata hai...unki gyms kitne unproffesional hote hai...I have a body tyo keep up u noe!
Chinu: Dad nae kaha hai...Janna toh parey ga na?
Sagar: Haan...Dad nae kaha hai!
Chinu: Waisey..tum dadf se itna darta kyun hai yaar?
Sagar: Did you forget how many scoldings i got from dad that day?
Chinu: Oh ya...that was funny na? (he starts laughing)
Sagra gives a killetr look
Chinu: u deserved it..kya zarrorat pai gahi thi tumhe ciggarette peenae ki?
Sagar: Peer pressure dawg!
Chinu: Whatever...
Then Chinyu leaves...Leaving Sagar there alone...
The next day..Vidya woke uyp extar early (From 7:00 to 6:45) she decide dthat she will be awake byu the time ayesha gets off her early flight. And so she takes a bath and wears her light green salwar sit with her hair left down...As usual and her bag in one hand she goes down stairs
On the other hand Ayesha is stepping into her driveway (u could onley see her cool Puma shoes)
then Vidya feels some sort of connection and starts going towards the door
iont the other hand You could only see Ayesha's back..weraring a very cool tracksiut...Since she was on a one-day flight.
Vidya opens the door.......
There you see a beautifel girl...Hair in a ponytail and giving her beautiful smile...It is AYESHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Episiode ends o0n both tghe girls's happy faces....
Precap: Vidya makes a fuss of not going to college without Ayesha!
So...i hope thta u enjoyed the episode of...Jaane-e-mann!!!!!!!
Edited by pinkpinkers - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
awesome job! very sweet episode! Vidya will make Sagar do everything once they get married!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
amazing ff!
y didnt i read it b4?
anyway...i love ur ff!!
plz continue soon🙂
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
i read your whole FF, i loved it continue soon hun
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
awesome update Dimple and thnx for dedicating it to me 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
Wow Dimple this fanfic is awesoem too!!!!!!!!! I just read the whole fanfic it is really good!!!!!!! Hey when are you updating your other fanfic i want to know what happens in both of your fanfics so plsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37

AWESOME!!!!! FABULOUS!!!!FANTASTIC!!!!MIND BLOWING!!!!👏👏👏

I just loved the update and my entry was like totally awesome... I totally dress liek that at times.. But my normal clothing is, tights with shirts that look like dresses and i have like a celection of earring which i can't go without..😆
But it was so nice of Vidya to clean the room for me like that.. Suchi boolon i always keep my room clean.... I can't stand a messy room except for my closet..
The precap is so intresting man...😆
Can't wait till my Aoun enters..😛
Now continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee soooooooonnnnnnnn
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome job! very sweet episode! Vidya will make Sagar do everything once they get married!

thnx sonali di...Vidya THINKS she'll make sagar do everything after their marraige😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: ravioli_11

amazing ff!

y didnt i read it b4?
anyway...i love ur ff!!
plz continue soon🙂

Hi ravioli_11!
thnks for ur comment...
Keep reading for lots of cool scenes...
~Dimple!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: mushtari

i read your whole FF, i loved it continue soon hun

Hey musthari...thanks for ur comment...I'll continue as soon as I coninue Tere liye!😃

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