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This takes place after today's epsiode. Amar's Dad has just told him that Divya realized her mistake and had paid his bail. We never really had a scene that was geniune where Sagar got to save Vidya. She got away from Harsh by falling on the platform We never really got a scene where he ran after her to stop her from leaving. Sure he pulled the chain on the train once, but we never saw the desperation and pure concern. So here is something from me.
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Amar goes to Divya's hotel.
" Sorry Amarji, she left just now. She left this note for you," the manager said.

It read:
Dear Amar,
Muhje maaf karde na. I never understood you. I am sorry for all the trouble I have caused. I have left my number in London, so in case you ever need anything from me, you can reach me.
bye,
Divya

Amar turned grave. Yeh ladki aisi kaise ja sakti hai? Muhje bhi thanks bolna hai," he thought to himself.

He rushed out onto the streets and went to search for her.

Divya was making her way towards the train station.

" I hurt him so much, he will not come to say bye. I just know it," she thought to herself.

She paused for a second. Why did she care if he came? They had just met, why did it seem as if something was telling her to stay here and go back yet?

Some goons surrounded her all of a sudden. One of them was the tour guide who had stolen her money a few days back.

" Tumhe main both maroonge!," Duvya yelled.

Before she could reach him the others grabbed her.

" Choro muhje. You badmasho!"

Meanwhile Amar was approaching the area looking for her. He saw her in trouble and rushed over.

She was kicking and screaming at them.

(Tera Mera Rishta was playing in the background.)

Amar had a flashback from when Sagar was supposed to get the bullet and then Vidya came in front.

Back to the present, he realized she was still fighting them by herself.

" Is barr yeh aleki nahin largi," Amar promised.

He jumped in and started thrashing them.

In the end only the chor was left.

"Amar, muhje isko thapar marna hai. Usko baath isko police ko denge," she said.

Amar smiled.

" Lo Madamji, jitne bhi thapar marne hai, maro!"

Divya slapped him three times before patting him for the cash he had stolen.

She took the money and put it in her purse and then she grabbed her suitcase.
The police took the chor away.

" Amar, kya tum muhje Shivji mandir le jao sakte ho? Main yeh paise gerab loke ko dena chati hoon," she stated.
( Can you to take me to the Shivji Temple? I want to give this money to the poor)

" Theek hai, leken tumhe pehle fresh hona chaiye hai," he said.

He took her home and showed her a room where she could go freshen up.
He left a salwaar kameez for her on the bed. Amar hoped she would wear it.
His mother went to check on her.

" Don't worry beta. Tum both acchi lagti ho is mein," she assired Divya.

Soon they came out. Amar looked shocked at how beautiful she looked.
It was orange colored and it matched with his shirt. He offered her his arm.
His mother smiled as Divya took it and they went outside.

Chintu and Bindya came along with them.

After they took blessings from Shivji, they went to serve food to the patrons of the mandir. Amar looked on mesmirized as she nicely feed some of the children and older adults.

" Yeh dil ki both saaf hai. Mujhe isko batana hai jo maine pehle deka tha," he said.

Afterwards, he took her aside.
" Do you ever have the feeling why you see and feel certain things?," he asked.

She nodded thoughtfully.

" Jab se main yahaan ayi hoon, it feels like something is always drawing me to stay," she replied.

He told her he saw her take a bullet for him earlier that day.

She looked at him stunned.

Amar wasnt sure if he should further explain or let her think about it first.

" Where were we? How could I take a bullet? No one shot at us today, unless...," she trailed off.

Suddenly she had a vision.

Sagar and Vidya are standing at a cliff, and suddenly Sagar looks to see Vidya has gotten shot. he is staring at someone and yelling at them.

She couldn't see the shooter, but then she realized there was a connection.

" Humara rishta ko dusra moka mil hai," she stammered.

They lock eyes. Where and when they find their answers?


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sonali......omg....it's sooooo soooo great!!! 😛
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wow, it was amazing.please continue as soon as possible.
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oh my god. Is all i can say 😆 . its really nice
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oh my god Sonali, that's awesome !
Pls continue..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for the replies.
I cannot update as often as I did with my first two fics, but I hope you enjoy the updates when they come along. Please let me know if you don't like something or if you like something. I hope to improve my writing.
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Part Two- Plans

Divya realized that she would have to extend her stay in India, until they figured things out. She was hoping to stay around Beneras, but discovered from the local customs office that she would have to go to Delhi in order to renew her visa.

" Hum ko Delhi jana padega. Thori dare ke baad hum bawas aya gaye," she stated.

Amar felt a sense of dread of letting her go alone.

" Madamji hum bhi aapke saath aye gaye," he insisted.

She sighed before saying," Agar aapko aana hai, tho Chintu ko saath leker chalte hain. He needs an operation."

He stared at her dumbfounded. Who had told her this?

He looked around at his family members, Who had told her?

" Main kal ko Chintu ko doctor se baathe sunliye. I felt awful that I had framed you. Chintu ko tumari zaroot hai," she retorted.

He gazed her in surprise. Divya had changed so much in just a few days.

" Even if I don't get my visa renewed, I can always come back. Leken humhe Chintu ka khal rak na hai. I want to help. I was so wrong before, please let me make things up to you," she begged.

Amar sat down in front of her.

He leaned over and kissed her forehead.

She didn't seem offended. She gave him her hand and they shook hands.

They would go to Delhi and get Chintu's operation done. Amar hoped they could get her visa renewed. he didn't want her leaving, no matter how long it took for them to discover the truth.
Edited by adventure_gurl - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thats a nice update=)) cont. soon plz!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awww...too cute! 😳 😉
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ah....oh so nice continue soon.
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ohh u started a new one...ohh i love it ..it fab!! 😃 😃

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