FF-SV-Tera Mera rishta purana-upd-pg6

hey i guys, i was feeling really bored during the winter break, so i decided to write an FF. i am telling u guys in advance, i am not a writer, this is my first attempt so plzzzzz forgive me for any mistakes. I will first tell you my story, concept and characters and tell me if u guys like it or not(ur response will tell me whether to continue or not)

Concept:
Sagar and vidya have known each other ever since they were born, their parents are the best of friends, so both grow up knowing each other, going to the same school, college etc. (oh by the way the place where they live is mumbai). Sagar's father and vidya's father are big buissness tycoons in the city, who are very famous, they both are buissness partners. when SV are in their mid-teens, they get an offer to act in a hindi daily soap. Vidya first gets an offer to play as the protagonist's sister in her first soap and sagar gets an offer to play as the male protagonist's best friend. after doing those soaps, they both get an offer to play as the lead couple in a new hindi daily soap. so they both go ahead and proceed. (without forgetting their education, they study and act simultaneously). So cont reading my ff to find out how love and when love blossums b/w these two

story:
MY FF starts from when Vidya was 17 years old and sagar was 18. In first few chapters, i will focuse on sagar and vidya's childhood to give you guys an idea of how each character is, the kind of relationship they share, their interest and passions. then I will get along with the story of wat happens wen they get serial offers.

Characters:
Sagar- a very naughty and sweet guy, is very sensitive deep inside, but appears very strong from the outside. he is a complete prankster, loves teasing, hanging out with friends, hanging out with vidya and palying pranks on and with her. vidya is his closest friend,but being a dimwit he does not realise tht. he loves to act, listen to music and party, loves being the center of attraction or famous. he cant dance but can play an instrument.

Vidya- Very intelligent and smart. she loves playing pranks and teasing too. she is a 100 times more naughtier than sagar and has played a role in spoiling sagar into a prankster to some extent. she can pull off any kind of prank or joke perfectly, usually whenever SV play a prank on someone, she easily escapes and saagar ends up getting in trouble. she loves to act, dance, listen to music and party. sagar is her closest friend, but she also never really realises that.

Sindoora- sagars own and only sister. she is 10 yrs older than him. she is a fashion designer
and is not as evil as the real one.

Uma- sagar's mom, loves her family, takes care of the buisneess along with her hubby

Raghav-S dad. very strict disciplined, but loves to party.

Kaushaliya- V mom, very smart, uma's best friend. loves her family and takes care of buissnes along with her hubby

Ritesh- v's dad, very loving happy, disciplined person, loves to party, verry smart.

rohit- s close friend, v knw s him too, has a crush on v

radha-v's cloase friend.


so plz leave ur coments and tell me whether u like it or not...

-thanks for reading
priya

sounds interesting... can't wait till you start to write it

sounds interesting 😃

yeah a different take on their love story! very nice! 😃

sounds cool...cant wait to read more of it=))

wow somethign different plzzz continue

sounds really intresting
update as soon as possible

thanks for all the wonderful comments guys!!!! i will try to update today itself and thnx for reading
-priya

*****editted******
PART 1
note- i am not a writer so plz forgive me for any mistakes 😃 and also assume my dialogues in hindi plz, coz i dont really knw hindi tht much!!

S n V are little, s is 18 yrs and V is 17. they both are in 12 th grade, since V is smarter she skipped a grade. they both are close family friends, they live very near to each other. Its saturday morning, SV have planed sumthing together, V goes to S's house

S house:
vidya goes up to sagars room, and finds him still sleeping, so she decides to do sumthing
V goes up to his ear and shouts WAKEEE UPPPPPPPPPP SLEEEEEEEEPYYYYYY HEADDDDDDD!!!!!! DID YOU FORGET OUR PLAN????
S - (who is still in bed)aghhhh!!!!!!! plz vidya let me sleep, only 5 minutes more, waisay bhi i slept late last night!! plzzzzzzzz!!!!
V gives him an annoying look, and thinks u are not going to get up this way, let me do sumthing, she goes into the bathrrom and gets a jug of icy cold water, she goes and sits next to sagar who is still sleeping and takes out his hand and puts it in there, sagar who suddenly comes back into his senses screams
S-why did u do that?
V-coz u weren't waking up!!! and y did u sleep late last night wen i took efforts to text u and tell u to go to bed early??????
S-excuse me!!! U shouldn't be talking!!!, if it wasn't for our project report, u asked me to type up last night I would have slept 4 hrs earlier!!
V- ahhh…..I am srry……, sagar, the thing is that……. well u knw….. how I hand to go to a friends party tommowo, ya I didn't have time and waisay I gave u all the information, it was just a type up, wat took u sooooooo long???
S- (in an annoyed tone) is that ALL you told me to do? Wat about the research page?
V- I gave you all the information, it was on the yellow paper!!
S- ya … the yellow paper, the most interesting paper I have seen in my life!!!!
V- wat are u taling abt?
S- gets up and shows her the paper, wat have u written on here? This is no less than a scrap paper, u have abt 8 phone numbers, 5 plans to get shiv and Rajeev in trouble, and let me see… a 10 things u want for Christmas and the most amusing thing of all, I didn't know u were planning to plant an egg in my school locker, so tht wen I open it it cracks open on my head???.. oh wait I skipped sumthing…. Radha's boyfriend's house address, wat are u upto now vidya????
V- gives him a nervous smile, forget abt tht, if u didn't have the research information, u could have called me!! And asked me!!!
S- I…I… I did but……..
V- but wat?
S – wen I called u , aunty picked up ur cell phone and told me that u were feeling sick, and that u for sleeping, so I decided not to disturb u.
V- so u did that research paper all by urself? How I mean it takes abt 3 hrs to do it itself?
S- ya I knw, but I did it anyways….
V- so does that means u finished that project?
S- umm…. Ya… and I proofread it twice, so that there aren't any mistakes, and that bcoz of me u don't get a lower grade!!
V- aww sagar, I'm I'm sooo srry , but y did u do everything in one night? Its not due till Monday!
S- smiles and says, I knw and I also knw u are feeling really sick from the past one month, so I decided to give you a break from this project!!
V- aww, thnx sagar!!!
S- ur welcome, BTW I did this only to pay back that huge homework assignments u did for me last month, wen I went out-of station
V- get a little angry and says, and for YOUR KIND INFROMATION!!, I Did that homework only bcoz it was extra pratice for me and u knw how much I like doing homework!!! Nothing more than the reason for me to help u!!!
S- achhaaaaa? So u're not going to admit u did that for me(giggles)
V- ya right u wish, grabs a pillow and starts to hit him,

Sagar also grabs a pillow and hits her back they both start fightingvidya jumps from the bed to get away from sagar and then suddenly starts to feel a little weird. She stops hitting him sagar notices that, @ the same time sagar's mom is passing by the door. Vidya suddenly faints, sagar runs upto her and grabs her, he loses control, she is about to fall down completely when he grabs her from the waist and holds her, Uma comes running upto vidya.

Uma- V wake up! Wat happened? Let me go get some water!! Sagar put her on the bed!!!

S- yes mom, and call the doctor
Uma- ya I will do that, u call aunty and uncle and inform them and she leaves

Sagar gently carries V to his bed and makes her lie down there, he is abt to turn around and grab his cell phone to call, but finds something his holding his watch!!! He turns around and sees that V's bracelet is stuck to his watch, he smiles tries to pull the bracelet from his watch, but doesn't seem to help!! He tries a lot and finally gives up. He opens vidya's bracelet from her hand and walks away as her bracelet is still hanging from his watch. He calls v's parents.

The next scene, everybody is gathered around sagar's bed, V's is till sleeping the doctor is checking her. He gives her an injection.

To be Continued………………..

Precap- The dotor calls out v and s's dad privately to talk to her abt vidya

Srry guys, I knw It isn't gud, but I will try to make it better for part 2 and thx for reading and plz leave ur coments
-priya

that was great! 😛 update soon! 😃