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Part-53:-
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Recap: - Vidya gets go know that Sagar knows bike riding. Tushaar reveals that he loves Surili making her shocked. When Tushaar talks about Surili's parents, she feels bad and runs to her room crying because they are dead. Tushaar consoles her and she apolozies him.



Surili controls herself and moves away from Tushaar and shouts at him why he did all this. And she tells him that she loves Sagar not him. Tushaar then tells "Surili….see…I know your attitude. Why you want to disturb Sagar's married life yaar. I know that you got attracted to him before then I entered your life…and when you see Sagar again….you started haunting him. You cannot make anything because Sagar deadly loves Vidya and only Vidya. First try to get that as soon as possible that would be good for you and everyone else too. Aur property ke bath, you yourself have more than enough, then why all this….haan???? ….think yourself. I won't tell you much than this. You are not a kid …." And leaves the room touching her head with much care.

Surili starts thiking to herself. Where Tushaar just goes to living room and finds everyone tensed. Tushaar tells them "Nothing to worry" then everyone feels better. Karthik tells Sdad that they will leave as its getting dark. So, everyone wishes them while Mauvah goes to Sagar and Vidya, smiles and slowly tells both "jab hum dubara aayenge, tab tum Dow se teen hona….thik hein…." Vidya gets so shy and blushes looking downwards where Sagar, the naughty, hits Vidya on her shoulder and winks, blushing…..

Between Shalu also comes with her luggage packed and says "bye" to all then goes to Vidya, hugs her and asks her to come to their room atleast once in a week. Vidya says "yes" and tells her to take care. Karthik and Mauvah leaves, with in a while Shalu also starts taking Sdad and mom's blessings.

Sdad: Shalu beta….raat hogayi hein. Kyse jaasakti …hmmm...Sagar tujhe chodke aayega. Thik hien.
Sahlu: No…..why to give risk to jijaji. I will go alone.
Chinu: Shalu!!!! Tum akele kyse jaasakthi ho….fine I will come to drop you. Ok
Sagar: (looks at Chinu, raises his eyebrows then looks at Vidya, smiles) Chinu…..im absolutely free yaar. I can go with Shalu.
Shalu: Jijaji….no problem. Aap aaraam kijiyeh. I will go.
Sagar: (smiles) thik hien. Carryon. Take care Shalu.

After Shalu leaves, Sagar goes to his room and searches for his nighware and wont finds it. He then starts calling "Vidya…vidya………….." where Vidya is talking to Sdad, mom and Sindoora about her exams which are pretty soon. Vidya, listens to Sagar, looks up towards their room, feels a bit embrassed and looks at Sdad and mom and Sindoora. Sdad and mom smiles and tells Vidya to go and see why Sagar is calling her. She then slowly leaves the place while Sindoora is observing Vidya.

Sdad then finds Tushaar coming out of his room with his bag and asks him "where is he going??? Tushaar then tells them that he has work and he has to leave and its must. Smom asks him to have dinner and then he can…before she completes Tushaar nods his head and smiles.

In Sagar and Vidya's room, Sagar got a bit irritated about Vidya because she is not responding to him and calls her more loudly "VIDYAAAAAAA……" Vidya jumps into the room rushing and says "haan ji…boliyeh…kya bath hein???"

Sagar: kahathi ab tak?? (Seriously)
Vidya: arey hum aarahe hein aur aap chillarahe hein…..
Sagar: mera nightware kaha hein??? (Still serious)
Vidya: hum pehanethe…. (Looks at Sagar directly)
Sagar: (changes his expression to bit confusion then smiles…) Vidya…tumbhi na..
Vidya: hana….humbhi….kya hein??? (Asks naughtly)
Sagar: tumbhi….bohot….sheraanho…

Sagar is getting closer and closer to Vidya, where Vidya is just standing still. He puts his arms around her waist and starts leaning on her wehre he feels Vidya's body. Vidya smiles and pushes him away and runs from his saying "aajse yeh sab bandh…." Sagar, who is chasing her catches her hand and pulls her to him, puts his hand on her face, sensing her eyes, nose, and lips asks "why????? Kya hua aajse????" Vidya in a trance tells him that "My exams are coming and I have to prepare …….." Sagar touches her lips and wishpers "bass itnise bath…..koi bath nahin….i will see" and bites her lower lip. Vidya pushes him away shouting in pain "Ouch…..!!! What you will see???!!! I getting an E (fail) grade"

Sagar: yaar….kyse bathe karti ho….. (Going towards Vidya)

"SAGAR…………VIDYA………" Sindoora calling from downstairs. Both Sagar and Vidya respond at a time "Coming…!" looks at eachother smiles. After 10 minutes, both Sagar and Viyda gets down. Then have their dinner and sits there for a while. Then, Tushaar says "bye" to sagar and Vidya as he has important work. Sagar and Vidya first gets disappointed but controls themselves and gives send off to him. While leaving Tushaar goes to Surili and tells her slowly "Bye Surili. Just think what I told. Its all upto you. And you know where I live, but keep this with you" handovers Surili his visitng card and leaves.

Chinu is driving the car withour a word; there is an awkward silence between Chinu and Shalu. Breaking that silence, car gets a sharp break infront of Shalu's room. Shalu looks outside and then looks at Chinu , she is having tears in her eyes, but she is controlling them not to comeout of her eyelash/…..Shalu get down's the car and takes her luggage out and looks at Chinu, who is standing beside the car. She takes a few steps, but stops' walking, turns back, looks at Chinu, runs to him and hugs him tightly. Chinu, who is surprised yet sad holds her in his arms and feels that Shalu is sobbing. He puts his hand on her head, pulls away, looks into her teary eyes and wipes her tears which are running from her rose colored cheeks and kisses on her eyes sayin "kabhi yesa math rona. Mein samjh saktha hoon ture dil ke jasbaath…I will talk to papa tomorrow. Ok. Don't worry and now cheer up …"

Shlau gives a cure smile and then she observes herself that she is still hugging him, she suddenly moves back, sets herself right, looks around and feels a bit embrassed . She then looks into Chinu's eyes, smiles with shyness and runs taking her luggage from there. Chinu looks at her till he can see smiles and goes back to his car and starts to leave. Just to see Shalu for once, he raises his head towards her room, but finds no Shalu there , gets disappointed and turns her car, where he finds someone is standing on the terrus and looks that way and finds his sweet Shalu giving him a cure Smile waving her hand. Chinu gives her a flying kiss and drives away where Shalu catches his kiss and keeps it safe in her heart.

Next day mornig, while Chinu and Sagar are making their way to office, Sdad talks on phone "haan ji…Shalu keliyeh bohot acha rishtha aaya hein…" Chinu overhears that and feels utterly collapsed. But because of Sagar's force he goes to office yet thinking about Shalu. He thinks to call Shalu, picks the phone, and dials her number….

Phone is ringing aloud, after a while, picks the call and says "helloo" otherside… "Surili beta….kysi ho???"
Surili: Uncleeeeeeeeeeeee (jumps with happiness) mein thik hoon…aap kyese hein?
Uncle: im very fine beta. I have news for you.
Surili: yes Uncle…tell me…
Uncle: tum abhi Switzerland lautaaoo beta. You have to sign on some documents to get your dad's property.
Surili: what??!!!! No Uncle. I cannot come. You know that Sagar…
Uncle: (interrupts her) I just don't want to listen anything. You are coming, that's it.
Surili: Uncle… (He hangs up the phone)

Surili goes to Sdad and tells him about the call and gets his permission to leave Switzerland. Sdad asks her to wait till Sagar and Vidya comes home, but she won't listen and starts to airport. Sagar and Vidya returns home and get to know that Surili is leaving Switzerland and she left to airport too. Vidya asks Sdad "how come they allowed her to go like that…?" While Sagar also feels the same. Then, they both rush to airport and finds a dull and sad Surili sitting in the Visitor's launge. They runs to her and hugs her and asks her "why are you leaving like this????!!!" with tears. While, the announcement comes that "All the passengers are requested to come to security check for Switzerland"…. Sagar and Vidya along with Surili listens to it and Sagar, Vidya are holding her tight not to leave but Surili , who is in a surprised state to see Sagar and Vidya like that ….and moves on……



Precap: - Vidya is informed that she is pregnant.

Hello doston....first of all soo sorry for updating it soo late...hmm mujhetoh aadat padgayi hein sorry bolneka...ahha...kya karoon yaaron...i dont want to say sorry to my frnds but kehna padh raha hein ....coz of my work and office and hectic hours...im unable to write it...fine

im going to put a fullstop soon....i mean very soon...i hope u ppl will get just 2 or 3 more parts and then its just end....mere DIL KE JASBAATh e bhi end....😭😭 but but but....i have a very special and surprise to you ppl in the last part...hope u will like it....i jsut have a brief of story in my head and will put it down soon and it will come infront of u guys very soon too..😳😉

soo plsss plss do comment as i love to hear and appreciate it....so plss take some time and comment it...😳😃

love ya...Nandoo😛

Edited by Nandoo - 17 years ago
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Veryvery Nicee update. 👏 . I loveeeeee it.. 😃
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hi nandoo..im new here..but im alredy read ur ff frm d first part..mind blowing..thanks for the update yaar.. 😛
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Originally posted by: Saniiii

Veryvery Nicee update. 👏 . I loveeeeee it.. 😃

awwwwwwww Thanks a million dear Kajol....i love your name ...its as cute as Kajol....😳😃

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Originally posted by: LoveAmarDivya

hi nandoo..im new here..but im alredy read ur ff frm d first part..mind blowing..thanks for the update yaar.. 😛

Hi Anba...........(feeling like calling you Anbuuuu dear) 😳

Ohhhh Really....sooo you are also one of the silent reader's of my FF....thnq soo much dear...for ur beautiful comments....love them....😃

by the way a warm welcome to you dear...have a nice time inthe forum and hope we will rock together....😛

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(bak to eat ur juicy brain 😆 )OMG.....(finally made time to comment...my sister is taking care and i put my nephew to sleep...and niece is by her mummy 😳 as she is awake nw)ur update was just mind blowing Nandoo...i wish i was as talented as u....got to admit ur writing skill is a gift from god 😃....and ur precap is soo damn intresting...dnt torture me for too long and please countinue soon... 👏 👏 👏
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thanks nandoo...u can call me anbu if u want ....btw im rely luv ur ff..its rely nice... 😉
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Originally posted by: narmz

(bak to eat ur juicy brain 😆 )OMG.....(finally made time to comment...my sister is taking care and i put my nephew to sleep...and niece is by her mummy 😳 as she is awake nw)ur update was just mind blowing Nandoo...i wish i was as talented as u....got to admit ur writing skill is a gift from god 😃....and ur precap is soo damn intresting...dnt torture me for too long and please countinue soon... 👏 👏 👏

arey yaar bas 5 line mein tu apne dil ke saare jasbaathon ko mere saamne rakhli.....great....😳

ohhh soo ur sweet babies are annoying you...how sweet..i will give thm chocolates and sweets whn i meet thm coz they are doing the thing which i cannt...ahah😆😉

awwwwwwwwww Thanks a trillion dear...love you soo much...thnq for ur precious comments...pata nahin mujhme voh baath hein ki nahin balki u have all the talent how to appreciate others about their hard work....thts a very nice thing in u....thts why i love my Narmu...😳😃

sure dear...will update soon once i give ur update .....ok...aur bass apkeliyeh aur 2 ya 3 updates hi milega...

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