FF - Enough!! - Dec. 21 - Part 5, Pg. 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Guys!

How's going? Anyone other than Sharad/Sagar missed me?😛 Well, I'm gonna write an FF. It will start from the day Sagar gave all his property + money to "Junior".

I only have part 1 in mind, so for the rest of the story, you guys need to give me ideas.

I have a history of starting a FF and not finishing it (and when I say history, I mean 1 FF in Kasamh Se longggggggggggggggggg time ago😆), I thought I'll warn you😆.

I'll post part 1 soon, I think😕

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Dec. 7, 2007

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Dec. 8, 2007

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Dec. 9, 2007

3

3

7

Dec. 16, 2007

4

4

8

Dec 21, 2007

5

5

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ChocolateQueen thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz post it right now im waiting bcz i dont have anything to do so im just mingliing around so bored
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Posted: 17 years ago
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pllllllzzzzzzz post soon

lol thanks for letting me know in advance 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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FF - Enough

Part 1

Intro:

Everyone and everything is the same, not adding anyone yet or taking anyone out, same old Dulhann (No, I didn't mean Vidya is old, I meant the story line😆).

It starts from the day when Sagar gave all his money + property to "Junior".

Singh House:

Living Room/The Main Hall:

Bharat: Mr Ocean, Aap mami ji ke liye to gift le aye, lakin Junior ke liya koi be gift nahi laye?

Bua Ji laughs and says😆😆: Bharat!😆, Junior jab aayege to un ke liye be gift aa jage ga. Aise jaldi be kiya hai?

Sagar: Nahi Bua Ji, Galat😳. Sab ko tofa mila hai kuch na kuch, to Junior ko be kuch milna chaye. Aaj he milega. Abhi.

Everyone's shocked😲 and we get that 10 mins of shocking faces flashing on the screen.

Sagar continues: Je papers Junior ke liye hai. Yeh raha junior ka gift. Yeh companies, yeh business, yeh jayadad (property), Sab kuch......Junior ke naam.

Everyone's shocked😲 , Maaji as usual is smiling and nodding away😆.

Sindoora is looking like this: 🤬

This is Vidya: 😡

Sagar: Aaj se mera bacha, tamam jayadad ka malak.

Sindoora is still: 🤬

Sagar: Um Vidya, Isse apne pass rakh lo na please (handing her the transfer papers). Hala ki yeh, yeh tofa tumhare tofe se bahut chota hai. Oh ha, yeh tofa tumhare liya nahi hai, yeh Junior ke liye hai, rakh lo.

That's it for now. I just took this straight from Nov. 15th episode, word from word. Now, I'll continue my own story from here.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Princess Di long time huh? 🤗 Didn't know you also were a BMTDian. 😛 Good to see you here. 😉

I remember this episode if I'm not wrong I've seen this last week, hehe. 😳
"we get that 10 mins of shocking faces flashing on the screen."--> the difference between reading a FF and watching and you added it here too. 😕 😆

Please do continue and FAST if possible. 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Me = Blue

Originally posted by: Nancy_89

Hey Princess Di long time huh? 🤗 Didn't know you also were a BMTDian. 😛 Good to see you here. 😉

Hey!!!!!!!! 🤗 Arre yaar, it's all Sharad's fault that I'm a BMTDian😳❤️ and I don't think I need to explain why it's his fault na😛.

I remember this episode if I'm not wrong I've seen this last week, hehe. 😳

Well, in India it was Nov. 15th, but I don't know when it aired anywhere else😕.

"we get that 10 mins of shocking faces flashing on the screen."--> the difference between reading a FF and watching and you added it here too. 😕 😆

😆 I'm trying to get effects here 😆, but yes it's a lame attempt😛

Please do continue and FAST if possible. 👏 👏

I'm gonna post part 2 soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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"we get that 10 mins of shocking faces flashing on the screen."

Haha I thought that was really funny. 😆 I can't wait to see how you take the story from here! 😳 Please to continue. 😃

-noodles
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Posted: 17 years ago
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FF - Enough

Part 2

Recap: Sagar transferred everything that he owns to Junior. Sindoora is literally dead hearing this😆😈 and Sagar requests Vidya to keep the papers with her who looks very angry.

Sagar: Um Vidya, Isse apne pass rakh lo na please (handing her the transfer papers). Hala ki yeh, yeh tofa tumhare tofe se bahut chota hai. Oh ha, yeh tofa tumhare liya nahi hai, yeh Junior ke liye hai, rakh lo.

Vidya: Hume nahi rakhna. Yeh sab karne se phale aap ne hum se baat ke kya? Nahi na, to phir yeh zumadari aap hum par kyu dal rahe hai? Khud he rakh leyage.

Saying this Vidya throws the papers on the coffee table👏 and runs up to her room.

Sagar: 😲. Yeh....Yeh....Vidya ko kya ho gaye achanak?

And he runs after Vidya.

Everyone's shocked to hear Vidya talk back like that. Bua Ji sensing that everyone looks worried decides to break the silence.

Bua Ji: Aap sab khamosh kyun ho gaye? Arre, aap bol rehe hai ke Vidya maa ban ne wali hai. Yeh sab hona to normal hai na, mood isse he hota hai.

Everyone looks little relief hearing this, but seems like Balwant needs to come and give Sindoora a biggggggggggg hug😆😛, bachari ko itna bada shock mila hai😛😉.

Singh House:

Sagar & Vidya's Room:

Vidya is sitting on the bed, still looking angry and upset. Sagar comes in and slowly makes his way to Vidya. He sits next to Vidya. Vidya notice that and she gets up and starts to walk away, but Sagar holds her hand😳.

Sagar: Vidya.....kya hua? Tum...tum itni naraaz kyu ho? Akhar meri galti kya hai?

Vidya stays quite, but she's not crying (kyunki abhi Sindoora ki turn hai rone ki😛).

Sagar gets up and make Vidya turn around so she's facing him. Sagar could tell by looking into her eyes that he has really hurt her somehow.

Sagar: Vidya, isse khomosh mat raho. Kuch to bolo please (and makes his famous puupy face....haiiiiiiiiiiiiii😳).

Vidya finally looks at him and says: Kyun kuch bolo hum? Kya kahe hum aap se? Kya aap ne hum se kuch kahna ja kuch baat karna jaroori samaja jo hum aap se baat kare?

Sagar: Vidya....mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha (Yeah Vidya, tumhara pati is a dimwit, you need to spell everything out for him😆). Tum kahna kya chachti ho? Kya tum mere fasale se khush nahi ho?

Vidya: Kaise khush ho hum? Kaise? Aap hum se har bar kahte hai ke hum aap se kuch naa chupie, aap se har baat kare, to phir aap hum se kyun baate chupa rahe hai? Aap hum say baat kyun nahi karte?

Sagar: Arre Vidya, mujhe to laga ke tum be yahe chahogi ke hamare bache ko sari khushia mile. Maine to socha tha ke tum khush hoye.

Vidya: Haa, khush hote hum, agar aap ne hamare dosre bache ke bare me bee socha hota. Aap shaid bol gaye hai, Sameer be hamara beta hai. To phir aap us ke saath yeh kaise kar sakte hai? Kya woh hamara beta nahi hai?

Sagar: Haa....Haa Vidya, Sameer hamara beta hai....aur.....Vidya cuts in

Vidya: Agar woh hamara beta hai, to yeh sab kyun? Aap ne Junior ko saab kuch de diya aur Sameer ko kuch be nahi? Hume aap se yeh umeed nahi thi.

Vidya gives Sagar a disgusted look and leaves the room. Sagar appears to be sad and maybe little guilty.

To be continued.....

P.S. It really bugged me that Sagar didn't think about Sameer and nothing was given to him😡😡. I really wanted Vidya to stand up for Sameer and make Sagar realise that he was wrong, but she disappointed me as well, so I'm making her do it in my story😛.

If you guys have any ideas for this FF, please do share.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh wowwwww....tht was grt...pls continue soon....and i LOVE it how u made vidya get upset over sagar forgetting sameer...yayyy...tht was the besttt....we were all upset whn he gave the property to junior only.....chalo atleast ff mein hi sahi...sameer got some importance...hehe..

keep it up...plsssss update soon... 😊 luved it..

Shaili
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeah Sameer is their child. Whether the child is adopted ot biological, their rights shouldn't be ignored. 😃
great update!

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