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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
wow great update 👏 plllzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
Love ur update....Plz continue soon. 👏 👏 👏 Very good....Great story. 😊
Ayesha 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
plz continue
its very different
i like it
ur on my FF List!
👏
Nandoo thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
Afzeel good FF yaar...a different story... 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
plz continue
👏 😃 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26

they reached home

sagar -vidya lets go [he got out of the car and went inside the house meanwhile our beautiful princess is sleeping in peace sagar didn't noticed that .but after a while he got scared where is she ,so he went outside and saw vidya sleeping inside the car ]

sagar- [went to vidya and said] oye madam lets go inside

vidya- lift me up and take me inside

sagar - no way im not going to lift you up ok

vidya - its up to you if you wanna marry me you have to follow my orders or else you know

sagar -you know what vidya are you giving me a warning sign

vidya - yeah something like that

sagar -i don't care do what ever you won't to do

vidya [now pissed off😡😡]you won't carry me up right ok fine [she came out of the car and went to the direction where the road goes ]

sagar -vidya what are you doing come here right now [vidyas just ignoring him and walking away and theres a car coming so vidya lifted her shirt up so that she can stop the car and said can i get a lift plz and sagar was watching everything.

vidya - can you open the door for me plz [one man came out of the car and said yeah sure bebe and came near her and touched her

sagar -[yelled and mad😡]VIDYA YOU COME HERE RIGHT NOW

vidya - bye sweety i'll miss you ok bye don't wait for me [sagar now comes near her and grabed her and took her inside]

sagar - vidya why are you doing this to me act like a girl [meanwhile he was talking vidya was sleeping and when sagar looked at her she was sleeping ]

sagar -silly girl and kissed her and went to the other room

[in the morning when vidya woke up she smells food so she went to the kitchen and sagar was cooking ]

sagar - good morning

vidya - good morning ,but im still sleepy ,im going to bed

sagar - nooooo you are not sleeping anymore come and eat breakfast

vidya -plz let me sleep im tired [sagar came near her and make her sit on the chair and said eat so vidya had to eat

sagar - we have to leave now go and change your clothes

vidya - im ok like this . i'll go home like this

sagar - have you gone mad shame on you

vidya-[with and attitude] hey look its my decision im going to wear what i like ok

sagar if you won't change i'll make you change ok

vidya - FINE[so she went and changed ]and they left from there

[sagar and vidya went home ]

vidyas home

vidyas mom -how was your trip

vidya - it was soo boring sagar is so unromantice ma i think i need a break from him and she did'nt knew that sagar is still there and lisning

vidyas mom - arey sagar beta you are still here

sagar - oh i just came here to give vidya her shoes and he looked at vidya and said your shoes vidya

vidya -[with an attitude]thanks and go away from here i need a break from you bcz im tired [and shes only making sagar very upset and so our poor sagar just went away]

vidya s mom- we got sthe prove who rapped you

vidya - what

vidyas mom -yeah someone recorded everything and gave it to the police and those rappist are now on jail vidya

vidya - do they know who the person is who recorded it

vidyas mom- no,but he wrote something dosti ke hai tumse

vidya- thinking who wrote this and why is he help the police for what reason anyway ma im going to sleep goodnight vidyas mom- goodnight beta

next epi-vidya saying sorry to sagar

i hope you guys will like it

Nandoo thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
continue afzeel....waiting to see how she will say sorry to Sagar... 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
thats awesome....i cant wait to read more....continue soon=))
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
gr8 update
pls cont soon
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
plz continue afzeel! I really like it! 😃

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