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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome update!!!! cant wait to read more!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg omg omg ..this is soooo GOOD ...ur fantastic..u gt update soon pLLEASEEE!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oooh it's so interesting to see SV so young. 😳 They're so cute!!

I wonder what happened to V and why the doctor wants to talk privately?? Hmmm am I right in what Im thinking? 😕 😆 hehe

Great job! Please continue soon, Im curious to know what happened! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow ur FANTABULOS
please continue

and i was wondering that in the introduction u said that they r in their childhood days and in this chapter they r in 12 grade

could u please tell me if i misunderstood or if u changed something

Edited by riyadesai - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank u soo much noodles, visalover, ramsha 1190 and riyadesai, i really appreciate ur coments!! ya i decided to change the ages of sagar and vidya, i did not knw how to portray them as little children, srry if tht did disapoint u guys!!!!, but i am trying to make their story as teens alittle more interesting and once again thank uuuuuu soooooooooo much for coments, keep them coming and dooooooo keep reading!!
-priya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey 😊

Great update 👏 👏

I love it so far 😃

Can't wait for your next update 😉

From Shireen 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: dream on

thank u soo much noodles, visalover, ramsha 1190 and riyadesai, i really appreciate ur coments!! ya i decided to change the ages of sagar and vidya, i did not knw how to portray them as little children, srry if tht did disapoint u guys!!!!, but i am trying to make their story as teens alittle more interesting and once again thank uuuuuu soooooooooo much for coments, keep them coming and dooooooo keep reading!!
-priya

thanks 😊

waiting for the next update

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I like the story! keep it up! wonder what is wrong with Vidya? 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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******part 2************
Recap- V faints and uma calls the doctor, the doctor checks vidya and gives her an injection so that she can revive her to her senses.

Uma- wat happened doctor, is vidya ok?
Doctor- ya she is fine , she will be waking up very soon, nothing to worry about, has this ever happened before, was she feeling any sick recently.
Kaushaliya- ya she has not been well, since the past one month and yesterday night she was feeling giddy and she threw up too! she was complaining for a huge headache, i gave her some counter medicine, after that she was fine!!
Doctor- headaches? and nausea.. he stops to think for a second
Kaush- is everthing fine, why did she faint?
Doctor- uhh nothing serious, i think everything thats happening to her is bcoz of excess stress and weakness, i will give her some vitamins, make sure she takes them. i will leave now and... ritesh, ragjhav, how are the stock prices this season , are they going down?
Raghav- no they are increasing a lot? why are u interested in them?
doctor- ya i was wondering if... i could take a look at the stock book...
raghav- ya there in my study, come down stairs with us , i will show you
doctor- ya... and follows. Them

they all go down stairs, leaving uma, kaushalya with vidya. Sagar's cell phone rings so he goes downstairs to receive and happens to hear the elders conversation: (oh and the doctor's name is arjun)

ritesh- arjun, tell me frankly, wats happened to vidya?
Arjun- ritesh …woh.. I think she is suffering from migrane…. Aur who bhi ….it looks like she has been getting pretty severe attacks. Aur uska blood pressure bhi kaafi low hai. Has she been stressed or working late overnight with any worked?
Ritesh- ya she has been going to extra coaching classes and has been studying latefrom the past couple of weeks for her exams.
Arjun- ya I think that has been effecting her, nothing to worry. Bring her in once into my office, we'll get some tests done and then we can start on her medication which she can continue for a while, until she is relieved. But I am going out of station for a week. So until then use these medicines and these are the food restrictions for her (he writes them down and leaves.)
Ritesh- I don't knw how to tell kaushaliya this, I knw its nothing mjor but how will I make her understand?
Raghav- don't worry ritesh, me , uma and u can explain things to her later, so just relax, nothing will happent to vidya

Sagar(who heard everything thinks to himself)- migrane and low blood pressure? I knwwww itt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that idiot never listens to me!!! She is always behind a book studying or doing work staying up late, now this has effected her health!! Idiot!!! Y don't u ever listen to me?????????????

Sagar's cell phone rings, he picks it up

Sagar- HHHHEEEEEEEELLLLLoooooooowwwww in a grumpy mood
Rohit- hey chill dude!! Wats up with u?
S- nothing tell me y u called?(still grumpy)
R-y do u sound grumpy, did u get yelled @ or sumthing? Nyways, are u coming to Mahesh and mini's party birthday party today(mini and Mahesh are twins)?
S- oh !! yeah thatz wat I was forgetting!! The party's @ 6 right, damn it, me and vidya planned to go buy them a gift, but………
R- but wat……….(curiously)
S- y do u care?
R- umm I was just wondering, anyways is Vidya with u right now? Can I talk to her…. I have a few doubts in the math homework, she could clear them out for me……(he is just making up excuses)
S- dude!!! She is not HERE WITH ME AND EVEN IF SHE IS SHE IS SOOOO NOT GOING TO THINK ABOUT MATH OR ANYTHING ELSE!! DO U GET IT!!!
R- DUDE! Chill, wats wrong with u? I was just….. forget it !! I will see u later in the party tonight!! And bring vidya along with you, and cuts the phone!!!!

Sagar starts boiling with anger..

Meanwhile vidya wakes up!! Kaushalya and uma are still there
Kaushaliya- crying—vidya how are u feeling?
V- mom y are u crying? I am fine!!! I just fainted , u're crying as if I have died or sumthing!!
Her mom tells her to not talk abt her death again, they have a little fight as vidya argues tht she wants to go to them. Sagar comes inside and brings her a class of water. Uma and kaushaliya leave the room and go to the kitchen talking abt their stuff. Sagar gives the glass to vidya. Vidya drinks it. He gives her an angry look and pretends to search sumthing in his closet.
V- are u angry wit me?
S- no y should I be angry @ u?(in a grumpy tone)
V- bring it out sagar, y are u angry!!
S- I am ……(stops and thinks of not telling vidya)……. Not angry with you!!
V- ok thatz gr8, where are ur car keys, lets go shopping for mini and mahesh's party tonight!!! And gets up frm the bed!!
S- NO U R not going anywhere!! stops her frm getting up and says, u have just fainted so just….just… dont go anywhere!
V- gets angry, Y ARE U STOPPING ME, AND I AM FINE!! Seriously wats wrong with u ppl?
S thinks to himself y am I overeacting?I should stop, and y do I care soo much abt a person who doesn't even care abt herself? Sagar stop losing ur mind!!
Vidya gets up frm the bed, meanwhile uma and kaushaliya come, vidya asks them if she could go shopping with sagar for the party, they say no, vidya argues but fails to make them agree, and leave the room again. Vidya sits back on the bed disappointed and looking like she is abt to kill sumone!! Sagar notices that and goes up to her. She yells at him, ans sagar is abt to yell back wen, he remembers wat the doctor said abt vidya. He sists next to her and starts to tries to talk to her.
S-ugg……. Vidya…… come on…. Y are u angry they r doing it for ur own good right?
V- stop talking like my mom!! I really wanted to go to their party!!but… agh!!!!!!
S- I will talk with auntie and make her agredee, fine now smile and go eat sumthing!!
V- and how will u do that?
S- leave everything to me, go wait for me downstairs and I will come

Sagar makes kaushalya agree… so SV leave for shopping,

To be continued……………..

Precap- SV are @ the party, rohit and some of his friends mix sumthing in vidya's drink

Srry guys, I knw this part was completely boring! But I promise the next part will be better with a lot of SV in it(that is if u want me to continue), sooooo plzzzzzzzz leave ur coments, n tell me if u guys want me to change anything( I will try to upon any request) and thank uu sooo much for reading!!

-priya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good job!!

I was scared that Vidya is pregnant cause of all the symptoms she was having. 😆 It's nice that S is caring for her. 😛

Uh oh I wonder what those boys will do? Please continue soon! 😃

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