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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: narmz

OMG...Nandoo ur update was just fantastic 👏awwwwwww Thanks a billion Narmu dear.....love ur comments.😳.. u fullfilled ur promise about updating on friday.yeps ...i really tried hard to fullfill it...😉..i was so excited wen i saw u update coz i was luking forward to it....im also looking forward to ur next update wen u gonna update ?.ohhh really....soo for my next update u have to wait for a bit more dear...sooo much work in office...today i didnt even get out of my chair....hufff......😕oh yes dnt even think about ebding this FF coz it is jus awesome 😳 how can u even think about ending it ? come on Nandoo u have to listen to me !.yes dear...i didnt even think about ending my FF this soon...coz its just 4months old.....but kya karoon...hve to end it...my work is going hectic and im not getting time to update it...thats why...yesh yesh...i hve to listen to my cute brain eater and dearest frnds...and sweets sisters...though....but dont worry...u will get one more FF frm my side...as i said i already selected title for my next FF and got a overview of story too.😳..😉...soz im replying late coz i went to school as i am feeling much better then before 😃 and i jus saw ur update...and i commented on it ASAP 😛 ohhh thats ok dear....thats better that u are feeling good now....ohhh thnq soo much dear....😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: chand pari

Hello Nandoo di.. hello my dear pari....
Sooooooooooo sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy I didn't really but i did read ur update but i am sure you know the reason why.. 😳 yes choti rani...i knw the reason why u replied late...😛
But this time i had to reply what on earth is wrong with Sindoora 😡 😡 😡 Poor Vidya 😭 haan yaar..pata nahin wht happened to sindoora...she is sooo sick....hmmm poor vidya..pata nahin whn will she get to knw about sindoora and her acts....😉You're update was fantastic!!!! 👏 ... Thanks a jillion dear...😳

Ok Didi I totally understand why you wanna end this update cuz i am going through the same experince.. I cannot manage.. But I get emotional black mailed very fast and the my two good friend jino nai mere dono haat rokay way hain are stopping me for ending it.. But I DON'T WANT YOU TO END IT... 😭 Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz... Per main appko force nahi karoon gi cuz i totally understand but phir bhi yes dear...i knw that u r the better person to understand my problem.....i also not at all want to end it....meee too getting soo many blackmails an deven threats too...not to end it....but i cant make it....u will get my updates till 150th page....if i have any problems with the page numbers i even ask Ammu to allow me to write for two more pages and will put an end in this thread only...not at all wanted to open a new or second part.....it will make a mess....which i dont wnt ....and dont worry dear...im going to start a new one...but i cant tell whn will it happen..😉..😳plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...
Anyways continue soon. sure sure...sister...will continuesoon...😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Fine...reach those pagaes and U BETTER COME BACK WITH THE OTHER ONE!!!!! other wise i will hunt you down and make u write onother one! hehehe...I feel evil!!!!!!!!!!

Anyways...Plz...finish this FF...Dont quit it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I will miss this FF so!!!!!

i wonder what the name of ur other one will be....!!!!!!

HMMMMMMMM!!!!!

GTG!!!!! bye ❤️

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pinkpinkers

Fine...reach those pagaes and U BETTER COME BACK WITH THE OTHER ONE!!!!! other wise i will hunt you down and make u write onother one! hehehe...I feel evil!!!!!!!!!! yes dear...u have all the rights to hunt me....but im sure tht i will come back with apretty nice story again....ok😳

Anyways...Plz...finish this FF...Dont quit it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no no...i wont quit it...i will give a nice end to it....i dont like ppl who leaves things in the middle way...im not like tht...atleast i will give an end soon...

I will miss this FF so!!!!! hmmmm i tooo miss it soo much dear...😭

i wonder what the name of ur other one will be....!!!!!!hmmm this is a damn secret...but u will get to knw it soon once i finish this one...and whn i get time i will start pendown it...thn i will give an intro to it....soo have to wait...but thinking ....can i reach ur expectations???!!!!😳😕

HMMMMMMMM!!!!!

GTG!!!!! bye ❤️ bbye dear...love u too...have a nice time..tkcr...

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hello guys....
soo sorry for not updating the FF,....hope today i will get sometime and will update it atleast with a short one.....

ook....really miss u guys alot coz of my work... 😡 😭
Edited by Nandoo - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pinkpinkers

I really have all the rights to hunt u down?????? Wut about we make a deal.....I get an outing with my jiju...ALONE and u don't get hunted down!😆 yes my dear pinky Dimple...u have all the rights...and yeh sure...why cant u...you can go for an outing with ur Jiju alone....without me...in ur dreams....😆😉😳

Okay then....don't quit it!

Agar itna miss karengai toh chodkai yun jaa rahe ho?... work ke vajhe seh yeh karna padh raha hein...varna i wont let it go liek this,,,

I'm a really open minded person! ofcourse I will love it!!!!! And that FF is gonna be made by u toh sawal hi nahin uthta ki main pasand na karoon! Thnks for ur advanced support....will let u knw once i end this and get to start my new one....

hey today im updating..so do read it...ok

I willl!!!!!!!!!!!! thts good...

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part-52:-
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Recap: - Kiran sends Vidya's bike from Switzerland. Where Vidya asks Sagar to go for a ride. Between Vidya sees Chinu and Shalu talking and confirms that they both are in Love. Sagar and Vidya go for a drive where they eat Pani Puri and ends up returning home.



Next day morning, Vidya opens her eyes and finds herself in the hands of Sagar, who is sleeping with a cute smile on his lips. She then turns to otherside only to find that it's already 8:00AM. She jumps up and rushes into the washroom with her clothes and towel. Vidya comes out of the washroom with in no time and picks her books, goes to Sagar, gives a peck on his forehead and rushes out of the room not disturbing Sagar.

Vidya gets down the stairs and finds Shalu is ready and Sdad and mom are at dining table. So she runs to them and takes their blessings and tells them that this is the first day of her University after marriage. Sdad and mom bless her and asks her to take the breakfast. Viday along with Shalu runs out of the house after taking a lite breakfast. Sdad goes to ask something but Vidya leaves by that time.

Sagar gets up and finds no Vidya beside him and looks at the clock. Its 9:30AM. He gets ready and goes down to have his breakfast. He finds everyone there at the dining table except Vidya, Shalu and Tushaar. His eyes start searching for Vidya….

Sagar: Good Morning everyone… (Smiles)
Everyone wishes back….
Sagar: (looks at his mom) maa…where is Vidya and Shalu. Tushaar bhi nazar nahin aaraha hein….
Smom: Vidya aur Shalu toh University chalegayethe….kya tujhe nahin pata????
Sagar: ohhh…..I totally forgot it…
Chinu: dadda….Tushaar is still sleeping. I don't want to disturb him.
Sagar: hmmmm …that's good. Fine juldi breakfast karo. We have to rush to office.
Chinu: sure dadda. Dadda vyse kal raath aap aur bhabhi nahin dikhayidiya….where were you?????
Sagar: (thinks all what happened and gives a smile as reply)
Sagar: papa….Vidya University kyse gayi….
Sdad: I was going to ask her beta…but she left by that time…
Sagar: (smiles) hmmm….i know how she would went to her University. Hein na uski bike…..

Sagar gets up from his chair goes to living room and picks his laptop to move. He gets something stuck in his mind, turns back and tells Chinu "we have to complete so much work today as I was not here for more than a week. I thought that Vidya would help us in work….." Surili jumps out with happiness reaches Sagar in two steps and tells him "sagar…I can help you out….."
Sagar: hmmm….no thankyou. I can do it.
Surili: arey….whats that Sagar. Come on I can do it
Sagar: surili please….
Surili: (changes her face as dull and disappointed)
Sagar: (starts walking towards the door…between)
Chinu: dadda….where's you jacket????
Sagar: (looks at himself) ohhh…..this is because of Vidya. Regularly she used to look after all these things.
Surili: (again kicks in...)I will get it for you. Don't worry…. (Rushes to his room….and gets a jacket for sagar)
Sagar: (makes his hand front) Thankyou…..

But Surili wont gives him and goes close to him and wear's it to him looking at him. Sagar is feeling soo irritated about her behaviour and moves away saying "Thankyou Surili…." And leaves the place. Surili is still standing there looking at Sagar. Tushaar, who is standing faraway at his room, is watching all this along with everyone else, gets shocked to see Surili there but gets normal and feels something fishy with Surili. Mauvah observes Tushaar and calls him. Surili listening to Mauvah slowly walks away from that place.

Sindoora goes to Surili's room and finds Surili sitting on the bed biting her nails with a bit tension on her face. She then enquires Surili but gets nothing from her. Sindoora then starts telling Surili that "she is getting a very good feeling on Vidya and she started liking her without her knowledge…" making Surili shocked. Surili tries to add fuel to fire about Vidya and ends up finding Sindoora leaving the room. Surili then talks to herself that "I won't let it happen didi. Sagar and all this property is mine….only mine…." Laughs evily. Tushaar overhears all this and gets to a conclusion.

Its University closing time, Vidya and Shalu are walking out of their class talking something about their class. They finally reach the steps, where they have to get down and have to walk for few minutes to reach the main gate. While they are getting down along with some other students, Vidya finds some girls are standing still looking somewhere with wide opened eyes and open jaws……Vidya feels a bit funny and tells Shalu…they both laughs, while Shalu pats Vidya on her shoulder and points out to the University gate with a big grin on her face.

Vidya turns to the side where Surili is pointing and figure outs that Some one is coming towards the steps on bike so fastly and manly ….and with in a second she finds out that its noneother than her handsome husband Sagar. She is just gazing at him like that for a moment and gets back as something stuck to her brain. Vidya turns to Shalu and finds Chinu standing beside her. Vidya makes a confused face but says "hi" to Chinu and asks Chinu that "Chinu bhayya….kya inko bike driving aata hein????!!!????"

Chinu: (smiles in a kidding manner) kya bath karrahe hein bhabhi. Dadda won so many bike riding races.
Vidya: (jaw drops ….looks at Sagar then at Chinu) soo….he know bike riding…
Chinu: bhabhi….same question…. (Smiles) I can say onething, dadda, after a longgg time driving the bike.
Shalu: didi…chalona….why you are questioning like that. See how many girls are 'fida' over jijaji……
Vidya: (looks around and finds girls who are eating Sagar with their eyes and looks at Shalu a bit angrily…..and talks to herself) par kal raath…..
Shlau: vyse math dekho didi….juldi chalo Varna koi ladki aapke patidev ko leka na jay…. (Smiles naughtly)
Vidya: (gives an angry look at Shalu and walks down to reach Sagar thinking about what Sagar said last night…)
Sagar: (looking at Vidya as a diamond is coming to him) ….hi Dear…
Vidya: (smiles) aap ko bike…..
Sagar: ssshhhhhhhhhhh….sit… (Sighs to her)
Vidya: humhare bike…????
Shalu: didi….yeh koi poochnewali bath hein??? Give the keys. I and Chinu will come on that bike (smiles)
Chinu: (gazing at Shalu where Vidya and Sagar observes)
Sagar: arey Vidya juldi karo….after going home Shalu have to leave to her room….did you foget????
Vidya: Oops…..fine….i really forgot about that…
Shalu & Chinu: (gets a bit dull and looks at eachother)

Sagar starts the bike, where Vidya sits on the back seat. Chinu and shalu also starts along with Sagar. They four reaches home and finds Mauvah and karthik are ready to leave. Sdad asks Sagar, Vidya, Shalu and Chinu to sit and have a talk to Mauvah and Karhik as they will be leaving with in 2 hours. Everyone are talking about Love and Marriage , there the topic comes to Chinu once where he denies that he is not having anyone. Chandra is looking at Tushaar and is waiting for his turn as she wants to listen to his love.

At last Tushaar got the chance; first he feels a bit tensed but gathers courage and starts…

Tushaar: hmm…I don't want to keep it in dark so, I will accept that I love someone…
Chandra: (jumps up) ohh…who's that lucky girl….?????
Tushaar: im feeling a bit tensed to reveal her name because voh aapke parivaarse judi hein…
Chandra: (gets soo excited) hmm…can't wait more Tushaar...
Everyone else is gazing at Tushaar with much suspence….
Tushaar: voh…voh….ladki….hmmm…she is Sagar's... (Pauses)

Everyone looks at Vidya and then at Tushaar. Between Smom and Surili gets some juice and snaks to all. Sindoora asks Tushaar in a forcing manner because she is expecting its 'Vidya' because they both are close friends and he also told that that girl is Sagar's…….. ; and want to make her a fool infront of everyone and want to throw her out on this reason, but somewhere in her heart there is a soft corner for Vidya and is thinking that Vidya cannot be Tushaar's love….."

Tushaar: (starts deliberately) voh….aur koi nahin balki….Sagar's friend…Surili.
Surili: (gets shocked and feels that the earth is grabbed under feet and coughs in tension while drinking juice) Tushaar…..what are you talking??????
Tushaar: she asked me not to reveal this soon but im unable to it Surili….im really sorry… (Smiles at Surili)
Sindoora: (talks to herself first) Thank God… (But suddenly thinks ….why iam feeling like this...)
Vidya: (who is surprised along with rest of the family members asks Tushaar) you didn't even tell me any day Tushaar!!!!!! When did you meet Surili and how all this happened????!!!! (Smiles in joy)
Tushaar: Vidya…..you know that I do business and for some projects I go abroad. And one time I went to US and there I met my sweet Surili and we both came so close.
Sagar: when did it happen??? Surili didn't tell anyone of our friends!!!!!
Tushaar: by that time your studies came to an end. They I told her that I will come back and take her India, but between she was not feeling to stay away from me….so she came to India… (Looks at Surili with a smile...)
Sdad: ohhh…that's great…..so any marriage proposals…????
Tushaar: yes Uncle. I talked to my parents and they are going to talk to Surili's Uncle, who brought her up after her parent's death in a flight crash.
Surili: (brokes into tears listening to Tushaar about her parents and runs to her room)

Everyone gets so moved and follows her but Tushaar asks them to relax and he can manage. He goes inside and consoles her. She then feels so stupid and weired about her attitude towards Tushaar and Sagar and asks apologies to Tushaar.



Precap: - Shalu gets a marriage proposal.


Hello mere pyaare doston aur behanon....aaj mein aayi hoon phirse aapko hasane keliyeh aur aapko entertain karne keliyeh...mari FF ke update ko leke...so here it is ....do comment it how you like it....would appreciate if u comment....love to hear ur comments....😳😛

Thanks for ur support....as i said im going to end this FF ...i got some blackmails and white mails for not to end ....but no way to go..as my work is going hectic....and im unable to participate inthe topics too....and dont worry...u ppl have a good news from me tht is....i will start a new FF soon and i selected name for it too....sooo will give u a surprise soon.....😃😳

love ya....its me...Nandoo😛

Edited by Nandoo - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
I was soooo close being in first!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hmmm...I wonder why tushar loves Surili....It just doesn't seeem...right!!!! i think kuch toh garbar hai!!!!!!! i wonder who is propposing to Shalu....hmmmmmmmm!!!!!!! it was a really long update and i loved it!!!!!!! Plz conitnue sooon!!!!!!!!!!
~ 😛 Ur pinky!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nandoooo.........
ur update was jus mind blowing i dnt hav any words to express it as it was so damn good....and extra long too
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
loved your update! it was so sweet! 😃

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