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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
wow!! isnt sagar a lil bit too old 😕 but ur story is sooo cute!!! plz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ramsha1990

wow!! isnt sagar a lil bit too old 😕 but ur story is sooo cute!!! plz continue

he's only 5 yrs older😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ur story is really good! It's different!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i like you ff, plz cont
-priya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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this story is true my friend got married to a 22 year old boy

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Posted: 17 years ago
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chinu walked in and asked sagar why is he so sad what happen

sagar -do you remember tusshar and i went to watch a movie .there i had a fight with a girl and i was soo mad at her and today when i met her she told me what why you mans are treating me like this and she said do you wanna rape me too .i was shocked and i felt soo bad for her when she told me that she got rapped

chinu - did she or her parents told the police about this

sagar - i don't know

chinu -you have to ask her dada . you should help her

sagar - you are right ,but she doesn't like me at all and she doesn't even wants to talk to me

chinu -you should do something to make her like you and she can trust you ok.

sagar - ok! goodnight chinu .

chinu -goodnight

it's 7:00 am and vidya went early to school .when she was walking on her way she saw sagar standing she got scared but didn't show it

sagar- i want to talk to you

vidya -[with an attitude]i don't want to talk to you ok now leave me alone

sagar -but at least lisen to me

vidya - [now got very angry]😡 WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME WHY JUST YOU DONT LEAVE ME ALONE JUST GO AWAY [then she went away from there leaving sagar sad

sagar - i should talk to her friend [then he went to talk to perna when he went there perna show him and asked what is he doing here and he said that he needs he her help

perna - what kind of help

sagar - you know what happen with your friend right

perna - yes

sagar - i want to help her

perna - but she doesn't want anyone to help her she said thats she's fine, but she s not like before

sagar-plz help me i want to win your friends heart i want her to like me and then i can help her[so he told her what he wants to do

perna - [is shocked to hear this and said have you gone mad ]you know what you are saying right and i don't think so shes going to expect this ,but anyway i'll help you .i'll tell you everything about her what she likes and what she dislike the most

[both of them together were making a plan for vidya]

[school was over and vidya went straight home ,and when she reached her home she saw her mother waiting for her ]

vidya -ma what happen

vidyas mom -tonight we are going to a birthday party today ,so go and get ready

vidya - ma i don't feel like to go anywhere

vidyas mom - i don't want to hear anything ok you are going thats it no more discussion ok know get ready and perna is coming to ok

vidya- ok[ then she went to get ready ]

at sagars home

[sagar looks so hot in black ]then chinu came and asked is she coming or not

sagar - i don't know [then he saw perna, and vidyas mom and he went there hai aunty how are you it's been long time i haven't seen you you look sexy and vidya mom got shy

sagar -perna i need to talk to you

perna said - ok[but not here ]they went outside

sagar- wheres vidya

perna - she's coming in half and hour

sagar - half an hour ok i'll wait [they went inside ]

[It was time to cut the cake so they called sagar to come and cut the cake ]he was just about to cut the cake when vidya came in a blue dress she looked so beautiful and everyone just looked at her and our sagar was lost in his wonderland he couldn't believe that its vidya she looked different and sexy]

chinu -what happen why are you not cutting the cake

sagar - sorry [and when he was cutting the cake vidya saw its sagar and she was shocked ]perna went beside vidya

perna - sagar is not bad .his a very sweet person

vidya looked very mad then she decided to leave

vidya -perna i'm going home ok

perna - vidya what is this you have to stay and enjoy the party

vidya- if you want to stay so stay her ,but im leaving ok[just then sagar came and said are you girls enjoying the party and looked at vidya she looked away avoiding sagar and sagar noticed that]

sagar - vidya do you wanna dance with me

vidya -vidya looked surprised how does he know my name and said no i don't know how to dance

sagar - don't worry i'll teach you [so he hold vidyas hand and took her to the dance floor vidyas heart started beating fast now &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp;

and then someone put the soft song from koi aap sa

(seene mein dil dil mein dhadkan
dhadkan mein kya hain teri pyaas hain
har pyaas mein dard hain sanam
yeh dard tera ehsaas hain)
o dilo jaana teri tamanna has saans ko
maine hain dekha mehsoos karke iss pyaas ko
seene mein dil dil mein dhadkan
dhadkan mein kya hain teri pyaas hain
har pyaas mein dard hain sanam
yeh dard tera ehsaas hain

(hotho pe dabi dasta koi aankho mein hain sapna
ajnabi sa koi ek dard hain magar lag raha hain apna)
main na jaanu hamrahi kaisa hain yeh kaisa pyar hain
jaan leta hain jo bina bole
kya dhadkan ka ikraar hain
o dilo jaana teri tamanna has saans ko
maine hain dekha mehsoos karke iss pyaas ko
seene mein dil dil mein dhadkan
dhadkan mein kya hain teri pyaas hain
har pyaas mein dard hain sanam
yeh dard tera ehsaas hain

(o arzoo mein koi arzoo chupi saanso mein kasak hain
lamha lamha betaab karti jo pyar ki mehak hain)
chahat ke saaye mein bikhri jaaye teri dosti ki khushbu
tere dil mein hain mera thikana
mere dil mein hain bas tu hi tu
o dilo jaana teri tamanna has saans ko
maine hain dekha mehsoos karke iss pyaas ko
seene mein dil dil mein dhadkan
dhadkan mein kya hain teri pyaas hain
har pyaas mein dard hain sanam
yeh dard tera ehsaas hain[both of them were just looking at eachother ❤️❤️and everyones eyes were on them and talking awww they both look cute together .they should get married.when the song ended sagar took a ring out from his pocket and bended his kneessagar - WILL YOU MARRY ME [vidya shocked she couldn't believe it]vidya - what are you doing sagar - I LOVE YOU . i don't when did it happen vidya -you know what you are saying sagar -yes i knowvidya -[saying out loud]just bcz i was rapped thats why [everyone is shocked]sagar - no i really mean it i love you sagars mom -plz expect it beta and so as everyone said even vidya momsaid that toovidya - but im so young for you sagar - i don't care . i want to make you mine forever and[ he started crying 😭plz believe me .you are everything for me vidya -i'll marry you ,but i don't love you bcz i don't know anything about you i need time sagar -i'll give you time vidya and i understand how you feel everyone is so happy 😛ok guys i hope you guys will like it😃<>document.write("");
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Posted: 17 years ago
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no worries....I LOVE UR FF!! ii think u should rite update and page number cuz i couldnt figure out whether it was updated or not ..soo it would be a good idea..I think ur ff is AMAZING!!! i love it cant wait to read more...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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guys i know that its little bit boring ,but it will get interesting don't worry

sagar-[phoned vidya ]vidya be ready i'll pick you up ok

vidya -ok ,but where are we going

sagar -somewhere where theres no one between us

vidya- ok bye

sagar -i'll be there in about half and hour ok

[sagar picked vidya up ]

vidya- now tell me where are we going [shes very worried where is he taking me ]

sagar- vidya why are you so worried im your future husband you got to trust me ok

vidya -im sorry.

[she looked sleepy so she decided to take a nap ,sagar was little bit mad he wanted to talk to her bcz he wanted her to give him attention,but our madam is sleeping so sagar decided to scream ]

sagar - aahhhhhh my hand

vidya - what happen why did you scream

sagar-[laughing ]

vidya -[looking mad 😡]why did you do that

sagar- bcz i wanted to talk to you and you were sleeping

vidya - what do you wanna talk about

sagar- tell me about yourself vidya

[vidya now gets happy but didn't show it that she likes it that he asked her ]

vidya -what do you wanna know about me

sagar- anything

vidya - ok i had a boyfriend [making sagar jealous]he was very sweet and sexy i used to kiss him on his lips and we used to go out together

sagar-[he doesn't like it at all ]boyfriend ha!do you still love him

vidya -no bcz he was cheating on me

sagar -do you miss him

vidya -no

[now sagar in romantice mood ]

sagar -[hold vidyas hand and kissed on her hand]

vidya -what are you doing

sagar -vidya kiss me plz kiss me

vidya - no i wont

sagar - ok ,fine[it was dark now and vidya is getting very tired now ]

vidya -how much long will it take now bcz im tired

sagar -we are almost there

[finally they have reached their destination and vidya couldn't believe how beautiful it is]

vidya -such a big house it is soo beautiful who's house is this

sagar - our house .

vidya - our house

sagar - do you like it

vidya - i love it.

sagar- these is your house do what ever you want

[theres beach outside their house and vidya ran outside she went in the water and started playing and sagar was just looking at her she looked so cute ]

sagar- talking to himself shes so pretty i made a right choice

[now vidya came she was all wet and looked sexy bcz you can see her body ]

sagar -vidya you are all wet [he came never her and put his hand on her waist and kissed her on her lips and vidya didn't move at all she liked it ]

sagar - vidya get changed there some clothes in the room

vidya - ok[she went in the room there was s one short shirt so she went and asked sagar is there anything else i can wear so sagar went and checked there nothing else]

sagar - sorry vidya you have to wear that theresnothing else in the room sorry

vidya - its ok,but im hungry i want to eat something

sagar - [hes thinking to himself theres no food here what am i wanna go now]

vidya- [couldn't help it now] im hungry sagar i need food

sagar -wanna go out and eat

vidya -yes [so they went out and vidya is wearing a short shirt]i want to go to the dhaba you have to take me there

sagar - have you gone mad

vidya -[ mad😡and screamed ]TAKE ME THERE OR ELSE I WONT EAT

sagar -ok i'll take you there fine ,but don't yell

[so they went to the dhaba vidya got out and ran like crazy before sagar could stop the car]

sagar -[mad😡]have you gone mad who told you to get out of the car when it was not even stoped next time dont do that ever again do you hear me ]

vidya[snobbing😭]why are you yelling at me like this.im sorry

sagar -[didn't like that vidya is crying ]im sorry plz forgive me now stop crying

vidya - its ok im sorry too ,but don't yell at me [so they ordered some food ]

sagar- vidya i'll be right back ok[so he left he went to the washroom vidya was sitting alone and eating her food when five man came and started saying bad word to her .hey sexy why don't you wear more small clothes so we can see all the views inside .vidya now started getting scared so she decided to go to sagar ]

vidya - [screams ]bcz they all surrounded her and one of them grabed her from the back]

vidya -PLZ LEAVE ME LEAVE ME just then sagar came out and saw those man teasing her and he got mad bcz one of those man touched her

sagar -vidya .....vidya leave her alone you ...........and started beating them all up

vidya - leave them leave them you ganna kill them[them she went between them leave them plz. sagar stop

sagar - lets go from here [they were on there way when vidya asked why did he beat them up ]

vidya- why did you beat them up for what

sagar -didn't i till you that i will always protect you .

vidya - i know ,but why do you want to protect me

sagar - i love you vidya

vidya - where are we going now

sagar -to our home

vidya -we stay there

sagar -yes[finally they reached]

to be continued

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I like your FF, Afzeel.

Very different story, and a very different Vidya. The only thing I don't understand is that she was raped, then why didn't her family try to punish those guys?

Also I expected to see a little bit of subtle nature of V. She wouldn't go to a dhabba like that.

But a very interesting story, indeed.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ye ...i liek this vidya cuz she's like bit bossy....cant we make sagar a lil younger somehow 😕 he's soo old lol ....anyway i love ur story its sooo good=))) continue soon!!!!

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